Ajab kahani hai hamari..

by brokenbyluv on December 07, 2010, 05:38:49 PM
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Jab kabhi merri mhbt sar chhadh kar bolti hai,
tou merra yaar mukar jata hai,

uska ruthne manane ki kashamkash mein kabhi har pal qeher lagta hai,
tou kabhi uski mhbt k saaye mein jane kab din guzar jata hai,

main jab chahti hu ki usper apna pyar zaahir karu,
jane kyun vo zamane k naam se kuch darr jata hai,

merre dil ka haal jab kuch bechain sa hota hai,
tab vo mhbt k bharpoor ehsas se merri baho mein bikhar jata hai,

bahut hi ajab kahani hai hamari mhbt ki merre dosto..
kabhi hamare darmiya dooriyo ka sheher tou kabhi bepanah mhbt ka jahan nazar aata hai.........

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«Reply #1 on: December 07, 2010, 05:56:57 PM »
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nice ...... really true .. bilkul aisa hi hota hai jab ishq hota hai !!
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«Reply #2 on: December 07, 2010, 06:00:05 PM »
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Bahut shukriya kritika ji...take care..Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: December 07, 2010, 06:03:55 PM »
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last line is awesome deae Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: December 07, 2010, 06:05:43 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Ji..

Bahut Hi vadhiya Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: December 07, 2010, 06:08:29 PM »
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last line is awesome deae Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thnx alot ruksar ji..dil se bahut bahut acha laga ki apko merri kavita pasand aayi...
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«Reply #6 on: December 07, 2010, 06:09:36 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Ji..

Bahut Hi vadhiya Ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


Bahut bahut shukriya ji...Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: December 08, 2010, 03:13:28 AM »
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Jab kabhi merri mhbt sar chhadh kar bolti hai,
tou merra yaar mukar jata hai,

uska ruthne manane ki kashamkash mein kabhi har pal qeher lagta hai,
tou kabhi uski mhbt k saaye mein jane kab din guzar jata hai,

main jab chahti hu ki usper apna pyar zaahir karu,
jane kyun vo zamane k naam se kuch darr jata hai,

merre dil ka haal jab kuch bechain sa hota hai,
tab vo mhbt k bharpoor ehsas se merri baho mein bikhar jata hai,

bahut hi ajab kahani hai hamari mhbt ki merre dosto..
kabhi hamare darmiya dooriyo ka sheher tou kabhi bepanah mhbt ka jahan nazar aata hai.........



Bahut khoob Geet Ji
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«Reply #8 on: December 08, 2010, 08:02:39 PM »
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Bahut bahut shukriya shihab ji n rajesh ji..Usual Smile
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