"ek ladki ko soch rha hu.n"

by aaina on April 20, 2009, 09:45:48 AM
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ek ladki ko soch rha hu.n hai bilkul diwani si
lagti jaane kiy.n hai mujhko wo jaani pehchani si

khat o khaal hai.n aise uske ke jaise ab bole
showcase mai rhkhi hui ek gudia japani si

khabo khabo dhoond rha hu.n mai jane kabse
aisa mujhko lagta hai yahi hai wo anjaani si

dil chahe padta jau.n bas mai padta jaau.n
uski aankho mai hai jo likhi baat ek rumani si

pehle to socha nahi tha lakin ab aisa lagta hai
karni hi padegi mujhko ek choti nadaani si

wo chahe kuch kehna aur kuch mai bhi chahu.n
dono kaha.n se shru karai.n jo hai dil ki zubani si

mein jo likhta hu.n aur jo kuch kehta hu.n
sab uske baar mai hai baat hai ye samjhani si

hukm mila hai aslam apne baare mai kuch kaho
ke do dil ki saari baatai.n warna hogi naadani si


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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2009, 09:51:34 AM »
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bohat bohat pyaara aaina ji, khoob kaha hai aapne... Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: April 20, 2009, 11:04:59 AM »
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  AAINA SB BADAA ZORDAAR REFLECTION HAI KALAAM MAIN.....GUUUD


    K_A
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«Reply #3 on: April 20, 2009, 01:04:14 PM »
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ek ladki ko soch rha hu.n hai bilkul diwani si
lagti jaane kiy.n hai mujhko wo jaani pehchani si

khat o khaal hai.n aise uske ke jaise ab bole
showcase mai rhkhi hui ek gudia japani si

khabo khabo dhoond rha hu.n mai jane kabse
aisa mujhko lagta hai yahi hai wo anjaani si

dil chahe padta jau.n bas mai padta jaau.n
uski aankho mai hai jo likhi baat ek rumani si

pehle to socha nahi tha lakin ab aisa lagta hai
karni hi padegi mujhko ek choti nadaani si

wo chahe kuch kehna aur kuch mai bhi chahu.n
dono kaha.n se shru karai.n jo hai dil ki zubani si

mein jo likhta hu.n aur jo kuch kehta hu.n
sab uske baar mai hai baat hai ye samjhani si

hukm mila hai aslam apne baare mai kuch kaho
ke do dil ki saari baatai.n warna hogi naadani si




Bohot hi khoobsurat....padhte padhte hum to is main kho se gaye.....Bohot hi khoob
Aslam Ji
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«Reply #4 on: April 20, 2009, 01:11:53 PM »
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Lafzon Se Jaana Maine, Kaisi Lagti Hogi Wo
Rang Rupehla, Roop Sunehra, Aisi Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Aankhon Main Hoga Kaajal, Palken Jhukti Uthti Si,
Khwaabon Se Utar Ke Aayi Pari Si Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Uske Dam Se Raushan Hoga, Kamre Ka Ek Ek Kona,
Honton Pe Muskaan Bikhere Kaisi Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Hum To Bas Itna Chaahen Ye Khwaab Tumhare Sach Ho Jaayen,
Haseen Khwaab Ki Ek Taabeer Jaisi Lagti Hogi Wo !!
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«Reply #5 on: April 20, 2009, 02:37:25 PM »
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Bohat Bohat Achche Aslam Bhai, Kamaal ka Likha Hai yaar Aapne,.
Yunhi Likjhte rahiye,.


Aur talat behna, As Usual A Great Work From U,.
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«Reply #6 on: April 20, 2009, 02:47:09 PM »
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ek ladki ko soch rha hu.n hai bilkul diwani si
lagti jaane kiy.n hai mujhko wo jaani pehchani si

khat o khaal hai.n aise uske ke jaise ab bole
showcase mai rhkhi hui ek gudia japani si

khabo khabo dhoond rha hu.n mai jane kabse
aisa mujhko lagta hai yahi hai wo anjaani si

dil chahe padta jau.n bas mai padta jaau.n
uski aankho mai hai jo likhi baat ek rumani si

pehle to socha nahi tha lakin ab aisa lagta hai
karni hi padegi mujhko ek choti nadaani si

wo chahe kuch kehna aur kuch mai bhi chahu.n
dono kaha.n se shru karai.n jo hai dil ki zubani si

mein jo likhta hu.n aur jo kuch kehta hu.n
sab uske baar mai hai baat hai ye samjhani si

hukm mila hai aslam apne baare mai kuch kaho
ke do dil ki saari baatai.n warna hogi naadani si




Waah.... Bahoot hi khoob likha hai Aslam ji Applause Applause Applause

Talat sis ne bhi acha likha hai!!
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«Reply #7 on: April 20, 2009, 10:43:56 PM »
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bohat bohat pyaara aaina ji, khoob kaha hai aapne... Applause Applause

thnx so much tanha.......
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«Reply #8 on: April 20, 2009, 10:50:29 PM »
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  AAINA SB BADAA ZORDAAR REFLECTION HAI KALAAM MAIN.....GUUUD
    K_A


shukriya k_A.....bhut bhut shukriya...........
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«Reply #9 on: April 21, 2009, 01:56:26 AM »
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ek ladki ko soch rha hu.n hai bilkul diwani si
lagti jaane kiy.n hai mujhko wo jaani pehchani si

khat o khaal hai.n aise uske ke jaise ab bole
showcase mai rhkhi hui ek gudia japani si

khabo khabo dhoond rha hu.n mai jane kabse
aisa mujhko lagta hai yahi hai wo anjaani si

dil chahe padta jau.n bas mai padta jaau.n
uski aankho mai hai jo likhi baat ek rumani si

pehle to socha nahi tha lakin ab aisa lagta hai
karni hi padegi mujhko ek choti nadaani si

wo chahe kuch kehna aur kuch mai bhi chahu.n
dono kaha.n se shru karai.n jo hai dil ki zubani si

mein jo likhta hu.n aur jo kuch kehta hu.n
sab uske baar mai hai baat hai ye samjhani si

hukm mila hai aslam apne baare mai kuch kaho
ke do dil ki saari baatai.n warna hogi naadani si


Fantastic... Bahut khoob Aslam ji.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley  Thumbs UP

(Wo Ek Larki Kaun hai?  Winking )
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«Reply #10 on: April 21, 2009, 02:32:04 AM »
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ek ladki ko soch rha hu.n hai bilkul diwani si
lagti jaane kiy.n hai mujhko wo jaani pehchani si

khat o khaal hai.n aise uske ke jaise ab bole
showcase mai rhkhi hui ek gudia japani si

khabo khabo dhoond rha hu.n mai jane kabse
aisa mujhko lagta hai yahi hai wo anjaani si

dil chahe padta jau.n bas mai padta jaau.n
uski aankho mai hai jo likhi baat ek rumani si

pehle to socha nahi tha lakin ab aisa lagta hai
karni hi padegi mujhko ek choti nadaani si

wo chahe kuch kehna aur kuch mai bhi chahu.n
dono kaha.n se shru karai.n jo hai dil ki zubani si

mein jo likhta hu.n aur jo kuch kehta hu.n
sab uske baar mai hai baat hai ye samjhani si

hukm mila hai aslam apne baare mai kuch kaho
ke do dil ki saari baatai.n warna hogi naadani si




WAAH KYA BAAT HAI JEEE.....
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«Reply #11 on: April 21, 2009, 09:54:57 AM »
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Bahut Khub Aaina ji
Bahut hi pyaari rachna hai Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #12 on: April 21, 2009, 09:56:40 AM »
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Aur talat behna, As Usual A Great Work From U,.

Thanks Azeem


Talat sis ne bhi acha likha hai!!

Shukriya Salma
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«Reply #13 on: April 21, 2009, 10:08:28 AM »
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Lafzon Se Jaana Maine, Kaisi Lagti Hogi Wo
Rang Rupehla, Roop Sunehra, Aisi Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Aankhon Main Hoga Kaajal, Palken Jhukti Uthti Si,
Khwaabon Se Utar Ke Aayi Pari Si Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Uske Dam Se Raushan Hoga, Kamre Ka Ek Ek Kona,
Honton Pe Muskaan Bikhere Kaisi Lagti Hogi Wo ?

Hum To Bas Itna Chaahen Ye Khwaab Tumhare Sach Ho Jaayen,
Haseen Khwaab Ki Ek Taabeer Jaisi Lagti Hogi Wo !!
Gud reply by you Dear Celmira
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«Reply #14 on: April 21, 2009, 10:10:06 AM »
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Thanks Jannat Usual Smile
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