Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!

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Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!
Aur, aab-e-hayaat-e-wasl saath laayengey!!
Wa'adey aur bhi kiye they: na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Kis ko maaloom thaa roothheyngey, chaley jaayeyngey?
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«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2008, 07:52:49 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: September 27, 2008, 01:19:10 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: September 27, 2008, 03:35:38 AM »
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anjaan dharkan ji / Celmira ji,
Shukruyah!
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«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2008, 01:57:41 PM »
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Abd Sb. Adaab
Wah kia jiddat paida ki hai
Jab aap ko AAbe hayaat e wasl mil gaya phir kia shikwa woh aayein ,ya bhad chulhe mein jain ,ya wade se muker jain,bas aapne aik ghoont pi liya aur mast. Un ney ki zarurat kahan rahi

mashallah bahut khoob


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«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2008, 03:09:38 PM »
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javedarshad ji,
Shukriyaa bandah nawaazee key liye!
Aap jaisey khushmizaaj dost hain, tabhi to, yeh 'Abd', lagaataar ishq-e-aab-e-nosh hi peetaa hai, may ki zaroorat hi naheen parhtee! Janaab! 'ublaa paanee' peeney sey hi 'abd' key muttahidah anaasir ko beykhudee mein jeeney jaisaa suroor-e-nashah rahtaa hai, to, eik-aadh jaam key ba'ad kyaa hogaa, andaaz hi lagaayaa jaa saktaa hai!! Khushaamdeed!
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«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2008, 07:53:14 PM »
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Nawazish aap ki
Main nahin samajh saka aap kia kahna chah rahe hain
 shayad aap likhne ke baad padhte nahin hain
doosri baat lafzoon ki tajdeed ki bhi koi tarkeeb hooti hai werna sab be maa'na wa ghair munasib ho jate hain ab main zubaan ki sirf-o-nahu mein gaya to shayad ghalat ho ga , ummeed hai aap isko taskeen aur shaur ke ujale mein samajhne ki koshish fermain gay to shaid nacheez ka nukta aayan ho jaye

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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2008, 09:32:40 PM »
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Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!
Aur, aab-e-hayaat-e-wasl saath laayengey!!
Wa'adey aur bhi kiye they: na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Kis ko maaloom thaa roothheyngey, chaley jaayeyngey?
                                - abd bundeli
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Abd Sb. Adaab
Wah kia jiddat paida ki hai
Jab aap ko AAbe hayaat e wasl mil gaya phir kia shikwa woh aayein ,ya bhad chulhe mein jain ,ya wade se muker jain,bas aapne aik ghoont pi liya aur mast. Un ney ki zarurat kahan rahi

mashallah bahut khoob




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Un key ,'aaney', aur 'aab-e-hayaat-e-wasl' saath laaney ki baat thee! Aap ney, "Jab aap ko AAbe hayaat e wasl mil gaya phir kia shikwa woh aayein ,ya bhad chulhe mein jain ,ya wade se muker jain,bas aapne aik ghoont pi liya aur mast." kahaan sey paa liyaa? Wa'adah thaa: woh aaye to,par roothh kar chaley gaye! 'Eik ghoont' peenaa huaa hi kahaan? Aap ney, shaayad meyraa koyee doosraa kalaam padhha hogaa, par 'comments' is par dey diye hain. Dobaarah padhhney ki takleef gawaarah kareyngey, to, baat saaf ho jayegee!
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