Aa kajal se tere naina saja du- Designed and written -Abhi

by AbhiTamrakar on August 05, 2010, 06:59:54 AM

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Re: Aa kajal se tere naina saja du- Designed and written -Abhi

«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2010, 07:30:31 AM »

Wah wah Abhi ji mindblowing creation.excellent.bahut pasand aayi aapke kavita.keep it up. icon_salut


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Re: Aa kajal se tere naina saja du- Designed and written -Abhi

«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2010, 08:04:53 AM »

dhayawad ji koshish karuga hamesha yuihi pasand aaye~


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Re: Aa kajal se tere naina saja du- Designed and written -Abhi

«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2010, 08:11:05 AM »

good poem Tamrakar-ji....

Ye mausam baarish ka dekho hai bada beraham
Dhul gya kajal jo naino me sajaya tha tune sanam

Laut aa jaldi kee tujhe hai meri kasam
Chain nahi lene deta ab ye beri mausam

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Re: Aa kajal se tere naina saja du- Designed and written -Abhi

«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2010, 08:17:53 AM »

aji sirf ABHI kehege to achha lagega..

dost aksar yahi kehte he..

mausam ka mohabbat par kya zor chalta he
dil to dil he mausam nahi jo badalta he
yu shikwa na rakho mre pyar par hamdam mere
bahut najuk he dil mera badi zor se dhadakta he~


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Re: Aa kajal se tere naina saja du- Designed and written -Abhi

«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2010, 08:18:33 AM »

wah abhi kya likha hai yaar... good going..


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Re: Aa kajal se tere naina saja du- Designed and written -Abhi

«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2010, 08:27:11 AM »

shukriya dost~


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Re: Aa kajal se tere naina saja du- Designed and written -Abhi

«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2010, 09:07:10 AM »

bahut khoob Abhi ji... !!!


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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2010, 09:12:44 AM »

shukriya klaskar ji


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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2010, 12:03:48 PM »

Jo tum ko achhee lagey wahee baat kahenge
Dost kaha hai tou abhi se ab ABHI kahenge....

Na joor mausam pe naa dil pe mera chalta hai
Shikwa nahi par kya karu ye dil machalta hai

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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2010, 05:41:17 PM »

Very nice thought's and expression Abhi jee..... Keep It Up so nice. Applause

Meri mehbooba bhi ajeeb kashmaksh me rahti hai
Jab bhi milti hai mujhse dosti ki duhai deti hai


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Re: Aa kajal se tere naina saja du- Designed and written -Abhi

«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2010, 07:05:40 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on August 05, 2010, 12:03:48 PM

Jo tum ko achhee lagey wahee baat kahenge
Dost kaha hai tou abhi se ab ABHI kahenge....

Na joor mausam pe naa dil pe mera chalta hai
Shikwa nahi par kya karu ye dil machalta hai

dilo ke machalne ko mohabbat nhai kehete
zor kahan chala he ji kisi ka dil par
mausam ke badalne ko fiza ka shikwa nahi kehete


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Re: Aa kajal se tere naina saja du- Designed and written -Abhi

«Reply #13 on: August 06, 2010, 07:08:03 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 05, 2010, 05:41:17 PM

Very nice thought's and expression Abhi jee..... Keep It Up so nice. Applause

Meri mehbooba bhi ajeeb kashmaksh me rahti hai
Jab bhi milti hai mujhse dosti ki duhai deti hai

shukriya parwaaz ji..

mujhse duniya walon asmaan ki bat na karo
ek adna sa banda hu khuda ka parwaaz ki bat na karo~


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«Reply #14 on: August 04, 2011, 08:56:17 AM »

Quote from: ParwaaZ on August 05, 2010, 05:41:17 PM

Very nice thought's and expression Abhi jee..... Keep It Up so nice. Applause

Meri mehbooba bhi ajeeb kashmaksh me rahti hai
Jab bhi milti hai mujhse dosti ki duhai deti hai

waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahut khoob parwaaz sahab

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