<>*Aap kya ho mere liye*<>

by KOYAL46 on September 09, 2010, 11:31:27 AM
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<>*Aap kya ho mere liye*<>

Aap kya ho mere liye ye mein keh nahi sakti
Shabdo me es rishte ko likh bhee nahi sakti

Jaane kya rishta bangya yo k in threads pe aate-jaate
Ab in rishton ki khalish mujh se chhupaayi nahi  jaati

Tere nagme he hain mere labo ki muskaan sakhi
Unko padhe beena ab mein khush reh nahi paati

Kabhi Chhod kay ye mehfil tum chalee na jaana
Ke shama es mehfil ki tum kabhi bujhne na dena

Tu he hai es naav ki khivaiya,tu he patvaar hai sakhi
Bhawar me nadi k fasi hu mein, majhdhaar chhod na jaana

Aap kya ho mere liye ye mein kabhi bataa nahi sakti
Meri kavita ki ruuhhh ho tum,es k bina mein likh nahi sakti


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«Reply #1 on: September 09, 2010, 11:38:10 AM »
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wah koyal bahot bahot achha likha he....

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«Reply #2 on: September 09, 2010, 12:43:46 PM »
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su vaat chhee..!!!

aatalu saras lakhata pan aavade chhe tane KOYAL
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«Reply #3 on: September 09, 2010, 08:24:06 PM »
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<>*Aap kya ho mere liye*<>

Aap kya ho mere liye ye mein keh nahi sakti
Shabdo me es rishte ko likh bhee nahi sakti

Jaane kya rishta bangya yo k in threads pe aate-jaate
Ab in rishton ki khalish mujh se chhupaayi nahi  jaati

Tere nagme he hain mere labo ki muskaan sakhi
Unko padhe beena ab mein khush reh nahi paati

Kabhi Chhod kay ye mehfil tum chalee na jaana
Ke shama es mehfil ki tum kabhi bujhne na dena

Tu he hai es naav ki khivaiya,tu he patvaar hai sakhi
Bhawar me nadi k fasi hu mein, majhdhaar chhod na jaana

Aap kya ho mere liye ye mein kabhi bataa nahi sakti
Meri kavita ki ruuhhh ho tum,es k bina mein likh nahi sakti




Hmm nice koyal per ye kavita hai kis k liye..
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«Reply #4 on: September 11, 2010, 01:02:38 AM »
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Is pyaari si kavita ko main bahut pehle hi padh chuka tha.. pehle ye soch k jawaab nahi diya ki koi kavita likh ke hi iska jawaab dunga.. par aaj jab dekha ye kiske liye dedicated hai to mere saare shabd khatam ho gaye .. aapne apne aur apne di ke bich ke is maasoom se pyaare se rishte ko bahut bahut sundar roop me present kiya hai... aajkal aap bahut achcha likhne lage ho... bahut bahut improvement dekhne mila hai aapki kavitaon me .. sach...  ye ek dost aapse keh raha hai... dil se... keep up the good work dear...!!!
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«Reply #5 on: September 11, 2010, 01:29:05 PM »
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Ahem ahem... Kis ke liye hai yea kavita,,,, Koi hai woh khushnaseeb...??/???

Jo meri behan ko itna luba gaya....

Waise bahoot hi khoobsoorat dedication hai,,, Bahoot khoob !

God Bless U !
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«Reply #6 on: September 11, 2010, 01:31:05 PM »
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Kabhi Kabhi to Koyal Kamaal hi kar Deti hai.. Iska likha har lafz Dil tak utar jaata hai.. is baar bhi Aisa Hi Hua hai.. Koyal sis.. Bahut Hi Khooooooob.. Maza aa gaya padh kar.. Applause Applause

Daad Kubool karo ji..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #7 on: September 12, 2010, 04:51:52 PM »
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Bahut khoobsurat peshkash hai aap ki Koyal Ji
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