HAR RAAT EK NAYI DASTAN HO..... SOUDAGAR

by soudagar on August 11, 2012, 12:45:59 PM
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chal main tujhe le chalun wahan jahan khula aasaman ho
ek main rahun ek tum raho,aur mohabat hamri jawan ho

sehar ho meri teri bahon mein, shaam bhi guzre teri panaho mein
bas hum dono hi sang ho, aur koi na hamare darmayaan ho

sirf pyar ka ehsaas ho, har waqt tum mere paas raho
tere sang jo beete, har us raat ki ek nayi dastaan ho

lab thirkane lage tumhre jab chhuu loon tumhe pyar se
palkein jhuk jayein tmhari, is qadar hya tum par meharban ho

har taraf mehak ho phulon ki, un se bhi jyada mehko tum
jab bhi kreeb aaon tumhre mehak tumhari meri sanso se byan ho

hamesha labon par muskraht rahe hr khushi qadmo mein bichha doon
k kabhi gum aur aansuon ka na aakhon mein tumhari nishan ho

panchi nadiya chand sitare, inke siwa koi pas na ho hamare
ye hi hamari chaht ke rajdan ye hi hamari chahat ke qadrdan ho



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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2012, 12:59:47 PM »
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Niceeee..,saudaga ji apse tawako ki darkast h
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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2012, 01:57:04 PM »
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chal main tujhe le chalun wahan jahan khula aasaman ho
ek main rahun ek tum raho,aur mohabat hamri jawan ho

sehar ho meri teri bahon mein, shaam bhi guzre teri panaho mein
bas hum dono hi sang ho, aur koi na hamare darmayaan ho

sirf pyar ka ehsaas ho, har waqt tum mere paas raho
tere sang jo beete, har us raat ki ek nayi dastaan ho

lab thirkane lage tumhre jab chhuu loon tumhe pyar se
palkein jhuk jayein tmhari, is qadar hya tum par meharban ho

har taraf mehak ho phulon ki, un se bhi jyada mehko tum
jab bhi kreeb aaon tumhre mehak tumhari meri sanso se byan ho

hamesha labon par muskraht rahe
hr khushi qadmo mein bichha doon
k kabhi gum aur aansuon ka na aakhon mein tumhari nishan ho

panchi nadiya chand sitare, inke siwa koi pas na ho hamare
ye hi hamari chaht ke rajdan ye hi hamari chahat ke qadrdan ho














Bahut Bahut Khoob Saudagarji

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«Reply #3 on: August 11, 2012, 01:57:32 PM »
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very Romantic!!! Last 6 lines thode alag se ho gaye!!! But first 8 lines are awesome!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: August 11, 2012, 03:18:15 PM »
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wah lajawab saudagarji
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«Reply #5 on: August 11, 2012, 03:44:52 PM »
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waah...Soudagar Ji, kya khoobsurat peshkash hai, romance se labrez, dheron daad
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«Reply #6 on: August 11, 2012, 04:34:37 PM »
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bahut khoob saudagar jee
kya baat hai.
wah wah wah
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«Reply #7 on: August 11, 2012, 06:42:49 PM »
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saudagar jee bohut khoob , daad qubool kijiye
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«Reply #8 on: August 11, 2012, 07:45:55 PM »
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saudagar ji bahut khoob  Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #9 on: August 11, 2012, 08:36:54 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Soudagar ji.... bahut achcha likha hai apne....!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 11, 2012, 10:28:58 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya asif ji......
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bahut bahut shukriya khawahish ji
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«Reply #12 on: August 12, 2012, 12:38:22 AM »
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chal main tujhe le chalun wahan jahan khula aasaman ho
ek main rahun ek tum raho,aur mohabat hamri jawan ho

sehar ho meri teri bahon mein, shaam bhi guzre teri panaho mein
bas hum dono hi sang ho, aur koi na hamare darmayaan ho

sirf pyar ka ehsaas ho, har waqt tum mere paas raho
tere sang jo beete, har us raat ki ek nayi dastaan ho

lab thirkane lage tumhre jab chhuu loon tumhe pyar se
palkein jhuk jayein tmhari, is qadar hya tum par meharban ho

har taraf mehak ho phulon ki, un se bhi jyada mehko tum
jab bhi kreeb aaon tumhre mehak tumhari meri sanso se byan ho

hamesha labon par muskraht rahe hr khushi qadmo mein bichha doon
k kabhi gum aur aansuon ka na aakhon mein tumhari nishan ho

panchi nadiya chand sitare, inke siwa koi pas na ho hamare
ye hi hamari chaht ke rajdan ye hi hamari chahat ke qadrdan ho



Soudagar

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«Reply #13 on: August 12, 2012, 05:50:45 AM »
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 :hello2:khoob kaha.badhai.
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«Reply #14 on: August 12, 2012, 08:43:30 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya shireen hakani ji.
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