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by nirbhay on April 21, 2006, 11:54:32 PM
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Bohat pyar kartein hain tumko sanam
mera aitbaar karlo, matt lo koi waada, na do ko kasam

Miltey rahenge tumhein Qayamat se Qayamat takk
Judaa nahi honge tumse Jo nikal gaya raastey mein dum

Mere khwabon se haQiQat kee harr jhadi mein tum jo
mujhe pata hai tumhare gulistaan mein bhi sirf hum hain aaur sirf hum

dene ko koi amaanat bhi nahi hai mere paas to
seena cheeer kar dikha denge, tumhein kahan rakhtey hain hum

teri harr baat parr ankhein band karke aitbaar kartein hain hum
mujhe pey yoon shack karne ka matt karo sitam

Bohat pyar kartein hain tumko sanam
mera aitbaar karlo, matt lo koi waada, na do ko kasam!!!


~! Neer !~
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«Reply #1 on: April 22, 2006, 02:00:47 AM »
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very nice bro.....
its a sweet, just nice poem........ bro not too impressed though........ i think u can do better!
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«Reply #2 on: April 22, 2006, 08:33:55 AM »
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thanks Minu...i wil be trying at my level best!!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2006, 05:29:38 AM »
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Unke ishq mein mar mitne ko
betaab ye dil ho jaata hai……
phir bhi aur hassinaon ko dekh dil
baag baag ho jaata hai……
Dekh kar tumko yakeen hota hai,
koi itna bhee haseen hota hai…..
deikh pate hain kahan hum tumko,
dil kaheen hosh kaheen hota hai.
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2006, 06:26:25 AM »
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good job neer & mrkotians :D
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2006, 07:02:22 AM »
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Bohat achi koshish hai Nirbhay... Usual Smile  keep it up!
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2006, 07:08:13 AM »
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Good job Neer and Mk!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2006, 08:08:00 AM »
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Very Thanks Mehak, Aryaan and Pooja Didi..

And Good One Mk!!
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2006, 10:04:29 PM »
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Quote from: "mrkotians"
Unke ishq mein mar mitne ko
betaab ye dil ho jaata hai……
phir bhi aur hassinaon ko dekh dil
baag baag ho jaata hai……
Dekh kar tumko yakeen hota hai,
koi itna bhee haseen hota hai…..
deikh pate hain kahan hum tumko,
dil kaheen hosh kaheen hota hai.


ahhhhh!
very nice mrkotians..........
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