ik din jab tumne ye kaha tha

by tabassum shakeel on June 27, 2006, 02:01:41 PM
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«Reply #15 on: June 30, 2006, 04:54:09 AM »
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bahut shukriya pankhuri
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«Reply #16 on: June 30, 2006, 04:56:19 AM »
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thanx sweet rabbit
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«Reply #17 on: June 30, 2006, 04:57:16 AM »
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thanx thanx ranju
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«Reply #18 on: June 30, 2006, 05:09:08 AM »
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Quote from: "purani_jeans_aur_guitar"
sukriya gaurav bhai ,ranjana ji....& tabassum ji ...again nice 1..........

  is bheegi bheegi raat mai,pehli barsaat mai
 yaad aa rahe hai woh din ,jab tum kaha karti thi
 jayenge hum kahi chand sitaro ke paar
 ek aise sunder jahan mai
 ishq ke aashiyaa mai
 jaha sirf tum aur main honge
 aur hongi pyaar ki batein
 na koi dukh na koi ranzish,na hi hongi dard ki aahatein....
 
 sirf tum main aur chandni raatein....ishq mai madhosh chandni raatein..........!!!!!!!!!!

...................@fahi@....................

nice one again faahi

jaadu

mera aachal tham ke us par
 tu kya likhta rahta hai
naam tera is dil pe likha hai
aachal ka kya qissa hai

tujhko isaki mahak pasand
 hai par tujhko ye pata nahi
tujhko dekh kar hi to mera
aanchal mahka karta hai

dil ki har ik dhadkan  to bas
naam tera hi leti hai
saansen tujhko chhune ko hi
shayed chalti rahti hain

ye jo tujhko  chhoo paaen to
main to kaanp si jaati hun
jaane kaisa jaadu hai ye
samajh ise na paati hun

tera jaadu mujh pe chala hai
sanvar gai hun  kuchh aise
ghar me sab hi kahte hain
kuchh achchi si main lagati hun................
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«Reply #19 on: June 30, 2006, 09:09:06 AM »
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nice 1 tabassum ji..........

 tere aanchal per naam apna likhte hai mera haath
 taaki jab tu ise ode tere aanchal ke saath saath
mera naam bhi lag jaaye sine se tere
aur dil mai utar jaaye meri chahat ki barsaat

 phir us barsaat se jism tera jalne lagega
 rago mai ishq ka shola bhadakne lagega
 sham-o-seher hoga mohabbat ka mausam
 aur tab tu janegi meri bekarrari ka aalam

aur jaanke yeh sab tu phir reh na paayegi
 bhulke sharm sari  meri der pe aayegi
aur jis chahat ki aag mai jal rahe hai hum
 us aag  ko khud apne labo se bhujayegi.

aur phir teri rangat kuch yu sanwar jayegi
 saari zindagi meri agosh mai gujar jayegi.

..............@fahi@................
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«Reply #20 on: June 30, 2006, 01:25:47 PM »
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thanx  fahi aur bahut khoob aapne likha hai......


                          rang gulabi jab bhi dekha
                              teri aankhen yaad aain
                              pyari hain vo sach much
                              itani jheel si inme gehraai

                              ik dora jo laal sa hai vo
                              teri shararat kahta hai
                              usase zara main dar jaati hun
                              verna tu achcha lagta hai

                              bikhre se jo baal hain tere
                              ik din inhen sanvaarungi
                              teri shitaabi peshaani par
                              ek nishaani rakhni hai

                              befikron si teri hansi teri
                              kyun mujhko bahut lubhati hai
                              hans kar jo tu dekhle mujhko
                              saans meri jam jaati hai

                              tujhko hardam dil me chaha
                              aankhon se to ghoora hai
                              tujhko ye ahsaas nahi hai
                              tu bas mera poora hai

                              meri sakhi se kyun poochha    tha
                              mujhko kya man bhaata hai
                              vahi rang phir pahan ke aksar
                              tu mere ghar aata hai

                              tujhko abhi hai dil me chaaha
                              tujhko nahi bataya hai
                              meri kitaaben palat palat ke
                              tu jo dhoonda karta hai

                              vo to mere dil pe likha hai
                              kagaz ki kya hasti hai
                              meri himmat jis din hogi
                              bas main tujhko de doongi

                              abhi to aankhen uthati nahi hain
                              aur kisi din sochungi
                              likhte likhte nazm ye aadhi
                              kahin main uth kar zara gai


                              aaker dekha to tu baitha
                              khush ho isko padhta
                              hai.............................
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«Reply #21 on: July 02, 2006, 05:05:11 AM »
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ek nazar vo teri dil me teer si jaake chubhati hai
bin singaar me saj jaati hun aankh gulabi rahti hai
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«Reply #22 on: July 03, 2006, 05:20:50 AM »
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Classic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #23 on: July 03, 2006, 05:29:47 AM »
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shukriya sd ji

tumhare mere  beech ke dhaage
na jaane kaise dhaage the
hame jo baandh na paae
 par ab tak toot na paae
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«Reply #24 on: July 03, 2006, 02:26:50 PM »
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tum to shayed pagal hi ho
jaane kya kya tumko pasand hai
baal zara se bikhre rakhun main
baat zara kam kam si karun main
sirf tumhi ko dekha karun main
sirf tumhare liye kihun main
sirf tumhi ko padha karun main
tum jo kahlo usko sahun main
main to zara bhi uf bhi na karti
saari baaten mere hi sar
sari galati bas meri hai
tum bas sabse achche ho
ye tumse maine hi kaha tha
aur bas ab ik main hi buri hun?
par phir bhi main yehi kahungi
tum mujhko achche lagte ho.......................
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«Reply #25 on: July 03, 2006, 06:45:46 PM »
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Behtareen Tabassumjii Usual Smile
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«Reply #26 on: July 04, 2006, 07:49:14 AM »
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ji bahut bahut shukriya sd ji aap bhi kuchh post karen yahan ham akele hi likh rahen hain kab se
aap honsla dete hain to agla kuchh post kar deten hain..................................
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«Reply #27 on: July 04, 2006, 08:01:12 AM »
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Ik din jab tumne kuch kaha(tell) tha;
Mohabbat zindagi, aur dil tumhara,  mera jahan(world) tha..

Woh waqt, woh yaadein na jane kahan(where) tha;
Aaj woh pal khawabon mein aa raha tha...

Dastak de gaya mere dil ko, haye yeh "Dildaar" kahan tha;
Shayad mohabbat se anjaan, woh kahi jee raha tha..

-Shayar_Dildaar
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«Reply #28 on: July 04, 2006, 08:08:05 AM »
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bahut koob sd ji aap hamesha achcha likhte hain aur ek shukriya is post ka bhi lijiye

anjaan hain mohabbat se aise hi hain vo diwane
shayed ki waqt e aakhir wo dil ko mere jaane
vo bhol chuke baaten jo ham se kahin thin tab
ham dil se lagae hain salon se vo afsaane
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«Reply #29 on: July 06, 2006, 04:46:51 AM »
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ik din ka ye gussa tera
mere poore dil pe chhaya
mera dil kya mera dil hai
ye ab tera hi sarmaaya
tum jo ham se khush na rahoge
 ham to khud ko pasand nahi hain
tumne kaha to hamne socha
shayed ham bhi kuch achche hain
ab to khud se chid aati hai
aisi bhi kya main hun buri si
tum sa achcha rootha mujhse
tumne kabhi ye ham se kaha tha
main tumko achchi lagti hun
aaj main tum se khud  kahti hun
main bilkul bhi achchi nahi hun.................
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