MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI .......... (Jasbir Singh)

by jasbirsingh on December 25, 2008, 08:52:30 PM
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INN DINOH YEH HALAT HO GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

TERE PYAR KI DHUN AAJ BHI SUNAYI DETI HAI
ROM ROM MERE YU DIL MEH BASS GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

NAZAR FIR BHI KAHI TU AATA NAHI
HAR TARAF MERI YEH NAZAR GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

TANHAYI KEY ISS MELE MEH
MERI AAKHEY TARAS GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

FIR SEY AAKEY MERE SAPNEY SAJA JA
BAHEY MERI INTEZAAR MEH KHUL GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI



JASBIR SINGH
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #1 on: December 26, 2008, 12:25:35 AM »
Nice one Jasbir Ji
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Pooja
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«Reply #2 on: December 26, 2008, 01:11:47 AM »
Meera thi deewani aor deewani he rahi
phir ki to, kabhi koi kahani na rahi

pyar ho jaye jab kabhi ek baar insaan ko
uski khud ki zindagi kabhi, uski zindgani na rahi
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Sonia01
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«Reply #3 on: December 26, 2008, 03:01:39 AM »
Good creation Jas ji... and Pooja di aap toh simply good  love9

Meera bani jogan kishan k liye
bavla bani apne pyar mein

Jo is pyar ko na samja zamana
hum insanon ka bawna ko kaun samjega?

Her pal dil unhe sochte hai
kabhi dukh ko kabhi taqder ko koste hai

Pyar ko kabhi apno ne nahi apnaya
kabhi zamane ne nahi apnaya..


(I dont know whether this one is correctly expressed or not..
Please tell me how i did.... Pooja di..tongue3)
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cara
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«Reply #4 on: December 26, 2008, 03:48:22 AM »
meera mohan ki deewani ek bar jo ban gayi,
meera mohan ki janam-janam tak rehegayi.





meera mohan ki deewani ek bar jo ban gayi,
mohan ke man me meera janam-janam tak rahegayi.

deewangi chuti kahan thi,jo firse dewani ban gayi.......jasbirji
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #5 on: December 26, 2008, 06:39:41 AM »
Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 26, 2008, 12:25:35 AM
Nice one Jasbir Ji

Thanks Rajesh

Jasbir Singh
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #6 on: December 26, 2008, 06:50:28 AM »
Quote from: Pooja on December 26, 2008, 01:11:47 AM
Meera thi deewani aor deewani he rahi
phir ki to, kabhi koi kahani na rahi

pyar ho jaye jab kabhi ek baar insaan ko
uski khud ki zindagi kabhi, uski zindgani na rahi

wah bahut khoob JI
sahi kaha aap neh , lekin


AAJ KEY YUG MEH , MEERA KAHA REH GAYI
KALYUG MEH MEERA KI KAHANI KAHA REH GAYI

PEHLEY THEY, EK HI MOHAN, EK HI SHYAAM
AAJ YEH HOGAYE, ALAG ALAG DOH INSAAN

ISS SAAL THEY MOHAN MERE, AGLEY SAAL SHYAAM
DIWANI MEERA AAJ BHI HAI, PAR BADAL GAYE SHYAAM

MEERA JOGAN KAL BHI THI, MEERA JOGAN AAJ BHI HAI
DUKH DARD YEH KAL BHI THA, DUKH DARD YEH AAJ BHI HAI

DIN BADLEY,YUG BADLEY, BADAL GAYE INSAAN
PYAR KA DARD WAHI RAHA, NA BADAL PAYA INSAAN

MEERA BANN NA KATHIN HAI, NA HAR KOI MEERA BAN PAYA
JISNEY KIYA PYAR WAFA SEY, WOH HI MEERA BAN PAYA




JASBIR SINGH
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #7 on: December 26, 2008, 07:05:12 AM »
Quote from: Sonia01 on December 26, 2008, 03:01:39 AM
Good creation Jas ji... and Pooja di aap toh simply good  love9

Meera bani jogan kishan k liye
bavla bani apne pyar mein

Jo is pyar ko na samja zamana
hum insanon ka bawna ko kaun samjega?

Her pal dil unhe sochte hai
kabhi dukh ko kabhi taqder ko koste hai

Pyar ko kabhi apno ne nahi apnaya
kabhi zamane ne nahi apnaya..


(I dont know whether this one is correctly expressed or not..
Please tell me how i did.... Pooja di..tongue3)



tHANKS sonia
wah bahut khoob kaha aap neh bhi


MEERA SHYAAM KI HO GAYI
SHYAAM KOH KHO KAR BHI
SHYAAM KI HO GAYI

PYAAR KI HADD PAAR KAR DI
NA BANI SHYAAM KI
PAR PYAAR KI DOR BAAND DI

AAJ TOH NA KOI MEERA HAI
NA KOI REH GAYA HAI SHYAAM
REH GAYE TOH KEWAL NAAM

JAMANA TOH AAJ BHI WOHI JAMANA HAI
NA SAMAJ PAYE PYAR MEERA KA
AAJ TOH FIR BHI KALYUG KA JAMANA HAI

SAMAJ JATEY GAR HAMEY APNEY
MEERA AAJ BHI HO JATEY KAI, SONIA
BASS JATEY GHAR AAJ KAI, SONIA.



JASBIR SINGH
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #8 on: December 26, 2008, 07:37:43 AM »
Quote from: cara on December 26, 2008, 03:48:22 AM
meera mohan ki deewani ek bar jo ban gayi,
meera mohan ki janam-janam tak rehegayi.





meera mohan ki deewani ek bar jo ban gayi,
mohan ke man me meera janam-janam tak rahegayi.

deewangi chuti kahan thi,jo firse dewani ban gayi.......jasbirji







CARA


DEEWANI MEERA AAJ BHI HAI
PAR SHYAAM BADAL GAYE
DEEWANY SHYAAM AAJ BHI HAI
PAR MEERA BADAL GAYI

DEEWANGI KI HADD NA POOCHO HUM SEY TUM
DEEWANEY AAJ BHI SAB NAZAR AAYENGEY
KAM HI MILENGEY AISEY, JOH MEERA BAN PAYENGEY

DHOKA PYAR MEH KHA KEY, DEEWANGI BHOOL JATEY HAI
KUCH HI DINOH MEH, USI SEY YEH MOOH FAIR JATEY HAI

PAR KUCH LOGOH SEY MILKEY* , YEH LAGA HAMEY BHI
DEEWANGI AAJ BHI JINDA HAI, MEERA DIKHI HAMEY BHI

FIR SEY LAGTA HAI, MEERA DIWANI HO GAYI
PYAR DEKH KAR INKA, MEERA MASTANI HO GAYI


* on yo india



JASBIR SINGH
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«Reply #9 on: December 26, 2008, 01:26:01 PM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 25, 2008, 08:52:30 PM

INN DINOH YEH HALAT HO GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

TERE PYAR KI DHUN AAJ BHI SUNAYI DETI HAI
ROM ROM MERE YU DIL MEH BASS GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

NAZAR FIR BHI KAHI TU AATA NAHI
HAR TARAF MERI YEH NAZAR GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

TANHAYI KEY ISS MELE MEH
MERI AAKHEY TARAS GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

FIR SEY AAKEY MERE SAPNEY SAJA JA
BAHEY MERI INTEZAAR MEH KHUL GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com



Wah Kya BaatHai JASBIR Bhai.. Bahut Bahut Khubsoorat Jazzbaat Bikhere Hain Aapne yahan..!! Alfaazon Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Sajaaya Hai aapne.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #10 on: December 27, 2008, 06:34:53 AM »
Quote from: Mann on December 26, 2008, 01:26:01 PM
Wah Kya BaatHai JASBIR Bhai.. Bahut Bahut Khubsoorat Jazzbaat Bikhere Hain Aapne yahan..!! Alfaazon Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Sajaaya Hai aapne.. Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Thanks MANN
aap key saamney hum toh kuch bhi nahi hai. Aap bahut umda shayer ho, bahut hi khoobsurat likhtey ho aap.

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #11 on: December 27, 2008, 10:48:18 AM »
JASBIR Bhai.. Aisa Kaha Kar Mujhe Sharminda mat Kijiye.. Koi Shayar Umda nahi Hota... Umda Hote Hain Uske Ehasaas.. Uske Jazzbaat.. Jo aapke Paas bhi aur Mere Paas Bhi..!! Isliye Lajawab Shayar To aap Bhi Hain..!! aur Aapka Likha padhna humen Bahut Accha lagta Hai.. Unhi Hi Likhte Rahiye..!! Hum to kaayal Hain aapki Shayari ke..!! Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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jasbirsingh
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«Reply #12 on: December 28, 2008, 06:33:41 PM »
Quote from: Mann on December 27, 2008, 10:48:18 AM
JASBIR Bhai.. Aisa Kaha Kar Mujhe Sharminda mat Kijiye.. Koi Shayar Umda nahi Hota... Umda Hote Hain Uske Ehasaas.. Uske Jazzbaat.. Jo aapke Paas bhi aur Mere Paas Bhi..!! Isliye Lajawab Shayar To aap Bhi Hain..!! aur Aapka Likha padhna humen Bahut Accha lagta Hai.. Unhi Hi Likhte Rahiye..!! Hum to kaayal Hain aapki Shayari ke..!! Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**


WAH WAH MAAN SAHEB, MAAN GAYE AAP KOH,
YEH BAATEY SUNN KAR, MEERA TOH KYA
SHYAAM BHI DIWANA HO JAYEGA
PAIDD PEH CHADKAR, ISHQ KA JHANDA LEH RAYEGA  Laughing hard


waisey Thanks Mann for your kind and soft butterly praise but the truth remains, you write so well and i really like to read your poems. You are a born writer. Hats off to you...  Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

Jasbir Singh
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«Reply #13 on: December 29, 2008, 09:48:56 AM »
Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 25, 2008, 08:52:30 PM

INN DINOH YEH HALAT HO GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

TERE PYAR KI DHUN AAJ BHI SUNAYI DETI HAI
ROM ROM MERE YU DIL MEH BASS GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

NAZAR FIR BHI KAHI TU AATA NAHI
HAR TARAF MERI YEH NAZAR GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

TANHAYI KEY ISS MELE MEH
MERI AAKHEY TARAS GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI

FIR SEY AAKEY MERE SAPNEY SAJA JA
BAHEY MERI INTEZAAR MEH KHUL GAYI HAI
MEERA FIR SEY DIWANI HO GAYI HAI



JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com




Nice one Jasbir Ji.... n All.

Jasbir Ji, I have attempted not to correct your original poem but to write what I feel. Please don’t mind. 


Shuru phir whi kahani ho gyi hai
Ke Meera Rani deewani ho gyi hai

you have written that 'Meera phir se deewani ho gyi hai' but the fact is: Meera was deewani for Mohan all the time so she can not be his Deewani again. So, we can say 'Shuru phir whi kahani ho gyi hai, Ke Meera Rani deewani ho gyi hai' that some one again repeating the story that Meera is deewani.

Chod mahloon ko mein ban gyi hoon jogan
Meri deewangi hi meri nishani ho gyi hai
Ke Meera Rani deewani ho gyi hai... 

Tere pyaar ki dhun har lamha sunai deti hai
Teri preet hi ab meri zindgani ho gyi hai
Ke Meera Rani dewaani ho gyi hai....

Tera hi Jalwa dikahi deta hai har taraf
Duniya ki har cheez suhaani ho gyi hai
Ke Meera Rani deewani ho gyi hai....



HumTum  hello
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«Reply #14 on: December 29, 2008, 09:56:55 AM »
Quote from: HumTum on December 29, 2008, 09:48:56 AM

Nice one Jasbir Ji.... n All.

Jasbir Ji, I have attempted not to correct your original poem but to write what I feel. Please don’t mind. 


Shuru phir whi kahani ho gyi hai
Ke Meera Rani deewani ho gyi hai

you have written that 'Meera phir se deewani ho gyi hai' but the fact is: Meera was deewani for Mohan all the time so she can not be his Deewani again. So, we can say 'Shuru phir whi kahani ho gyi hai, Ke Meera Rani deewani ho gyi hai' that some one again repeating the story that Meera is deewani.

Chod mahloon ko mein ban gyi hoon jogan
Meri deewangi hi meri nishani ho gyi hai
Ke Meera Rani deewani ho gyi hai... 

Tere pyaar ki dhun har lamha sunai deti hai
Teri preet hi ab meri zindgani ho gyi hai
Ke Meera Rani dewaani ho gyi hai....

Tera hi Jalwa dikahi deta hai har taraf
Duniya ki har cheez suhaani ho gyi hai
Ke Meera Rani deewani ho gyi hai....



HumTum  hello


wah wah, bahut badiya, bahut hi badiya HUM TUM
bahut khoob kaha aap ney and sach kaha aap ney.
padd kar bahut accha laga....


Jasbir Singh
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