DIN MEIN DEEDAR SITARON KA KAHAN HOTA HAI !!

by justtauseef on December 25, 2012, 04:46:10 PM
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पैर के छालों  से तब दर्द कहाँ होता है

सामने यार हो फिर होश कहाँ होता है

शुक्र अल्लाह का अँधेरा हुआ तुम नज़र आये

दिन में दीदार सितारों का कहाँ होता है !!

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«Reply #1 on: December 25, 2012, 05:20:33 PM »
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«Reply #2 on: December 25, 2012, 05:52:14 PM »
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पैर के छालों  से तब दर्द कहाँ होता है

सामने यार हो फिर होश कहाँ होता है

शुक्र अल्लाह का अँधेरा हुआ तुम नज़र आये

दिन में दीदार सितारों का कहाँ होता है !!

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«Reply #3 on: December 25, 2012, 06:10:39 PM »
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पैर के छालों  से तब दर्द कहाँ होता है

सामने यार हो फिर होश कहाँ होता है

शुक्र अल्लाह का अँधेरा हुआ तुम नज़र आये

दिन में दीदार सितारों का कहाँ होता है !!

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«Reply #5 on: December 25, 2012, 08:13:07 PM »
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«Reply #6 on: December 25, 2012, 10:02:07 PM »
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«Reply #7 on: December 25, 2012, 10:43:45 PM »
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Tauseef ji bahot achhe ashaar likhe hain. Takhayyul bahut uncha hai lekin zara qafiye par bhi dhyan dijiye.
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2012, 12:54:31 PM »
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«Reply #10 on: December 26, 2012, 03:19:32 PM »
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Thanks a lot dear friends.
@ Riyaz Ashna :Please make changes in my couplets to get it better as you suggest!
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