तल्खियाँ ऐसी होंगी - By "Betaab".

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तल्खियाँ ऐसी होंगी ये सोचा न था,
वो मेरे पास होकर भी दूर ही था.

फूलों सा नाज़ुक नज़र आता था वो,
मगर छुआ तो पत्थर सा कठोर था.

अब किन आँखों से उसको निहारा करूं,
उसकी शख्शियत में तो हर जगह मोड़ था.

याद करके उसको खुद को क्यों तकलीफ दूँ,
वो नासमझ तो मेरा गुजरा हुआ कल था.
 

 Composed by D K Saxena "Betaab".
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Waah waah waah kyaa baat hai Betaab Sahib.
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बहुत खूब बेताब साहिब आप अपनी लिखी हुई शायरी कैसे कलर करते है हमे भी बता दीजिये मै भी अपनी शायरी में कलर भरना चाहता हूँ  icon_flower icon_flower वे क्या लिखना चाहती है,मुझे सब कुछ पता है,पर उनकी लिखावट ही उनकी पहचान होगी = राम कृष्ण रस्तोगी
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on September 12, 2014, 03:26:05 PM
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बहुत खूब बेताब साहिब आप अपनी लिखी हुई शायरी कैसे कलर करते है हमे भी बता दीजिये मै भी अपनी शायरी में कलर भरना चाहता हूँ  icon_flower icon_flower वे क्या लिखना चाहती है,मुझे सब कुछ पता है,पर उनकी लिखावट ही उनकी पहचान होगी = राम कृष्ण रस्तोगी

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