|| Behtar Hota....... Priya...||

by manzil-e-ishq on October 09, 2011, 06:19:00 AM
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«Reply #15 on: October 12, 2011, 11:48:21 AM »
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Quote from: Sanjeev kash on October 09, 2011, 06:28:45 AM
BAhut Khoob Priya G
Shukria sanjeev ji....
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«Reply #16 on: October 12, 2011, 11:49:07 AM »
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Quote from: khamosh_aawaaz on October 09, 2011, 06:53:39 AM
gud one mei

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht bht shukria khamosh ji...
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«Reply #17 on: October 12, 2011, 11:49:39 AM »
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Quote from: Sheba on October 09, 2011, 06:58:30 AM

bahut khoob manzil.
shukria sheba ji...
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«Reply #18 on: October 12, 2011, 11:50:40 AM »
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Quote from: ParwaaZ on October 09, 2011, 07:39:16 AM
Priyaa Jee Aadaab!

Bahut achche ahsaas Piroye hai aapne..
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Zarra kafiye par dhayan dijiye... Baki
aapke ahsaas O khayaal behad khoob hai ..

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
bht bht shukria parwaaz ji....
main kaafiye ka dhayn rakhne ki poori koshish karungi...
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«Reply #19 on: October 12, 2011, 11:51:19 AM »
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Quote from: ANAAM on October 09, 2011, 08:35:19 AM
Mast Ehsaas...lagta hai seedhe dil se nikle hain ye alfaaz..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Haalaat aur majbooriyon ka sangam bhee sanam bada ajeeb hota hai
Chaha na tha tumko ye gam hum denge par bas mai kahaan hota hai

Takdeer aur veedhee kay veedhaan kay aage insaan ka kab chalta hai
Gher liya jab baadhaayon ney tab apnee ichhaon ka jor kab chalta hai




Thnx alot anaam ji....
& very nice reply....
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«Reply #20 on: October 12, 2011, 11:52:52 AM »
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Quote from: -Rahim- on October 09, 2011, 09:11:39 AM
Priya di,
Dil ki likh gaye ap toh aj..
Wah Wah Wah..
Pehli do lines ne hi dil choo liya..
"Tum na dete toh behtar hota"
Wah..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye!
thnx alot rahim...
accha laga ye jaan kar ki meri koshish tmhare dil tak pachuchi...
may god bless u...
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«Reply #21 on: October 12, 2011, 11:58:31 AM »
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Quote from: SURESH SANGWAN on October 09, 2011, 09:18:37 AM
priya ji aapne bahut priy hi likha hai.
dil se daaaaaaaaaaaad
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shukria suresh ji...
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«Reply #22 on: October 12, 2011, 11:59:48 AM »
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Quote from: Satish Shukla on October 09, 2011, 10:13:42 AM

Waah..waah kya baat hai..

Dili daad qubool farmaayen..

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'

pasandagi ka shukria satish ji...
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«Reply #23 on: October 12, 2011, 12:01:02 PM »
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Quote from: adil bechain on October 09, 2011, 10:30:00 AM
waah manzil ji bahut khoob aur bahut dino baad aap ka kalaam padha Applause Applause Applause Applause
bht bht shukria adil ji...
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«Reply #24 on: October 12, 2011, 12:02:07 PM »
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Quote from: Gyan Prakash on October 09, 2011, 10:48:09 AM


Umda..!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
shukria ghyan ji...
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«Reply #25 on: October 12, 2011, 12:03:00 PM »
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Quote from: sarfira on October 09, 2011, 11:03:07 AM
behtar hota--
gud gud very gud Manzil ji Usual Smile

par humare khayal se ye Khumaar wali poetry nhi hai--ishq me mile dard ki bayaani hai--

!
behtar to wo bhi tha jab hum mile the
  gar na milte ik duje se--to behtar hota!!
dhuen me lipti thi jo ik chingaari
  gar na dete hawa usko--to behtar hota!!
:p

muskurate rahie
khus rahie
Usual Smile aise
bht bht shukria sarfira ji....
& very nice reply...
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«Reply #26 on: October 12, 2011, 12:03:46 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on October 09, 2011, 11:05:33 AM
Bahut Bahut Khooob Priya..Very Nice

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thnk alot khwaish ji...
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«Reply #27 on: October 12, 2011, 12:04:37 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on October 09, 2011, 02:26:33 PM
bahut bahut khub manzil e ishq ji

Shad o aabad rahiye...

Shihab
thnx shihab...
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«Reply #28 on: October 12, 2011, 12:05:53 PM »
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Quote from: mkv on October 11, 2011, 10:58:00 AM
Bahut khoob priya ji
pahle sher ka javab nahi ' tum na dete to behtar hota'

bht bht shukria mkv ji...
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