Dil ki baat ...

by punam on May 15, 2007, 12:15:38 PM
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Hawa ke sath sath unki khusbu aayi
sanso se utar ke rag rag me sama gayi

paw jameepe yun larkharane lagi
dil me ye kaisi halchal mach gayi

ankh edhar udhar ye kisse dhund rahi
samne dekh unhe ye najar kyun jhuk gayi

hoth dekh unhe yun kamp kampne lagi
ankho hi ankho se baat ho gayi

muskuraye wo main sarmane lagi
dil ki baat ab dil samjh gayi

ye kaisa ehsash hai jo mujhe hila gayi
dil ki darkan bas tej hoti gayi

churaliye ho aap ab dil meri na rahi
dil hi dil me main ye kehe gayi...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #1 on: May 15, 2007, 05:01:45 PM »
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Punam bahoot hi khubsurat sa ehsaas e Dil Pesh kiya hai.. Well written.. & well expressed..

Dil ki har baat badi albeli hai
Har pal sangh rehti , Yehi meri sahi saheli hai

Sanam ki har baat ko smajti hai
Jab ho woh udas tho yea bhi roh padti hai

har rah mea har mood pe saath nibati hai
par kabhi kabhi bada ulajati hai

sajna ki har baat pe gudgudati hai
tho kabhi gabra k apni Dhadkan badati hai
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Shikha12
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«Reply #2 on: May 15, 2007, 06:19:15 PM »
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That's Very Lovely Punam.... =D>

Divya..  Very Nice Addition by you too.... Usual Smile

Keep It Up... Good Job Both of You.... =D>
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Rajbir
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«Reply #3 on: May 16, 2007, 12:44:42 PM »
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Punam, Divya

=D> =D> =D>

Keep going :arrow:
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punam
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«Reply #4 on: May 16, 2007, 03:07:05 PM »
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Thnaku ji... raj ji...
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punam
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«Reply #5 on: May 16, 2007, 03:08:11 PM »
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ye waqt yun hi theher jaye
jab wo hamare samne aaye

wo kholdiye apne dil ki keetab
meri khamoshi se wo chat pataye

ye dil dharak raha hai unhi ke naam se
yeh koi jake unse keh aaye..
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punam
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«Reply #6 on: May 16, 2007, 03:13:16 PM »
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Divya ji shikha di thanx ...chalo aap ko acha laga...
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deepika_divya
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«Reply #7 on: May 16, 2007, 04:11:02 PM »
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Thank u so much Shikha Di & rajbir bhaiya..

Dil ki baat kya batou yaaro
is Dastan kud bhi na samaj paai hun

chahte hai jisko hum Dil se
usse pyar na jatla paai hun

Sajna bhi pada natkat hai
aur mein uski chaht ko ab tak na samaj paai hun
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punam
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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2007, 11:19:58 AM »
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Badal ko kya pata kab kahan usse barasna hai
hum nadan kya jane chahat ko kahan chupana hai
wo paas nahi to kya hua
unki ehsash to hamara sath hai
amawas ki raat hai to kya hua
unki yaado se dil to roshan hai
kaise samjhaun main unhe
zindagi ke raho me unki jarurat muje kitni hai...
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punam
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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2007, 06:37:42 PM »
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Raat bhar intezar me waqt gujarti rahi
kab aayegi Sajan ka sandesha , raah dekhti rahi
Kab hogi sajan ki saath, yehi khayal dil me aati rahi
Unki yaadon ki shama har pal jalati rahi...
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