----- /// Baarish ki boondein /// -----

by klaskar on September 19, 2010, 09:25:32 AM
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baarish ki ye boonden tumhaari yaad leke aaye hain,
yaadon me hamaari pehli wo mulquat leke aaye hain,

wo tumhaari aankhen, wo julfen, wo khili muskaan,
jaane kitni yaadein aaj ye barsaat leke aaye hain,

ye boondein bhooli hui har wo baat leke aaye hain,
kitni puraani baatein ye apne saath leke aaye hain,

kuch agag hi andaaz hai aaj har ek boond mein,
maano ye fir se pyaar ki saugaat leke aaye hain,

tumhaari kuch adaon pe fida hoke mar mita tha main,
ye boondein aaj tumhaari har wo baat leke aaye hain....


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«Reply #1 on: September 19, 2010, 09:35:45 AM »
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Quote from: klaskar on September 19, 2010, 09:25:32 AM

baarish ki ye boonden tumhaari yaad leke aaye hain,
yaadon me hamaari pehli wo mulquat leke aaye hain,

wo tumhaari aankhen, wo julfen, wo khili muskaan,
jaane kitni yaadein aaj ye barsaat leke aaye hain,

ye boondein bhooli hui har wo baat leke aaye hain,
kitni puraani baatein ye apne saath leke aaye hain,

kuch agag hi andaaz hai aaj har ek boond mein,
maano ye fir se pyaar ki saugaat leke aaye hain,

tumhaari kuch adaon pe fida hoke mar mita tha main,
ye boondein aaj tumhaari har wo baat leke aaye hain....


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Its Too Good ...... Klaskar Ji .....ehsaas bahut khoob pesh kiye hai aapne .. very nice creation... dil se daad hazir hai ... likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #2 on: September 19, 2010, 10:35:39 AM »
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nice poem
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«Reply #3 on: September 19, 2010, 11:37:01 AM »
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 Applause icon_flower Applause mastam poem kapil bheegi bheegi ye kavita dil ko bheego gai
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«Reply #4 on: September 19, 2010, 07:39:24 PM »
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main aapka tahe dil se shukriya adaa karta hoon Naresh ji jo aapne meri is kavita ko apna waqt diya aur pasand kiya... bahut bahut shukriya .....!!!

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Its Too Good ...... Klaskar Ji .....ehsaas bahut khoob pesh kiye hai aapne .. very nice creation... dil se daad hazir hai ... likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen...

duaaon ke saath...
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«Reply #5 on: September 19, 2010, 07:39:48 PM »
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thanks a lot Suresh ji...!!!

Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on September 19, 2010, 10:35:39 AM
nice poem
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Bhut ache kapil ..............

Its differnt...

Yadian ........ evrybody can connect wid tht


"yadain kyon yeh yadain chali aati hai
Na yaad karna chao fir bi tadpa jati hai
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Yeh ankhion se sab kuch byan kar jati hai "
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«Reply #7 on: September 20, 2010, 01:19:55 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Kasak ji...!!!

Quote from: kasak kdk on September 19, 2010, 11:37:01 AM
Applause icon_flower Applause mastam poem kapil bheegi bheegi ye kavita dil ko bheego gai
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«Reply #8 on: September 20, 2010, 01:21:15 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Neel ji...aapne bhi bahut achcha likha hai....!!!

 Applause Applause Applause

Quote from: neelgold on September 19, 2010, 11:26:51 PM
Bhut ache kapil ..............

Its differnt...

Yadian ........ evrybody can connect wid tht


"yadain kyon yeh yadain chali aati hai
Na yaad karna chao fir bi tadpa jati hai
chupa lo apana dard tum apne seene main fir bi
Yeh ankhion se sab kuch byan kar jati hai "
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