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by diya786 on December 30, 2008, 10:44:20 AM
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Chand kashti ki tarah raat samundar ki tarah
Main akela hoon kisi thehre hue manzar ki tarah

Ek nazar dekh tujhe kaisa nazar aata hoon
Maine pehna hai tere pyar ko taweez ki tarah

Main teri rooh ke andar bhi utar sakta hoon
Mujh pe khulta hai tera raaz darwaaze ki tarah

Sochta hoon ki tujhe neend mein chu kar dekhon
Tu mere saamne hai khwab ki tabeer ki tarah

Jaane kab tak baitha raha main shama ke kareeb
Aag andar bhi sulagti rahi bahar ki tarah

Woh tha maujood to veerana saja tha kaisa
Saara mahaul nazar aaya mujhe ghar ki tarah

Rukhsat lamhon mein woh chup tha kitna
Main bhi khamosh tha sadak ke pathar ki tarah
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«Reply #1 on: December 30, 2008, 10:56:12 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai DIYA ji.. Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab Peshkash..!!
Behad Khubsoorat Kalaam Hai.. Har Lafz Mohabbt me dooba sa Hai.. Bahut bahut Khooooooooob..!! Applause

Aaina Bhi Ab Mujhse, Khafa-Khafa sa Rahata Hai,
Dekhta Hoon khudko, Nazar tum Hi Aate ho Aks Ki Tarah...

Kuch Is Kadar Ho Gaya Hoon Madhosh Tere Ishq Me,
Ke Har Lamha Lagta Hai Jaise, Jannat Ki Tarah....!!


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #2 on: December 30, 2008, 12:17:29 PM »
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Bohat khoob diya maza aa gaya too good  Clapping Smiley

Milti hain bohat teri batein meri bato se
Tu bhi ghayel hain bohat shayed meri tarah

                               -sg-
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«Reply #3 on: December 30, 2008, 12:22:46 PM »
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Nice one Diya Ji
Equally good response Mann Ji
aur Ghayel Ji
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«Reply #4 on: December 30, 2008, 12:42:58 PM »
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Outstanding Work from all of you

meri bhi eak kushish qubool ki jaye !!

uski awaz sune howe eak zamana guzar gaya !!
hum bhi qamush hain bejaan patheroon ki tarah !!

Qadeer Toopchi



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«Reply #5 on: December 30, 2008, 02:14:16 PM »
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bahut khoob diyaji......

tham si gayi hain zindagi meri ,khamosh pathar ki tarah,
 bhikhar gaya hun ,sukhe pathjar ki tarah.
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«Reply #6 on: December 30, 2008, 03:02:14 PM »
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Applause Applause

Bohat khoob diya dear...
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«Reply #7 on: December 31, 2008, 04:34:44 PM »
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bahoot khoob diya... yah char line to behad pasand aai:

Sochta hoon ki tujhe neend mein chu kar dekhon
Tu mere saamne hai khwab ki tabeer ki tarah

Jaane kab tak baitha raha main shama ke kareeb
Aag andar bhi sulagti rahi bahar ki tarah
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«Reply #8 on: December 31, 2008, 04:35:08 PM »
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bahoot khoob Mann ji and SG JEE
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«Reply #9 on: January 01, 2009, 12:19:08 AM »
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Bohat Hi Badhiya Likha Hai Kashish Nice One Yaar,.
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«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2009, 10:02:40 AM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA DOSTON
WAISE YEH NAZM MERE EK DOST NE LIKHI HAI AUR UNHI KE KEHNE PAR YAHAN APNE NAAM SE POST BHI KI PAR AB RESPONSE DEKHKAR UNHEIN YAKEEN AA JAAYEGA KI ACCHA LIKHA HAI UNHONE
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«Reply #11 on: January 01, 2009, 10:05:06 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat Hai DIYA ji.. Humesha Ki Tarah Lajawab Peshkash..!!
Behad Khubsoorat Kalaam Hai.. Har Lafz Mohabbt me dooba sa Hai.. Bahut bahut Khooooooooob..!! Applause

Aaina Bhi Ab Mujhse, Khafa-Khafa sa Rahata Hai,
Dekhta Hoon khudko, Nazar tum Hi Aate ho Aks Ki Tarah...

Kuch Is Kadar Ho Gaya Hoon Madhosh Tere Ishq Me,
Ke Har Lamha Lagta Hai Jaise, Jannat Ki Tarah....!!


**~** Mann **~**



NICE LINES VICKY
KEEP GOING
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«Reply #12 on: January 01, 2009, 10:07:14 AM »
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Outstanding Work from all of you

meri bhi eak kushish qubool ki jaye !!

uski awaz sune howe eak zamana guzar gaya !!
hum bhi qamush hain bejaan patheroon ki tarah !!

Qadeer Toopchi





ABDUL SAHAB BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA HAI AAPNE Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: January 01, 2009, 10:09:39 AM »
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Bohat khoob diya maza aa gaya too good  Clapping Smiley

Milti hain bohat teri batein meri bato se
Tu bhi ghayel hain bohat shayed meri tarah

                               -sg-



KAMAAL LIKHA HAI SAJID SAHAB Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: January 01, 2009, 10:12:31 AM »
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BAHUT BAHUT SHUKRIYA DOSTON
WAISE YEH NAZM MERE EK DOST NE LIKHI HAI AUR UNHI KE KEHNE PAR YAHAN APNE NAAM SE POST BHI KI PAR AB RESPONSE DEKHKAR UNHEIN YAKEEN AA JAAYEGA KI ACCHA LIKHA HAI UNHONE
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Achcha khasa mazak bana ke rakh diya aap logho.
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