KAVITA BAN GAYI ....... (Jasbir Singh):Pain in Love : Punjabi poetry

jasbirsingh

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DIL TUTIYA JADO MERA
KAVITA BAN GAYI
SADMA LAGA JADO MAINU
KAVITA BAN GAYI

AASOO JADOH AAYE ISHQ WHICH
KAVITA BAN GAYI
AKALLA JADOH PAYA MEHFIL WHICH
KAVITA BAN GAYI

GINNDA JADOH RATAH WHICH TAREY
KAVITA BAN GAYI
CHAND NU DEKHYA TANHA
KAVITA BAN GAYI

DIL JADOH TUTIYA MERA
KAVITA BAN GAYI
SADMA LAGA JADOH MAINU
KAVITA BAN GAYI
KAVITA BAN GAYI

JASBIR SINGH
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Rajesh Harish

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI

«Reply #1 on: December 04, 2008, 06:08:32 PM »

Nice one Jas Ji

Ishq hoya rattan jag ke kattia
Kavita ban gayi
Zindagi de dhakkia mainu
Kavita ban gayi


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jasbirsingh

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI

«Reply #2 on: December 04, 2008, 06:40:56 PM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 04, 2008, 06:08:32 PM

Nice one Jas Ji

Ishq hoya rattan jag ke kattia
Kavita ban gayi
Zindagi de dhakkia mainu
Kavita ban gayi

Thanks Rajesh
and nice sharing aswell.

Jasbir Singh


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k.shael

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI

«Reply #3 on: December 05, 2008, 10:06:21 AM »

NICE ONE JAS JI, Applause

BY. K.SHAEL

AANKHYAAN ROYIYAAN JADO MERIYAA
TAAN KAVITA BAN GAYI,
DIL BHAR AAYA JADO MERA TAAN KAVITA
BAN GAYI,

RAATI DASYA JADD HAAL DARD BHARE DIL
DA CHANN TAAREYA NU TAAN KAVITA BAN
GAYI,
SAWEER HOYI JADOO KALLE GAMMA DE PARCHAWE
WICH TAAN KAVITA BAN GAYI...


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jasbirsingh

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI

«Reply #4 on: December 05, 2008, 10:13:06 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on December 05, 2008, 10:06:21 AM

NICE ONE JAS JI, Applause

very beautifully said shael.

BICHDEYA JADO PYAR MERA
KAVITA BAN GAYI
DEKHEYA JADOH PYAR TERA
KAVITA BAN GAYI

HAIRAAN HO KEY JADOH DEKHIYA
KAVITA BAN GAYI
DEKH KEY VI TU MOOH MODIYA
KAVITA BAN GAYI

JASBIR SINGH
hira_company@yahoo.com


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k.shael

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI

«Reply #5 on: December 05, 2008, 10:18:27 AM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 05, 2008, 10:13:06 AM

SHUKRIYA JAS JI,
& NICE REPLY...

BUT PLZ CALL ME SHALLY.

TU HOYA JADOO BEWAFAYI KARKE DOOR
TAAN KAVITA BAN GAYI,
TERI AAYI JADOON YAAD HAR PAL TAAN
KAVITA BAN GAYI,

LOKKA NE JADOO DITTE TAANE TERE NAAM DE
TAAN KAVITA BAN GAYI,
JADO DEKHYA TENU KISE HOR NAAL PAUNDE
PYAAR TAAN KAVITA BAN GAYI.


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jasbirsingh

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI

«Reply #6 on: December 05, 2008, 10:48:50 AM »

Quote from: k.shael on December 05, 2008, 10:18:27 AM

Thanks SHALLY and very very beautifully said.

LADEY JADOH SADEY NAAL SAREY
KAVITA BAN GAYI
MILI SI JADOH TU MAINY
KAVITA BAN GAYI

GAYII SI JADOH NAAL SADEY
KAVITA BAN GAYI
MILSEY SI JADOH HOAT SADEY
KAVITA BAN GAYI

NAKREY TERE VEKH KEY
KAVITA BAN GAYI
MANANDA SI TENU JADOH
KAVITA BAN GAYI

JASBIR SINGH


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diya786

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI

«Reply #7 on: December 05, 2008, 11:00:26 AM »

Jasbir ji aapki kavita bahut acchi lagi
bahut accha likha hai aapne
Applause


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jasbirsingh

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI

«Reply #8 on: December 05, 2008, 11:04:31 AM »

Quote from: diya786 on December 05, 2008, 11:00:26 AM

Jasbir ji aapki kavita bahut acchi lagi
bahut accha likha hai aapne
Applause

Thanks DIYA

TALI JADOH TU MARI
KAVITA BAN GAYI
ACCCHA TENU BAHUT LAGIYA
KAVITA BAN GAYI

LIKH DENTI TU VI KUCH
KAVITA BAN JANDI
MIL JANDA SANU TOPIC KUCH
KAVINTA BAN JANDI

JASBIR SINGH


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Sammual

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI ....... (Jasbir Singh)

«Reply #9 on: December 08, 2008, 01:58:56 PM »

Nice Jasbir Bhai.Acha Laga Padh Kar


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jasbirsingh

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI ....... (Jasbir Singh)

«Reply #10 on: December 09, 2008, 09:38:45 AM »

Quote from: Sammual on December 08, 2008, 01:58:56 PM

Nice Jasbir Bhai.Acha Laga Padh Kar

Thanks Sammual

Jasbir Singh


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jasbirsingh

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI ....... (Jasbir Singh)

«Reply #11 on: December 09, 2008, 07:32:02 PM »

UNSEY JAB HUM MILEY
KAVITA BAN GAYI
PHOOL JAB GULSHAN MEH KHILEY
KAVITA BAN GAYI

MEHKADEY MEH JAB AAP AAYE
KAVITA BAN GAYI
JAAM JAB CHALKAYE
KAVITA BAN GAYI

NAGAHEY JAB HAMARI TAKRAYI
KAVITA BAN GAYI
DHADKAN JAB RUK KAR AAYI
KAVITA BAN GAYI

JASBIR SINGH


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Rajesh Harish

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI ....... (Jasbir Singh)

«Reply #12 on: December 09, 2008, 07:58:24 PM »

Quote from: jasbirsingh on December 09, 2008, 07:32:02 PM

Bahut Khoob Jas Ji

Likhte hi rahe hum
Kavita ban gayee
Sochte bhi rahe hum
Kavita ban gayee
Muskurate rahe hum
Kavita ban gayee
Gungunate rahe hum
Kavita ban gayee


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Pooja

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI ....... (Jasbir Singh)

«Reply #13 on: December 09, 2008, 08:19:44 PM »

good one.... Rajesh ji and jas ji


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jasbirsingh

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Re: KAVITA BAN GAYI ....... (Jasbir Singh)

«Reply #14 on: December 10, 2008, 09:14:39 AM »

Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 09, 2008, 07:58:24 PM

Bahut Khoob Jas Ji

Likhte hi rahe hum
Kavita ban gayee
Sochte bhi rahe hum
Kavita ban gayee
Muskurate rahe hum
Kavita ban gayee
Gungunate rahe hum
Kavita ban gayee

Thanks Rajesh

Jasbir Singh


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