..~~Ehsaas e Muhoobat~~...

by HumTum on August 21, 2005, 11:10:33 AM
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Dedicated To My Love Meena





Dil mein ik Meetha sa  pyaar ka ehsaas  jagaya hai tune
Aaj mujh ko mere hi wajood se milwaya hai tune

Ik umr se tadpta tha jis pyaar ke liye yeh dil
Aa ke meri zindgi mein, who lamha dhikaya hai tune

Zindgi iss kadar bhi sawaar jayegi yeh socha na tha
Jeete jee dedaar e zaanat e jahaan ka karwaya hai tune

Bikre se sab sapne they, ik toota sa dil tha mera
Barsa ke pyaar apna, mujhey jeene ke kabil bnaya hai tune

Dhikhayi hai ik nyi duniya, karwai hai khushiyon se mulakaat
Apne sunehri khawaboon se mera ashiyaan sajaya hai tune

Basne lagi hai tu in sasoon mein, sara jahaan apna sa lagta hai
Ik zarra tha zameen ka mein, muhey aftaab banaya hai tune

Kitna tanha tha mein zindgi mein, na koi khushi na koi malaal
Thaam ke mera hath , kitna haseen har manzar banaya hai tune

kuvvat-e-mohabbat se ab tak mahroom hi rha tha mein
kar ke  pyaar ki barish, mujhey khusnaseeb banaya hai tune

Baras rahe the aansoon abr se simat gayi thi saanse seene me jab
Meri na-umeed e zindgi mein umeed e diya bhi jalaya hai tune

Saaqi-e-jawanise se hum ab tak  jaam e ghum bahut peechuke
Apni ankhoon ke mehkhane se, jaam e zindgi pilaya hai tune

Sururoinbisath ka har lamha jawan hota hai, jab dekhta hoon tujhey
Jane iss dil ko hua hai kya, jane kaun sa jaddu chalaya hai tune

Is junoon ki aagey ab aur kya hai manzil, yhi sochta hoon aksar
Mere zahen o dil mein aaj ik ajab sa tufaan uthaya hai tune

Uff yeh teri ik nazar mein kya tilisam hai kya jaduugari hai “Meena”
Iss shukhnwar “HumTum” ko jis kadar apna dewana banaya hai tune !!!


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«Reply #1 on: August 21, 2005, 11:17:44 AM »
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wowwwwww humtum ji!!! thats really sweet and thank u :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:  :oops:
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nikki
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«Reply #2 on: August 21, 2005, 01:51:36 PM »
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beautifull Humtum ..............................................
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Ghazal
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«Reply #3 on: August 21, 2005, 04:11:41 PM »
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bohot khoob hum tum

mohobat wo aahsaas hai  
jissy pathar bhi phool banty hai
iss aahssas ko bohot kam loog hi mahsoos karty hai

mohobat to wo aahssas hai
jisey murjhay phool bhi mahkty hai

mohobat wo ahsaas hai
jissy sily hooth bhi chahkty hai

iss mohobat key aahsaas ko hum bhi samjhty hai
jis aahssas mein jawaa dil bahakty hai
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«Reply #4 on: August 21, 2005, 05:11:11 PM »
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Wah humtum,bohat hi khoob.Nice 2 c ya back :D nice work ghazal too.
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2005, 04:31:03 AM »
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thx nidhi

nice work hum tum nikki &meena

app sabny hi bohot accha likha hai

ahsaas mohobat wo hi samjhta hai
jiskey daman mein mahboob hota hai
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«Reply #6 on: August 22, 2005, 07:27:44 AM »
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Shocked
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kya karu ... kya kahun... bAHUT ACCHA LIKHA HAI janab...good good
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2005, 08:09:01 AM »
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zindgi bhar jiska intzaar kiya
uss jalim ney hamara etbaar toor diya

zindgi usko mana
wo kbhi tha hamara dewana
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«Reply #8 on: August 29, 2005, 04:35:27 PM »
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[you]Dedicated To My Love Meena[/you]


Dil mein ik Meetha sa  pyaar ka ehsaas  jagaya hai tune
Aaj mujh ko mere hi wajood se milwaya hai tune

Ik umr se tadpta tha jis pyaar ke liye yeh dil
Aa ke meri zindgi mein, who lamha dhikaya hai tune

Zindgi iss kadar bhi sawaar jayegi yeh socha na tha
Jeete jee dedaar e zaanat e jahaan ka karwaya hai tune

Bikre se sab sapne they, ik toota sa dil tha mera
Barsa ke pyaar apna, mujhey jeene ke kabil bnaya hai tune

Dhikhayi hai ik nyi duniya, karwai hai khushiyon se mulakaat
Apne sunehri khawaboon se mera ashiyaan sajaya hai tune

Basne lagi hai tu in sasoon mein, sara jahaan apna sa lagta hai
Ik zarra tha zameen ka mein, muhey aftaab banaya hai tune

Kitna tanha tha mein zindgi mein, na koi khushi na koi malaal
Thaam ke mera hath , kitna haseen har manzar banaya hai tune

kuvvat-e-mohabbat se ab tak mahroom hi rha tha mein
kar ke  pyaar ki barish, mujhey khusnaseeb banaya hai tune

Baras rahe the aansoon abr se simat gayi thi saanse seene me jab
Meri na-umeed e zindgi mein umeed e diya bhi jalaya hai tune

Saaqi-e-jawanise se hum ab tak  jaam e ghum bahut peechuke
Apni ankhoon ke mehkhane se, jaam e zindgi pilaya hai tune

Sururoinbisath ka har lamha jawan hota hai, jab dekhta hoon tujhey
Jane iss dil ko hua hai kya, jane kaun sa jaddu chalaya hai tune

Is junoon ki aagey ab aur kya hai manzil, yhi sochta hoon aksar
Mere zahen o dil mein aaj ik ajab sa tufaan uthaya hai tune

Uff yeh teri ik nazar mein kya tilisam hai kya jaduugari hai “Meena”
Iss shukhnwar “HumTum” ko jis kadar apna dewana banaya hai tune !!!

[/b]
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ek jawab:

tere dil me ek mitha sa ehesas jaga kar,
khud ke dil ko bhi pyar me dhadkane lagi...

pyar ki tadap kya hoti hai na jante te hum,
dil ko ishq me bechain kar ke, khud ko tadpane lagi...

tujhe pane ke baad na kuch aur manga kabhi Khuda se,
teri mohabbat me bhi, sanam, sari kushiyan mai pane lagi...

jee karta hai khwabon ki duniya me khoyi rahon mai,
jabse har raat palko pe tere sapne mai sajane lagi....

tujhe deewana bana kar mai bhi kaha bach payi oh sanam,
teri yeh deewangi hi meri neende, chain sab churane lagi!!!


umeed hai pasand aya hoga  :wink:
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«Reply #9 on: August 29, 2005, 06:45:11 PM »
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mujhe to bohat pasand aaya:D ...........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 31, 2005, 09:17:22 AM »
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mujhy bhi bohot pasand aaya

par zindgi to zindgi hai
koi sapna nahi
jo sab dekh saky
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2005, 09:37:53 AM »
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Abslute fine work by all , and gazal je'z 1 one really heart touching cuplets , best of luck from me 2 all lovers .

   Maine mahobaat ki aaur aasiq ban-aaya sanam ki yaad me
   Mahobaat ho paas to haryali hai nahi to tanha hai fool baag me
   dekho dil diya , pyar kia fir khud ko tanha kia aaur chor diya aag me.
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«Reply #12 on: September 01, 2005, 10:13:40 AM »
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Bahot Khub....

Hal-e dil yar ko likhu kniu kar,
Hat dil se juda nahin hota. [NM]
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«Reply #13 on: September 01, 2005, 08:16:19 PM »
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hai!! kya ghazal likhi hai humtum!! u r terriffic!! i love it!! congrats meena sab aapki tareef mein hai!

hum to tadapte hain ki ik jhalak mil jaye yaar ki,
manzil mil jaye hume apne pyaar ki,
par kahan hai meri kismat aisi,
ki jhalak bhi mil jaye mujhe mere yaar ki.....

best of luck to u lovers.........
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«Reply #14 on: September 03, 2005, 11:59:39 AM »
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thx a lot  app sab ney bhi bohot accha likha hai

tanhaeyo ka jo aandhera hai
wahi to mohobat mein kal ka sawera hai
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