|| Behtar Hota....... Priya...||

by manzil-e-ishq on October 09, 2011, 11:49:00 AM
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Is dil ko aadat hai mana chot khane ki..
par agar tum na dete to behtar hota...

haal-e-dil jo kahte hai har baar tumhe..
tum bhi kahte ek dafa to behtar hota..

milna tera-mera raho me aksar hua..
ye dil bhi milte us tarah to behtar hota..

thujhe pane ki dua rab se hum kar baithe..
jo hum na karte wo dua to behtar hota..

is tarah hum se nazar churate ho kyu
jo kah dete tum zara to behar hota..

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«Reply #1 on: October 09, 2011, 11:58:45 AM »
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Is dil ko aadat hai mana chot khane ki..
par agar tum na dete to behtar hota...

haal-e-dil jo kahte hai har baar tumhe..
tum bhi kahte ek dafa to behtar hota..

milna tera-mera raho me aksar hua..
ye dil bhi milte us tarah to behtar hota..

thujhe pane ki dua rab se hum kar baithe..
jo hum na karte wo dua to behtar hota..

is tarah hum se nazar churate ho kyu
jo kah dete tum zara to behar hota..

.


BAhut Khoob Priya G
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«Reply #2 on: October 09, 2011, 12:23:39 PM »
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Is dil ko aadat hai mana chot khane ki..
par agar tum na dete to behtar hota...

haal-e-dil jo kahte hai har baar tumhe..
tum bhi kahte ek dafa to behtar hota..

milna tera-mera raho me aksar hua..
ye dil bhi milte us tarah to behtar hota..

thujhe pane ki dua rab se hum kar baithe..
jo hum na karte wo dua to behtar hota..

is tarah hum se nazar churate ho kyu
jo kah dete tum zara to behar hota..

.


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«Reply #3 on: October 09, 2011, 12:28:30 PM »
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Is dil ko aadat hai mana chot khane ki..
par agar tum na dete to behtar hota...

haal-e-dil jo kahte hai har baar tumhe..
tum bhi kahte ek dafa to behtar hota..

milna tera-mera raho me aksar hua..
ye dil bhi milte us tarah to behtar hota..

thujhe pane ki dua rab se hum kar baithe..
jo hum na karte wo dua to behtar hota..

is tarah hum se nazar churate ho kyu
jo kah dete tum zara to behtar hota..

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«Reply #4 on: October 09, 2011, 01:09:16 PM »
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Priyaa Jee Aadaab!

Bahut achche ahsaas Piroye hai aapne..
Humari dili daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..

Zarra kafiye par dhayan dijiye... Baki
aapke ahsaas O khayaal behad khoob hai ..

Likhate rahiye.. Khush O aabaad rahiye..
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«Reply #5 on: October 09, 2011, 02:05:19 PM »
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Mast Ehsaas...lagta hai seedhe dil se nikle hain ye alfaaz..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Haalaat aur majbooriyon ka sangam bhee sanam bada ajeeb hota hai
Chaha na tha tumko ye gam hum denge par bas mai kahaan hota hai

Takdeer aur veedhee kay veedhaan kay aage insaan ka kab chalta hai
Gher liya jab baadhaayon ney tab apnee ichhaon ka jor kab chalta hai



Is dil ko aadat hai mana chot khane ki..
par agar tum na dete to behtar hota...

haal-e-dil jo kahte hai har baar tumhe..
tum bhi kahte ek dafa to behtar hota..

milna tera-mera raho me aksar hua..
ye dil bhi milte us tarah to behtar hota..

thujhe pane ki dua rab se hum kar baithe..
jo hum na karte wo dua to behtar hota..

is tarah hum se nazar churate ho kyu
jo kah dete tum zara to behar hota..

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«Reply #6 on: October 09, 2011, 02:41:39 PM »
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Priya di,
Dil ki likh gaye ap toh aj..
Wah Wah Wah..
Pehli do lines ne hi dil choo liya..
"Tum na dete toh behtar hota"
Wah..
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«Reply #7 on: October 09, 2011, 02:48:37 PM »
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priya ji aapne bahut priy hi likha hai.
dil se daaaaaaaaaaaad
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«Reply #8 on: October 09, 2011, 03:43:42 PM »
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Waah..waah kya baat hai..

Dili daad qubool farmaayen..

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«Reply #9 on: October 09, 2011, 04:00:00 PM »
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Is dil ko aadat hai mana chot khane ki..
par agar tum na dete to behtar hota...

haal-e-dil jo kahte hai har baar tumhe..
tum bhi kahte ek dafa to behtar hota..

milna tera-mera raho me aksar hua..
ye dil bhi milte us tarah to behtar hota..

thujhe pane ki dua rab se hum kar baithe..
jo hum na karte wo dua to behtar hota..

is tarah hum se nazar churate ho kyu
jo kah dete tum zara to behar hota..

.


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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2011, 04:18:09 PM »
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Is dil ko aadat hai mana chot khane ki..
par agar tum na dete to behtar hota...

haal-e-dil jo kahte hai har baar tumhe..
tum bhi kahte ek dafa to behtar hota..

milna tera-mera raho me aksar hua..
ye dil bhi milte us tarah to behtar hota..

thujhe pane ki dua rab se hum kar baithe..
jo hum na karte wo dua to behtar hota..

is tarah hum se nazar churate ho kyu
jo kah dete tum zara to behar hota..

.




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«Reply #11 on: October 09, 2011, 04:33:07 PM »
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behtar hota--
gud gud very gud Manzil ji Usual Smile

par humare khayal se ye Khumaar wali poetry nhi hai--ishq me mile dard ki bayaani hai--

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behtar to wo bhi tha jab hum mile the
  gar na milte ik duje se--to behtar hota!!
dhuen me lipti thi jo ik chingaari
  gar na dete hawa usko--to behtar hota!!
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«Reply #12 on: October 09, 2011, 04:35:33 PM »
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Is dil ko aadat hai mana chot khane ki..
par agar tum na dete to behtar hota...

haal-e-dil jo kahte hai har baar tumhe..
tum bhi kahte ek dafa to behtar hota..

milna tera-mera raho me aksar hua..
ye dil bhi milte us tarah to behtar hota..

thujhe pane ki dua rab se hum kar baithe..
jo hum na karte wo dua to behtar hota..

is tarah hum se nazar churate ho kyu
jo kah dete tum zara to behar hota..

.


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«Reply #13 on: October 11, 2011, 04:28:00 PM »
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Bahut khoob priya ji
pahle sher ka javab nahi ' tum na dete to behtar hota'
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«Reply #14 on: October 11, 2011, 04:39:43 PM »
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