-----/// Aaj hawaaon ka humse kuch keh jaana huwa /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on April 19, 2012, 04:23:30 PM
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aaj hawaaon ka behte behte humse kuch keh jaana huwa,
arse baad mere dil ka fir se tadap ke reh jaana huwa,

aaj ek udte hue chunri ne dhaka aake mere chehre ko,
aur fir hamaari pehli mulaaquat ka yaad aajaana huwa,

kuch isi tarha se miley the wo humse kuch saal pehle,
us mulaaquat me hi mere dil ka paagal ho jaana huwa,

leke unka haath apne haathon me hum baitha karte the,
jaane kyun apne haathon ko dekh mera muskuraana huwa,

ye hawaayein jaise chhoo ke aayi hon aaj unka aanchal,
fir se mera unke jism ki khushboo se mehek jaana huwa,

bhulaane ki bahut koshish karte hain hum jin yaadon ko,
aaj fir se hawaaon ke saath un yaadon ka aa jaana huwa,

ab tak unki tasveer bhi kahin kisi kitaab me chhipi thi,
jaise unka tasveer se nikal ke mere saamne aajaana huwa,

laal ek gulaab unhone diya tha humein pyaar ke naam pe,
jaane kaise us sukhe gulaab ka fir se mehek jaana huwa,

ehsaas hai humein is baat ka ki wo hamaari nahi hain ab,
par jaane kyun fir se unki yaadon me guum ho jaana huwa,

aaj behti hui hawaaon ka jab humein chhoo ke jaana huwa,
samundar me yaadon ke hamaaraa fir se doob jaana huwa...


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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2012, 07:07:14 PM »
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Kya baat hai Hriday ji.. yadon ko kya sameta hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:badhaai ho   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2012, 07:30:25 PM »
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aaj hawaaon ka behte behte humse kuch keh jaana huwa,
arse baad mere dil ka fir se tadap ke reh jaana huwa,

aaj ek udte hue aanchal ne dhaka aake mere chehre ko,
aur fir hamaari pehli mulaaquat ka yaad aajaana huwa,

kuch isi tarha se miley to wo humse kuch saal pehle,
us mulaaquat me hi mere dil ka paagal ho jaana huwa,

leke unka haath apne haathon me hum baitha karte the,
jaane kyun apne haathon ko dekh mera muskuraana huwa,

ye hawaayein jaise chhoo ke aayi hon aaj unka aanchal,
fir se mera unke jism ki khushboo se mehek jaana huwa,

bhulaane ki bahut koshish karte hain hum jin yaadon ko,
aaj fir se hawaaon ke saath un yaadon ka aa jaana huwa,

ab tak unki tasveer bhi kahin kisi kitaab me chhipi thi,
jaise unka tasveer se nikal ke mere saamne aajaana huwa,

laal ek gulaab unhone diya tha humein pyaar ke naam pe,
jaane kaise us sukhe gulaab ka fir se mehek jaana huwa,

ehsaas hai humein is baat ka ki wo hamaari nahi hain ab,
par jaane kyun fir se unki yaadon me guum ho jaana huwa,

aaj behti hui hawaaon ka jab humein chhoo ke jaana huwa,
samundar me yaadon ke hamaaraa fir se doob jaana huwa...


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Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley bahut khoob Hriday ji ... dil ko choo gaye jazbaat aapke , aapke khayalon ka yun bhi mehkaana huwa ...
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2012, 07:31:34 PM »
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Kapil Jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH janab kia baat hai ... behad khoobsurat
ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai janab... kia kahne waaH bahut
khoob... Usual Smile

Kafi dilkash aur khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai is kalaam par
humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile    

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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2012, 03:54:29 AM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2012, 04:43:55 AM »
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kuch adhure pal yaad aa gaye aapki kavita se hriday ji nice feelings and expressions
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2012, 10:10:29 AM »
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awesome awesome hriday jiii....daad....Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2012, 10:35:46 AM »
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Wah wah behtareen, lajawwab  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2012, 12:30:58 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa I_W ji....!!!

Kya baat hai Hriday ji.. yadon ko kya sameta hai aapne.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley badhaai ho   Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 20, 2012, 06:24:56 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Anush ji....!!!

Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley bahut khoob Hriday ji ... dil ko choo gaye jazbaat aapke , aapke khayalon ka yun bhi mehkaana huwa ...
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«Reply #10 on: April 23, 2012, 06:28:19 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Parwaaz ji... main tahe dil se aapka shukriyaa adaa karta hoon jo aapne meri is koshish ko waqt diya, padha aur pasand kiya ... bahut bahut shukriyaa....!!!

Kapil Jee Aadaab!


WaaH waaH waaH janab kia baat hai ... behad khoobsurat
ahsaas O khayaal kahe hai janab... kia kahne waaH bahut
khoob... Usual Smile

Kafi dilkash aur khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai is kalaam par
humari dheroN daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile   


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«Reply #11 on: April 27, 2012, 06:49:23 PM »
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thanks a lot....!!!

beautiful
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«Reply #12 on: April 27, 2012, 06:52:16 PM »
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thanks a lot Heer ji.... thank you soooooooo much....!!!

kuch adhure pal yaad aa gaye aapki kavita se hriday ji nice feelings and expressions
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«Reply #13 on: April 27, 2012, 06:52:49 PM »
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aaj hawaaon ka behte behte humse kuch keh jaana huwa,
arse baad mere dil ka fir se tadap ke reh jaana huwa,

aaj ek udte hue chunri ne dhaka aake mere chehre ko,
aur fir hamaari pehli mulaaquat ka yaad aajaana huwa,

kuch isi tarha se miley the wo humse kuch saal pehle,
us mulaaquat me hi mere dil ka paagal ho jaana huwa,

leke unka haath apne haathon me hum baitha karte the,
jaane kyun apne haathon ko dekh mera muskuraana huwa,

ye hawaayein jaise chhoo ke aayi hon aaj unka aanchal,
fir se mera unke jism ki khushboo se mehek jaana huwa,

bhulaane ki bahut koshish karte hain hum jin yaadon ko,
aaj fir se hawaaon ke saath un yaadon ka aa jaana huwa,

ab tak unki tasveer bhi kahin kisi kitaab me chhipi thi,
jaise unka tasveer se nikal ke mere saamne aajaana huwa,

laal ek gulaab unhone diya tha humein pyaar ke naam pe,
jaane kaise us sukhe gulaab ka fir se mehek jaana huwa,

ehsaas hai humein is baat ka ki wo hamaari nahi hain ab,
par jaane kyun fir se unki yaadon me guum ho jaana huwa,

aaj behti hui hawaaon ka jab humein chhoo ke jaana huwa,
samundar me yaadon ke hamaaraa fir se doob jaana huwa...


*****HRIDAY*****


very nice...........!
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«Reply #14 on: April 27, 2012, 07:00:22 PM »
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thank you sooooo much Dolly ji.....!!!

awesome awesome hriday jiii....daad....Usual Smile
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