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by tanzeela on January 03, 2005, 10:10:46 PM
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JAB ANKHOON MEIN SHAAM UTRE
PALKOON PE SHFQ CHOOLE
KAJAL KI TRAH MERI
AANKHON KO DHANK CHOO LE
US WAQT KOI USKO
AANKHOON SE MERI DEKHE
PALKOON SE MERI CHOOME!
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«Reply #1 on: January 03, 2005, 10:24:55 PM »
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hamesha der kr deta hoon mein har kaam krne mein
zrori baat kehni ho koi wada nibhana hon
use awaz deni ho use waps bulana ho
hamesha der kr deta hoon mein
mdad krni ho uski yar ki dhars bandhani ho
bohat drena rstoo pe kisi se milney jana ho
hamesha der kr deta hoon mein
badalte mosm ki ser mein dil ko lagana ho
kisi ko yad rakhna ho kisi ko bhool jana ho
hamesha der kr deta hoon mein
kisi ko mout se pehle kisi ghum se bachana ho
haqiqt aur thi kuch is ko ja ke yeh btana ho
hamesha der kr deta hoon mein har kam krne mein
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«Reply #2 on: January 03, 2005, 10:56:53 PM »
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GOOD JOB
ISI TRAH AAPNI DUNIYA MEIN AAJAO WAPIS
JIS TRAH TUM MUJHE CHORR KE GAYE THAY
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WOWWWWWWWWW
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«Reply #3 on: January 04, 2005, 02:19:28 PM »
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JAB ANKHOON MEIN SHAAM UTRE
PALKOON PE SHFQ CHOOLE
KAJAL KI TRAH MERI
AANKHON KO DHANK CHOO LE
US WAQT KOI USKO
AANKHOON SE MERI DEKHE
PALKOON SE MERI CHOOME!


wah!!!!!!!!!!!!!!  tanzeela.............too good naveed..........
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«Reply #4 on: January 04, 2005, 06:44:37 PM »
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thanx
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«Reply #5 on: January 04, 2005, 08:54:34 PM »
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ye badl tu  etna na garj  ki wo  aa n ske  aane  ke  bad  tu etna  bars ki  wo  ja na  ske
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«Reply #6 on: January 04, 2005, 09:04:34 PM »
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nice work tanjeela!
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«Reply #7 on: January 05, 2005, 12:44:40 AM »
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nice work tanjeela!
thanx jee
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«Reply #8 on: January 05, 2005, 05:39:36 AM »
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excellent tanzeela.......its very nice
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«Reply #9 on: January 05, 2005, 11:16:11 PM »
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najaane kon saa ab zulm reh gaya hai “”Naz”

dua wo mangtay hain meri zindagi ke liye

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    apne qaatil kee zahaanat se pareshaan hoon mein

    roze ek mot naye tarz kee eejaad kare

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aye haasil-e-khuloos bataa kya jawaab doon

duniyaa ye poochhtee hai ke mein kyun udaas hoon

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«Reply #10 on: January 06, 2005, 12:39:44 AM »
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gair to wo bhee nahi shokat magar kya kijiye

jo bohat nazdeek hain wo bhi hain begaane abhi

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aisee taareekiyan aankhon mein basi hain ke “Naz “

raat to raat hai hum din ko jalaate hain chiraag

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«Reply #11 on: January 06, 2005, 11:04:02 PM »
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gair to wo bhee nahi shokat magar kya kijiye

jo bohat nazdeek hain wo bhi hain begaane abhi

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aisee taareekiyan aankhon mein basi hain ke “Naz “

raat to raat hai hum din ko jalaate hain chiraag

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WOWWWWWWWWWWW GOOD JOB DO IT AGIN LIKE THIS
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«Reply #12 on: January 06, 2005, 11:10:28 PM »
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THANX FAKHAR
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«Reply #13 on: January 08, 2005, 02:27:56 AM »
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:XVISIT:D US:-*WWW.LOVEWILLFINDAWAY.TK // WWW.FAKHARENAVEED.TK  \:D/ =D>
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«Reply #14 on: January 08, 2005, 02:34:12 AM »
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bahut khoob..!!!
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