Adaen Fitna Khaiz si..............Abul Asad

by Abul Asad on March 14, 2012, 08:37:01 AM
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Adaaein Fitnaah Khaiz Si
 
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Jawaani ki rawaniyaan, voh ashiqi ki kahaniyan
Mehfilen haseenon ki, nigahein unki fitnaah khaiz bhi
Samaan gulon ke bahaar ka, Ashiqi ke khumaar ka
Saaz-o sur hawaon men, tarannumen hazaron se
Hawaein bhi eitr baiz thii, tera jalwa raiz hova
jaise kissi haseen hoor ka, ufaq se hova ho ayaan
Kare shauq tez aur, tere zulf ki ye badliyan
Voh kaali kaali lehriyaan, kamar ki le bosiyaan
yeh aisi kaisi sis-kiyaan, haal-e dil ko hala-e youn
Jawaan khoon josh le, teri nigaahon ko dekh kar
Voh kareen badan ke zer-o-bam, har modh par ruke jo dam
Saanse meri ruki rahin, zamin meri hale abhi
Abhi hale, sabhi hale, Yeh gasht nigaahon ka tera
Bhari hovi jawaaniyan, ab rukh se hata
Pardaa tera, gira toh zaraa , parda tera,
jigar me aag laga, lagaa de aag aur zara
Aag tuu youn lagaa, har aik kali ko rashk ho
Gulon ko bhi dikhaen zara, husn ka jalwa kabhi
Dekhe jo tu idhar, utha ke palken teri,
nigahon se peelon main, ke hon mere havas gum
duniya ko bhula-dun men, Tere shauq-o-shabaab men phir.
Jawaani ki rawaniyan voh ashiqi ki kahaniyan
Abul Asad
 


Ye nazm, Malika pukhraj ne gayi hovi "abhi to main jawaan hon" se inspire hokar likhi gayi hai.
 

Please feel free to ask any meaning of words, sentances, translations,
I would be happy to post them.

Fitna khaiz: jo fitna (jhagda) kara de
Khumaar: intoxication, nasha (here, ashiqi ka nasha)
Eitr baiz: eitr men bhari hovi, perfume ladden,
Ufaq: horizon, asmaan, skyline
lehriyaan: to sway, halke se lehrana (new word, i made up )
Bosa: is a peck, or a light kiss, bosiyaan: baar bar chumna.
Siskiyan: rone ke baad jo siski aye, the crying hiccup
Kareen: young, lighted. rays of light
Zer-o-bam: utar chadhaov. the ups and downs.
havas: senses, Hosh o havas.
Shabab; Jawaani, youth
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«Reply #1 on: March 14, 2012, 08:39:29 AM »
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bhai waah kyaa khoob nazm kiye hain apne khyaalaat mubarak ho Asad bhai
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«Reply #2 on: March 14, 2012, 08:40:43 AM »
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«Reply #3 on: March 14, 2012, 08:52:08 AM »
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bhai waah kyaa khoob nazm kiye hain apne khyaalaat mubarak ho Asad bhai

Shukriya Dr. Sahab,
Kaafi arse baad kuch likhne ka waqt mila
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«Reply #4 on: March 14, 2012, 08:53:00 AM »
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Hasan bhai,

Behad shukriya, aapki aik thali bhi kaafi gunjti hai.
Shukriya.

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«Reply #6 on: March 14, 2012, 08:37:39 PM »
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Its simply beautiful !!

bahoot Hi Khoobsoorat nagma pesh kiya hai.. I love such kinds of creation a lot...

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«Reply #7 on: March 15, 2012, 12:55:42 AM »
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Its simply beautiful !!

bahoot Hi Khoobsoorat nagma pesh kiya hai.. I love such kinds of creation a lot...

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Nysha ji,

Bahut bahut shukriya, itni tareef ka,
mamnuun rahenge aapke.

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