Tumse door...Geet...

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Tumse door rehne ko dil manta tou nhi hai,
per dhire dhire is manne lagi hu,

tumhare paas waqt nhi hai merra haal puchne ka,
isiliye ab apna haal main sabse chhupane lagi hu,

jab paas the tou zindgi ka rang khubsurat tha,
tum bin zindgi ko yado se behelane lagi hu,

merri ankho mein basa hai sirrf chehra tumhara,
ab tou apne aaine se bhi nazare churane lagi hu,

ansu merre bahenge tou dard tumhe bhi hoga,
hotho pe muskan liye mhbt ki rasam nibhane lagi hu,

ye zamane k ghum merri jaan lene pe tule hain,
per terri khushi ki khaatir har ghum se khudko bachane lagi hu,

jitna tu mujhse door door jane laga hai aajkal,
hoke majbur dil k hatho main terre utna kareeb aane lagi hu.........
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«Reply #1 on: March 02, 2011, 11:05:01 AM »
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bht khoob geet ji....
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«Reply #2 on: March 02, 2011, 11:44:27 AM »
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Geet:::
itni pyar bhari nagme na likho aap--
mujhe rona aata hai.
kuch bhool chuke ehsaaho ki chingaari bhadak utni hai.
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mai sirf daad dene ko nhi parh sakta aapke post ko.
feel hota hai yar.
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«Reply #3 on: March 02, 2011, 05:58:04 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Geetji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: March 02, 2011, 09:19:26 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya priya ji,shihab ji n khwaish ji...
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«Reply #5 on: March 02, 2011, 09:20:29 PM »
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Geet:::
itni pyar bhari nagme na likho aap--
mujhe rona aata hai.
kuch bhool chuke ehsaaho ki chingaari bhadak utni hai.
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mai sirf daad dene ko nhi parh sakta aapke post ko.
feel hota hai yar.


Maafi chahungi nirala ji apka dil dukhane k irade se nhi likti main per kya karu likhna bhi tou chhod nhi sakti main..bahut shukriya sath dene ka..Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: March 02, 2011, 10:34:56 PM »
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likhna choddna bhimat aap.
aapka post parh ke mai bhi kuch dard bhara likh daalta hun Usual Smile
i love ur poetry--
keep it up dear.
be happy always
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likhna choddna bhimat aap.
aapka post parh ke mai bhi kuch dard bhara likh daalta hun Usual Smile
i love ur poetry--
keep it up dear.
be happy always

Bahut bahut shukriya nirala ji..
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«Reply #8 on: March 02, 2011, 11:59:32 PM »
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u r most welcome ji
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«Reply #10 on: March 03, 2011, 12:37:43 AM »
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Bahut Khub Geet Ji
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Bohat Khoob Ji
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«Reply #12 on: March 03, 2011, 10:39:24 AM »
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bahut khub geet........
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aapki kavitayen ek se badhkar ek  hai

aapki tareef karne ki liye baatein kaha se dhoondu ??

bahut accha hai  icon_flower  Applause Applause
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