Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!:Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

abdbundeli

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Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!
Aur, aab-e-hayaat-e-wasl saath laayengey!!
Wa'adey aur bhi kiye they: na jaaney kyaa-kyaa?
Kis ko maaloom thaa roothheyngey, chaley jaayeyngey?
- abd bundeli


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Re: Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!

«Reply #1 on: September 24, 2008, 02:22:49 PM »

waah! bahot khoob!


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Talat

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Re: Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!

«Reply #2 on: September 26, 2008, 07:49:10 PM »

Bohot Khoob Abd Ji


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abdbundeli

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Re: Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!

«Reply #3 on: September 26, 2008, 10:05:38 PM »

anjaan dharkan ji / Celmira ji,
Shukruyah!
- abd bundeli


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Re: Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!

«Reply #4 on: September 27, 2008, 08:27:41 AM »

Abd Sb. Adaab
Wah kia jiddat paida ki hai
Jab aap ko AAbe hayaat e wasl mil gaya phir kia shikwa woh aayein ,ya bhad chulhe mein jain ,ya wade se muker jain,bas aapne aik ghoont pi liya aur mast. Un ney ki zarurat kahan rahi

mashallah bahut khoob

javed


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abdbundeli

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Re: Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!

«Reply #5 on: September 27, 2008, 09:39:38 AM »

javedarshad ji,
Shukriyaa bandah nawaazee key liye!
Aap jaisey khushmizaaj dost hain, tabhi to, yeh 'Abd', lagaataar ishq-e-aab-e-nosh hi peetaa hai, may ki zaroorat hi naheen parhtee! Janaab! 'ublaa paanee' peeney sey hi 'abd' key muttahidah anaasir ko beykhudee mein jeeney jaisaa suroor-e-nashah rahtaa hai, to, eik-aadh jaam key ba'ad kyaa hogaa, andaaz hi lagaayaa jaa saktaa hai!! Khushaamdeed!
- abd bundeli


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javedarshad

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Re: Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!

«Reply #6 on: September 27, 2008, 02:23:14 PM »

abd Sb

Nawazish aap ki
Main nahin samajh saka aap kia kahna chah rahe hain
shayad aap likhne ke baad padhte nahin hain
doosri baat lafzoon ki tajdeed ki bhi koi tarkeeb hooti hai werna sab be maa'na wa ghair munasib ho jate hain ab main zubaan ki sirf-o-nahu mein gaya to shayad ghalat ho ga , ummeed hai aap isko taskeen aur shaur ke ujale mein samajhne ki koshish fermain gay to shaid nacheez ka nukta aayan ho jaye

basad shukria

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Re: Un ney, ham sey kahaa thaa: wa'adah hai, aayengey!

«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2008, 04:02:40 PM »

Quote from: abdbundeli on September 24, 2008, 02:09:17 PM

Janaab-e-aali,
Aap ne yeh farmayaa thaa:

Quote from: javedarshad on September 27, 2008, 08:27:41 AM

Un key ,'aaney', aur 'aab-e-hayaat-e-wasl' saath laaney ki baat thee! Aap ney, "Jab aap ko AAbe hayaat e wasl mil gaya phir kia shikwa woh aayein ,ya bhad chulhe mein jain ,ya wade se muker jain,bas aapne aik ghoont pi liya aur mast." kahaan sey paa liyaa? Wa'adah thaa: woh aaye to,par roothh kar chaley gaye! 'Eik ghoont' peenaa huaa hi kahaan? Aap ney, shaayad meyraa koyee doosraa kalaam padhha hogaa, par 'comments' is par dey diye hain. Dobaarah padhhney ki takleef gawaarah kareyngey, to, baat saaf ho jayegee!
- abd bundeli


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