Unke bina

by Noorafza on November 29, 2010, 07:45:13 PM
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Yaadon mein unki hum jal rahe hain
Gile, shikhwe kuch ab bhi pal rahe hain
Takdeer ne humara saath na diya
Khumaar-e-gum mein din dhal rahe hain...

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«Reply #1 on: November 29, 2010, 08:40:29 PM »
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nice one
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«Reply #2 on: November 29, 2010, 09:12:34 PM »
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Bahut khoob Noora ji.dil ko chu gayi aapke kavita.great creation.excellent icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: November 30, 2010, 03:42:09 AM »
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Azeem ji, mujhe khushi hui ki aapko meri rachna pasand aayi.

Madhuweshji, Mujhe khushi hui ki mera kalam aapke dil tak pahunch saka.
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«Reply #4 on: November 30, 2010, 04:14:11 AM »
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takdeer ko koi dosh na de
      tskdeer hi ne to kabi hume milaya tha!!!
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baut umda Noor ji...likhte rahiye
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«Reply #5 on: November 30, 2010, 05:48:03 AM »
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bht khub noorafa ji...
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«Reply #6 on: December 03, 2010, 07:58:10 PM »
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@ Killbill: taqkeer nahin toh kisko dosh dein?

@Kasak and Killbill: mujhe bahut khushi hui ki aapko mera kalm pasand aaya.

Thankyou for all your love and support everyone!
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«Reply #7 on: December 04, 2010, 01:48:41 AM »
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Noor ji.....
chalo aap mujhe dosh de do
mai dosh lene me expert hu:)
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«Reply #8 on: December 04, 2010, 05:55:38 AM »
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achha likha he apne noor ji..

dhers aari daad~
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«Reply #9 on: December 05, 2010, 09:23:24 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Noor Ji
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