ek aisa geet gana chahta hoon me

by khatru on March 23, 2009, 06:48:36 AM
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ek aisa geet gana chahta hoon me ,khushi ho ya gam bas muskurana chahta hoon me,jo ude uchayion par to naya kya kiya,saath me har kisi ke pankh failana chahta hoon mewo sochte ki me akela hoon unke bina ,tanhayi saath hai mere itna batana chahta hoon me,bas khushi ho har pal aur mehke ye gulshan sara,abhi hatr kisi ke gam ko apna banana chahta hoon me
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«Reply #1 on: March 23, 2009, 07:00:23 AM »
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Nice one dear bas ek baat kehna chahta hoon...plss bura mat man na...agli baar punctuation marks aur line spacing ka dhyan rakhna...likha toh apne bahaut acha hai...
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«Reply #2 on: April 06, 2009, 04:24:56 PM »
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gamo k beena zindagi adhri h
ae musafir phr b tera jeena jaruri
yu nirash na ho apni zindagi se
tu nai janta,teri zindagi k beena...khi ek zindagi adhri h
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«Reply #4 on: April 06, 2009, 04:36:20 PM »
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ek aisa geet gana chahta hoon me ,khushi ho ya gam bas muskurana chahta hoon me,jo ude uchayion par to naya kya kiya,saath me har kisi ke pankh failana chahta hoon mewo sochte ki me akela hoon unke bina ,tanhayi saath hai mere itna batana chahta hoon me,bas khushi ho har pal aur mehke ye gulshan sara,abhi hatr kisi ke gam ko apna banana chahta hoon me

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