Ek Diwani

by Roja on April 02, 2009, 02:47:33 AM
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Lukte chupte rukte jukhte khele aankh micholi re...
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re...

Choodi khanakti chaal tumakti chali gori yamuna tat ko chod ke,
Dekh piya ki ek jalak bas bhaagi woh goongat ood ke,
Dhadke seena dekh haisna akhiyan se akhiyan jab doli re..
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re

Mukh chupaye payal bajaye gori nainon se kare ishare,
Dekh ke kajal manva pagal tuk tuk usse hi nihare..
Bor suhani mein hoke diwani wo gupchup has-has boli re..
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re...

Chali na jaana O' Meri Jaan rukh jana milne aana kal ki raat ko,
Laaj ke mare vo paani ho gayi sun ke pyar ber baat ko,
Haat hila ke aanchal dikha ke dhur se Wada kar gayi boli re..
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re.........

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«Reply #1 on: April 03, 2009, 01:16:17 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut achhe Roja...
Really Nice One..
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«Reply #2 on: April 03, 2009, 02:34:31 PM »
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Waah Roja Behan, Kya khoob Likha Hai Yaar Aapne,.

Nice One,.

yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

Har Baar Ki Tarah Behad pasand Aaya ye Bhi Aapka Kalaam,.
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«Reply #3 on: April 03, 2009, 04:10:21 PM »
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Arey wahhhhh kya baat hain badi chanchal peshkash thi...Ghayel jaisa bore insan bhi Romantic ho gaya hain....

Sun ri haseena paas to aana
Dekh main laya bindaya kangan choli re

Apne hatho se tujhe sajaoo
Le jaoo bhitha ke doli re

-SG-
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«Reply #4 on: April 03, 2009, 04:23:31 PM »
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Hey ! sweetheart.. its really beautiful. keep writing dear...
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Talat
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«Reply #5 on: April 03, 2009, 04:29:49 PM »
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Lukte chupte rukte jukhte khele aankh micholi re...
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re...

Choodi khanakti chaal tumakti chali gori yamuna tat ko chod ke,
Dekh piya ki ek jalak bas bhaagi woh goongat ood ke,
Dhadke seena dekh haisna akhiyan se akhiyan jab doli re..
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re

Mukh chupaye payal bajaye gori nainon se kare ishare,
Dekh ke kajal manva pagal tuk tuk usse hi nihare..
Bor suhani mein hoke diwani wo gupchup has-has boli re..
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re...

Chali na jaana O' Meri Jaan rukh jana milne aana kal ki raat ko,
Laaj ke mare vo paani ho gayi sun ke pyar ber baat ko,
Haat hila ke aanchal dikha ke dhur se Wada kar gayi boli re..
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re.........


Waah...beautiful creation Roja
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Roja
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«Reply #6 on: April 04, 2009, 02:17:36 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause
Bahut bahut achhe Roja...
Really Nice One..

Thanks dear Hasina... Usual Smile
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«Reply #7 on: April 04, 2009, 02:18:28 AM »
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Waah Roja Behan, Kya khoob Likha Hai Yaar Aapne,.

Nice One,.

yunhi Likhte Rahiye,.

Har Baar Ki Tarah Behad pasand Aaya ye Bhi Aapka Kalaam,.

Thanks brother Azeem  Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: April 04, 2009, 02:28:56 AM »
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Arey wahhhhh kya baat hain badi chanchal peshkash thi...Ghayel jaisa bore insan bhi Romantic ho gaya hain....

Sun ri haseena paas to aana
Dekh main laya bindaya kangan choli re

Apne hatho se tujhe sajaoo
Le jaoo bhitha ke doli re

-SG-

Shukriya Sajid ji... waise mujhe likhna toh aata nahi mohabbat mein.. fir b likha  tongue3

Jism chahe ho mera sangdil,
Ismein basnewali Jaan tum hi hai..

Na pehchanega koyi mujhe tujhbin,
Meri toh Mohabbat mein Pehchan tum hi hai..

Na jee sakhungi ek pal bhi tujbin,
Mere toh jeene ka her samaan tum hi hai...  Giggle

Kya karungi lekar tera diya "Bindia, Kangan, Choli", Sajid
Mehfil mein toh Mehkta GHAYAL tum hi hai.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: April 04, 2009, 02:29:52 AM »
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Hey ! sweetheart.. its really beautiful. keep writing dear...

Thanks Dear Sophi.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 04, 2009, 03:26:36 AM »
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Lukte chupte rukte jukhte khele aankh micholi re...
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re...

Choodi khanakti chaal tumakti chali gori yamuna tat ko chod ke,
Dekh piya ki ek jalak bas bhaagi woh goongat ood ke,
Dhadke seena dekh haisna akhiyan se akhiyan jab doli re..
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re

Mukh chupaye payal bajaye gori nainon se kare ishare,
Dekh ke kajal manva pagal tuk tuk usse hi nihare..
Bor suhani mein hoke diwani wo gupchup has-has boli re..
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re...

Chali na jaana O' Meri Jaan rukh jana milne aana kal ki raat ko,
Laaj ke mare vo paani ho gayi sun ke pyar ber baat ko,
Haat hila ke aanchal dikha ke dhur se Wada kar gayi boli re..
Raat ka tara ishara bana chanda bana humjoli re.........


bhut khoob roja..............bhut acha likha hai aapne jwab nhi[b/]
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«Reply #11 on: April 04, 2009, 09:11:24 AM »
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Shukriya Sajid ji... waise mujhe likhna toh aata nahi mohabbat mein.. fir b likha  tongue3

Jism chahe ho mera sangdil,
Ismein basnewali Jaan tum hi hai..

Na pehchanega koyi mujhe tujhbin,
Meri toh Mohabbat mein Pehchan tum hi hai..

Na jee sakhungi ek pal bhi tujbin,
Mere toh jeene ka her samaan tum hi hai...  Giggle

Kya karungi lekar tera diya "Bindia, Kangan, Choli", Sajid
Mehfil mein toh Mehkta GHAYAL tum hi hai.. Usual Smile


Nahi karti woh ladki kabhi iqraar nahi karti
Yeh alag baat hain pagli, GHAYEL se bohat pyaar hain karti
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«Reply #12 on: April 04, 2009, 03:49:21 PM »
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bhut khoob roja..............bhut acha likha hai aapne jwab nhi[b/]

Thanks Aslam ji.  Usual Smile
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«Reply #13 on: April 04, 2009, 04:03:47 PM »
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Nahi karti woh ladki kabhi iqraar nahi karti
Yeh alag baat hain pagli, GHAYEL se bohat pyaar hain karti

Tum hi ho meri anmol zindagi sanam
Aur mai dilber hu teri
Tab tak kuch bhi na kha saku,
Jab tak yaara tera pyar bara khat na dekhu ......


 
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