Yahiin hamari kahani khatam ho jati hai...Geet...

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Jab hausla karti hu tum bin rehne ka,
tou tumhari nazar mein merri chaht kam ho jati hai,

tumse ek faasla sa bana kar isiliye rakhti hu,
kyunki hamari mhbt hi hamari kamzori ka alam ho jati hai,

mujhe apni ghazale likhne ko syahi ki zarurat b nhi padhti,
tumhare naam k behte ansuo se hi gili merri kalam ho jati hai,

main tumse chahe kitna hi chhupa lu per,
tumse bichadne k khayal se merri ankhe nam ho jati hai,

na mil payenge hum kabhi yahi naseeb hai hamara,
khuabo mein hi poori merri mhbt ki har rasam ho jati hai,

main tumhe chahti hu tum mujhe chahte ho..
hamari kahani bus yahiin se shuru hoke yahiin khtm ho jati hai.........
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2011, 06:16:40 AM »
Applause Applause Applause Bht Khob GEET JI.. Kamal Ka Likha Aap ne .. Dil Se Daad

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«Reply #2 on: May 07, 2011, 06:25:20 AM »
bahut khoob. Bahut achha hai
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«Reply #3 on: May 07, 2011, 12:06:34 PM »
bht bht khoob geet ji.....
Sply last one......
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«Reply #4 on: May 07, 2011, 02:22:05 PM »



Jab hausla karti hu tum bin rehne ka,
tou tumhari nazar mein merri chaht kam ho jati hai,

tumse ek faasla sa bana kar isiliye rakhti hu,
kyunki hamari mhbt hi hamari kamzori ka alam ho jati hai,

mujhe apni ghazale likhne ko syahi ki zarurat b nhi padhti,
tumhare naam k behte ansuo se hi gili merri kalam ho jati hai,

main tumse chahe kitna hi chhupa lu per,
tumse bichadne k khayal se merri ankhe nam ho jati hai,

na mil payenge hum kabhi yahi naseeb hai hamara,
khuabo mein hi poori merri mhbt ki har rasam ho jati hai,

main tumhe chahti hu tum mujhe chahte ho..
hamari kahani bus yahiin se shuru hoke yahiin khtm ho jati hai.........


broken ji aap ko aisa likhne ka inspression kahan se milta hai. hamesha hi itna dard bhara hota hai. bura mat manna kya pyaar mein aap sahi mein chot khaye hue ho. kyonki itna dard bhare andaaz mein likhna aasaan nahin hota . aisi poem likhne ke liye feelings kaise laati ho.........Huh?? Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #5 on: May 07, 2011, 02:43:07 PM »
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Geetji..

Vakai Dil To Nikle Lafz Mehsoos Honde Ne, Gehre jazbaatan Naal Bharpoor Kavita Sajayi hai..Bahut Ache..

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«Reply #6 on: May 08, 2011, 01:20:29 AM »
Dil se likhe jazbaat dil tak ponche..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #7 on: May 08, 2011, 03:27:36 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Bht Khob GEET JI.. Kamal Ka Likha Aap ne .. Dil Se Daad

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Bahut shukriya sky ji..
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«Reply #8 on: May 08, 2011, 03:28:26 PM »
bahut khoob. Bahut achha hai

Bahut shukriya imdad ji..
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«Reply #9 on: May 08, 2011, 03:29:08 PM »
bht bht khoob geet ji.....
Sply last one......

Shukriya priya ji...
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«Reply #10 on: May 08, 2011, 03:35:05 PM »

broken ji aap ko aisa likhne ka inspression kahan se milta hai. hamesha hi itna dard bhara hota hai. bura mat manna kya pyaar mein aap sahi mein chot khaye hue ho. kyonki itna dard bhare andaaz mein likhna aasaan nahin hota . aisi poem likhne ke liye feelings kaise laati ho.........Huh?? Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sabse pehle tou apki taaliyo ka tahe dil se shukriya aur sheba ji rahi baat dard pe likhne ki tou mhbt k ehsas k sath jite kaafi waqt hua mhbt mein zyada kuch haasil tou nhi kar paayi haan per dard ne pur zor wafa nibhayi mujhse,dard ne apni mhbt mein kabhi kami nhi chhodi hamesha merre sath raha logo ne sath chhod diya per dard ne nhi,isiliye dard ko behtar smjhti hu aur mehsus bhi karti hu,jab koi kasak hadh se badh jati hai tou lafzo mein utar deti hu...insipration mhbt se khaas aur kya ho sakti hai...
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«Reply #11 on: May 08, 2011, 03:49:26 PM »
Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Geetji..

Vakai Dil To Nikle Lafz Mehsoos Honde Ne, Gehre jazbaatan Naal Bharpoor Kavita Sajayi hai..Bahut Ache..

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Tuada tahe dil tou shukriya khwaish ji..
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«Reply #12 on: May 08, 2011, 03:50:32 PM »
Dil se likhe jazbaat dil tak ponche..
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Khush rahiye..!

Shukriya rahiim.
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«Reply #13 on: May 08, 2011, 04:35:19 PM »
Sabse pehle tou apki taaliyo ka tahe dil se shukriya aur sheba ji rahi baat dard pe likhne ki tou mhbt k ehsas k sath jite kaafi waqt hua mhbt mein zyada kuch haasil tou nhi kar paayi haan per dard ne pur zor wafa nibhayi mujhse,dard ne apni mhbt mein kabhi kami nhi chhodi hamesha merre sath raha logo ne sath chhod diya per dard ne nhi,isiliye dard ko behtar smjhti hu aur mehsus bhi karti hu,jab koi kasak hadh se badh jati hai tou lafzo mein utar deti hu...insipration mhbt se khaas aur kya ho sakti hai...

now i am speechless.!!ALLAH aapko khushi de Amin
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«Reply #14 on: May 11, 2011, 10:46:13 AM »
bahu bahut aur bahut hi khub likha hai geetji aapne...

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