aur koi nahi

by reofior on August 19, 2014, 05:15:32 PM
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mil gaye jo tum hume, manzil yaad nahi
ek humsafar tu hai, aur koi duja sath nahi
mehfil hai saji har meelon par,
tere alawa ab un mehfil me koi aur baat nahi

ab chalu tere sang, kadam se kadam
mehsus karu tujhe, koi aur aahat nahi
kareeb hai tu aaj mere dil se itna
ke dhadkan ko ab koi aur chahat nahi

nazron me basu mein tere ab
deedar tera ho har jagah har kahi
lub khamosh, rukhsat har alfaz hue
ek naam tera, aur koi izhar nahi

khayalo me aye ab tu hai yahi
ek khayal tera, aur koi raat nahi
mil gaye jo tum hume, manzil yaad nahi
ek humsafar tu hai, aur koi duja sath nahi
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«Reply #1 on: August 19, 2014, 05:31:44 PM »
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mil gaye jo tum hume, manzil yaad nahi
ek humsafar tu hai, aur koi duja sath nahi
mehfil hai saji har meelon par,
tere alawa ab un mehfil me koi aur baat nahi

ab chalu tere sang, kadam se kadam
mehsus karu tujhe, koi aur aahat nahi
kareeb hai tu aaj mere dil se itna
ke dhadkan ko ab koi aur chahat nahi

nazron me basu mein tere ab
deedar tera ho har jagah har kahi
lub khamosh, rukhsat har alfaz hue
ek naam tera, aur koi izhar nahi

khayalo me aye ab tu hai yahi
ek khayal tera, aur koi raat nahi
mil gaye jo tum hume, manzil yaad nahi
ek humsafar tu hai, aur koi duja sath nahi
beautifully written,,,,,
your first rau from my side,,, keep writing
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«Reply #2 on: August 19, 2014, 08:28:13 PM »
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mil gaye jo tum hume, manzil yaad nahi
ek humsafar tu hai, aur koi duja sath nahi
mehfil hai saji har meelon par,
tere alawa ab un mehfil me koi aur baat nahi

ab chalu tere sang, kadam se kadam
mehsus karu tujhe, koi aur aahat nahi
kareeb hai tu aaj mere dil se itna
ke dhadkan ko ab koi aur chahat nahi

nazron me basu mein tere ab
deedar tera ho har jagah har kahi
lub khamosh, rukhsat har alfaz hue
ek naam tera, aur koi izhar nahi

khayalo me aye ab tu hai yahi
ek khayal tera, aur koi raat nahi
mil gaye jo tum hume, manzil yaad nahi
ek humsafar tu hai, aur koi duja sath nahi
bahut umdah, Reofior Sahib.
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«Reply #3 on: August 20, 2014, 12:50:46 AM »
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«Reply #4 on: August 20, 2014, 06:04:23 AM »
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Bahut Achha.  Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: August 20, 2014, 08:35:15 AM »
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बहुत खूब.....

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shukriya all
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