-----/// Jabse tumhaari galiyon se mera aana jaana huwa /// ----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on March 20, 2012, 03:54:08 PM
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jabse tumhaari galiyon se mera aana jaana huwa,
to kehne lage log dekho ek aur deewaana huwa,

humein to maloom hi nahi deewangi kya hoti hai,
par har baar tumko dekh mera thahar jaana huwa,

jab bhi nikalti ho tum saj sawarke apne gharse,
mere paagal dil ka har baar machal jaana huwa,

khuli julfon me tumhe dekha hai humne kai baar,
lagaa jaise ghane baadalon ka baras jaana huwa,

shabnami honth tumhaare jaise ho maye ke pyaale,
unhe dekh har baar mera nashe me doob jaana huwa,

baahon me bharne ki tumhe hai khwaaish hamaari,
par is khwaish ka seene me dafan ho jaana huwa,

kahaan tum mahalon ki raani aur main ek tinka,
bas tumhe dekh kar hi dil ka bahal jaana huwa,

hum to ye soch ke chal lete hain ki tum dikh jao,
par humein dekh tumhaara har baar palat jaana huwa,

jabse tumhaari galiyon se mera aana jaana huwa,
tumhe dekh roz ek naye ghazal ka ban jaana huwa...


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«Reply #1 on: March 20, 2012, 08:09:37 PM »
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waah Hriday sahab--aap to bilkul Dil ka likhte hain Usual Smile
hume aapki khumaar par likhi kalaam bht pasand aane lagi hai--
baht saadgi hai aapke shabdon me--
masumiyat se kitni saari Dil ki baaten keh jate hain aap.

aapko padhna sach me baht bhata hai Usual Smile
janaab Hriday ji aapko iss Sarfire ki scahe Dil se daad

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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«Reply #2 on: March 21, 2012, 03:52:09 AM »
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waah waah Hriday ji khoob kahaa aapne
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«Reply #3 on: March 21, 2012, 04:08:43 AM »
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bahut khoob .
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«Reply #4 on: March 21, 2012, 01:16:54 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya janaab... aapne apna keemti waqt diya, ise padha aur saraha... aapka main tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon.... thank you soooo much.... yunhi aap logon ka saath milta raha to likhne me mann laga rahega ... !!!

waah Hriday sahab--aap to bilkul Dil ka likhte hain Usual Smile
hume aapki khumaar par likhi kalaam bht pasand aane lagi hai--
baht saadgi hai aapke shabdon me--
masumiyat se kitni saari Dil ki baaten keh jate hain aap.

aapko padhna sach me baht bhata hai Usual Smile
janaab Hriday ji aapko iss Sarfire ki scahe Dil se daad

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
Usual Smile
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«Reply #5 on: March 21, 2012, 02:51:04 PM »
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bahut bahut khoobsurat hriday ji....badiya....
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«Reply #6 on: March 21, 2012, 03:14:07 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Saini ji...!!!

waah waah Hriday ji khoob kahaa aapne
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«Reply #7 on: March 22, 2012, 12:21:23 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Hasan ji....!!!

bahut khoob .
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«Reply #8 on: March 22, 2012, 04:59:46 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Dolly ji....!!!

bahut bahut khoobsurat hriday ji....badiya....
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