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Tumse itna pyar kartein hai sanam
Tujhpe hi jaan niazaar kartein hai…
Teri har baat pe martein
Tumse hi zingagi ki har umeed raktein hai
Tum pe sanam aithbaa hai itna
Sachai jante hue tumse hi pyar kartein hai
Nahi chaiye koi tofa tumse
buss tere sangh Zindagi bar k saath ki chah rakte hai
Tumse itni beteha mohhabbat kartin hai
Tumhare siwa kisi ko Is Dil mein pana na denge aisa vada kartein hai
Tumse itna pyar kartein hai sanam
Tujhpe hi jaan niazaar kartein hai…
~*~Divya~*~
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«Reply #1 on: May 07, 2007, 12:04:28 PM » |
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Wah Wah Divya ji.. Behad Mohabbat Bhara Kalaam Pesh kiya hai aapne...!!  Har ek Lafz Khubsoorat aur Mohabbat ke Rangon me BHeega nazar aaya..!!!! Great Words... |
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«Reply #2 on: May 08, 2007, 05:30:58 AM » |
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wah!! bahut bahut khoob ..nice lines
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«Reply #3 on: May 09, 2007, 03:58:43 AM » |
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thanks Vicky & ranjana ji.. sarahane k liye
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punam
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«Reply #4 on: May 09, 2007, 06:04:23 AM » |
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Hi divya ji bahat khoob likhe hain aap ne...
waise aap jaisa to nahi par kosish ki hun kuch likhne ki... pasand na aaye to bata dena...
khoyi dil kab kaise pata chala hi nahi
ye koun aagaya dil me hamse pucha hi nahi
sama gaya yun rag rag me kab jaan payi nahi
bin uski ehsash se ye dil aaj dharkta hi nahi...
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«Reply #5 on: May 09, 2007, 06:56:33 AM » |
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thank U so much Punam...
bahoot hi khoobsurat likha hai
Teri sanso apne abasa sanam
hum tujh sang ak nauii duniya ki suraat karenge..
tu saath rahe na rahe mere
par hum hamesha tere khayalo mein rahege...
Gahera hai mera pyar mahasagar se bhi gehra
tumhare siwa na kisi aur ki chaht karbool karenge...
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«Reply #6 on: May 09, 2007, 07:42:50 AM » |
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Ohh thnax..divya ji.. chalo aap ko pasand aaya...
aap bhi bahot khoob likha hai...
khamos reh ke unhe tarpati hun
lab nahi khulte unhe jab saamne pati hun
ankho me unhi ki khwab sajayi hun
najar jhuk jate hain jab unhe samne paati hun
her sans me unhi ki naam leti hun
kaise kahu unse main ke ..unse kitna pyaar karti hun...
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«Reply #7 on: May 09, 2007, 08:34:37 AM » |
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wonderful Reply Punam...
Hadir se chraya hia tumhe
kisi aur ka na hone denge
Dil ki gehraiyo se chahte hai ]
Dhadkano se kabhi dur na hone denge
Har khushi tumse hi paai hai Khudha k karam se Apni har khushi tere sarhane rakh denge
lab jab mange ge khudha se kuch
Bas akash ki aur bahe felaye tera hi naam lenge.
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«Reply #8 on: May 09, 2007, 06:16:46 PM » |
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beautiful really nice reply...divya ji...
unhe kuch kehena chahti hun main..
kadam bara chuki hun ab laut nahi paungi main
mujhe chor ke na jana kabhi
unhe kehena chahti hun main...
khud ko sambhalna mumkin nahi lagti..muskil me hun
unhe kehena chahti hun main...
unki chahat ka asar se bach nahi paati hun main
unhe kehena chahti hun main....
dil ki hai aisi halat kitna pyar karti hun main
unhe kehena chahti hun main...
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«Reply #9 on: May 10, 2007, 03:04:00 AM » |
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Wah Wah....!!! Kya baat Hai PUNAM JI & DIVYA JI.. !!! Dono ne Ek se Badh kar ek Likha hai... !!!!!!! |
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«Reply #10 on: May 10, 2007, 05:37:34 PM » |
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Thanx vivek ji...but plz ji ye " ji " hamare naam ke paas se hata dijiye ji...
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2007, 04:46:31 AM » |
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well its mindblowing Dipi... its really beatiful written by u...it expressed ur feelings....
Tumse itna pyar kartein hai
Dil mea hi nahi har ehsaas mein bastein hai
kese bayan karun mein apna ishq
har tarah har jagah sir f teri hi baat kartein hai
jab manga tumhara pyar managa'
ab jam jamanter k saath ki dua kartein hai
pyar ki kasti mea beita kar le cha kevayiya
yea sajni kab se Dulhan k libas mea beiti hai
Love
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2007, 12:33:38 PM » |
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Bohat acchey... :lol:
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«Reply #13 on: May 12, 2007, 03:03:24 AM » |
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GREAT WORK...................
Har phool ki ajab kahani hai,
Chup rehna bhi pyar ki nishani hai,
Kahin koi zakhm nai phir bhi kyun dard ka ehsas hai,
Lagta hai dil ka ek tukda aaj bhi uske paas hai.
**(((KHUSHBU)))**
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2007, 07:47:59 AM » |
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Thanx vivek ji...but plz ji ye " ji " hamare naam ke paas se hata dijiye ji... Yeh Vivek ji Kaun hain...  ......!!!! :lol: :lol: |
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