हमीं बस थे कहीं भी वो नहीं था (ghazal)

by aarzoo-e-arjun on May 10, 2016, 12:38:41 PM
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ग़ज़ल
बहर -  1222    1222     122
बहर - मुफाईलुन, मुफाईलुन, फऊलुंन
काफ़िया ( 'ओ' स्वर )
रदीफ़ ( नहीं था )
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हमीं बस थे कहीं भी वो नहीं था
मेरी चाहत के काबिल वो नहीं था

जिसे सारी उमर कहते थे अपना
रहे  हम ग़ैर अपना वो नहीं था

किसे कहते यहाँ पर दर्द दिल का
किसी पे अब यकीं दिल को नहीं था

रहे बिखरे यहाँ पर हम फ़िसल के
कभी ख़ुद को समेटा जो नहीं था

कभी तोडा कभी उसने बनाया
खिलौना पास खेलने को नहीं था

बुरा कहते नहीं हम 'आरज़ू' को
बुरे थे हम बुरा पर वो नहीं था


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hamee bas the kaheen bhi vo nahi tha
meri chahat ke kabil vo nahi tha

jise sari umar kahte the apna
rahe hum gair apna vo nahi tha

kise kahte yahan par dard dil ka
kisi pe ab yakeen dil ko nahi tha

rahe bikhre yahan par hum fisal ke
kabhi khud ko sameta jo nahi tha

kabhi toda kabhi usne banaya
khilona paas khelne ko nahi tha

bura kahte nahi hum aarzoo ko
bure the hum bura par vo nahi tha


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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2016, 01:46:45 PM »
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kise kahte yahan par dard dil ka
kisi pe ab yakeen dil ko nahi tha

rahe bikhre yahan par hum fisal ke
kabhi khud ko sameta jo nahi tha

kabhi toda kabhi usne banaya
khilona paas khelne ko nahi tha
(khilona paas uske jo nahi tha)
(khilona khelne usko nahi tha) Usual Smile

Bahot khooooob waaaah  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2016, 02:36:34 PM »
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Rustam g aapki salaah sir mathe par lekin yeh salaah meri bahr se baahr hai...  Kirpa karke bahar ko janch kar slaah de... 

Bahar ya matra  sabse upar likhi hai...  Digit me.
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2016, 07:15:17 PM »
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waah bahut umdah.
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«Reply #4 on: May 11, 2016, 05:16:36 AM »
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Bahut khoob...
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