Hai Behtar Yahi Ab Ke

by aaina on June 15, 2010, 10:54:05 PM
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khayaaloN se apne baghawat karo
kabhi hamse yun bhi muhabbat karo

panahoN mai apni chupa kar hame
zamaane se saare raqaabat karo

kabhi apne kandhe pe zulfe giraa
karo qatl aur ik inayaat karo

hamaari nigaho me jo hai chupi
agar hai shararat ,wazahat karo

saRe raah yuN tokna hai ghalat
akele bitha kar nasihat karo

hai behtar yehi ab to aslam miyaaN
ke ab khatm shikwe shikayat karo







aslam
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«Reply #1 on: June 15, 2010, 11:43:50 PM »
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aslam bhai bahot hiiiiii umda kalaam hai,i am realy speechless ,aghaz se anjaam tak ek soroor ho ba ho ..mein ne kai baar pardh dala aapki yeh nayaab ghazal..wah wah aur wah
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«Reply #2 on: June 16, 2010, 03:22:42 AM »
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khayaaloN se apne baghawat karo
kabhi hamse yun bhi muhabbat karo

panahoN mai apni chupa kar hame
zamaane se saare raqaabat karo

kabhi apne kandhe pe zulfe giraa
karo qatl aur ik inayaat karo

hamaari nigaho me jo hai chupi
agar hai shararat ,wazahat karo

saRe raah yuN tokna hai ghalat
akele bitha kar nasihat karo

hai behtar yehi ab to aslam miyaaN
ke ab khatm shikwe shikayat karo







aslam


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«Reply #3 on: June 16, 2010, 03:28:16 AM »
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Kamaal ki ghazal hai aapki ye Aslam bhai. Har lihaz se mukammal aur lutfandoz. Har she'r  lajawab. Hazaro daad hazir hain.
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«Reply #4 on: June 16, 2010, 06:43:33 AM »
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wah wah zaberdust waqaee khubsoorat ghazal likhi ap nay Aslam Mian
dad wasool karain
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«Reply #5 on: June 16, 2010, 09:32:50 AM »
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wah aslam bhai kya qoob ghazal kahi hai , hazaro dad ,

yun sare rah tokna hai galath ,
akele bitha kar nasihat karo ,,

wah wah kya riwayati sher sher hai bhai ,,dil chuta hai ,,


allah apko hamesha khush rakhe


duwa go

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«Reply #6 on: June 16, 2010, 09:42:53 AM »
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Waah waah Waah..

bahut Bahut Khoob Aslam Bhai..Bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: June 16, 2010, 10:08:52 AM »
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Wah Aslam Saheb! Wah kya kalaam hai, bhai maza aa gaya paRhkar. Aik murassa, mukammal peshkash hai. HazaaroN daad qubul kijiye.

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khayaaloN se apne baghawat karo
kabhi hamse yun bhi muhabbat karo

panahoN mai apni chupa kar hame
zamaane se saare raqaabat karo

kabhi apne kandhe pe zulfe giraa
karo qatl aur ik inayaat karo

hamaari nigaho me jo hai chupi
agar hai shararat ,wazahat karo

saRe raah yuN tokna hai ghalat
akele bitha kar nasihat karo

hai behtar yehi ab to aslam miyaaN
ke ab khatm shikwe shikayat karo







aslam

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«Reply #8 on: June 17, 2010, 07:02:19 AM »
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 naaaaice one aslam sb... Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: June 17, 2010, 07:10:29 AM »
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Aslam bhai bahot umda ghazal kahi hai aapne. Har sher mukammal aur murassa hai. Hazaron daad hazir hain.
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«Reply #10 on: June 23, 2010, 04:06:58 PM »
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aslam bhai bahot hiiiiii umda kalaam hai,i am realy speechless ,aghaz se anjaam tak ek soroor ho ba ho ..mein ne kai baar pardh dala aapki yeh nayaab ghazal..wah wah aur wah

Bhut bhut shurkya Nazar sahab yuN hi apni mohabbatoN se nawaazte rahiye


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«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2010, 05:09:14 PM »
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Thnxx Manoj jii.........

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«Reply #12 on: June 23, 2010, 05:49:26 PM »
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Kamaal ki ghazal hai aapki ye Aslam bhai. Har lihaz se mukammal aur lutfandoz. Har she'r  lajawab. Hazaro daad hazir hain.


Bhut shukriya Adeeb sahab is hosla afzaii ka

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«Reply #13 on: June 23, 2010, 05:53:42 PM »
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wah wah zaberdust waqaee khubsoorat ghazal likhi ap nay Aslam Mian
dad wasool karain

bhut nawaazish uzma jii is hosla afzaii ka

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«Reply #14 on: June 23, 2010, 05:55:23 PM »
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wah aslam bhai kya qoob ghazal kahi hai , hazaro dad ,

yun sare rah tokna hai galath ,
akele bitha kar nasihat karo ,,

wah wah kya riwayati sher sher hai bhai ,,dil chuta hai ,,


allah apko hamesha khush rakhe


duwa go

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Zarranwaazi hai bhai aapki tahe dil se mamnoon hun aapki is hosla afzakk ka yuN hi saath daite rahiye



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