ik din jab tumne ye kaha tha

by tabassum shakeel on June 27, 2006, 02:01:41 PM
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«Reply #30 on: July 06, 2006, 04:15:25 PM »
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ik din ka ye gussa tera
mere poore dil pe chhaya
mera dil kya mera dil hai
ye ab tera hi sarmaaya
tum jo ham se khush na rahoge
 ham to khud ko pasand nahi hain
tumne kaha to hamne socha
shayed ham bhi kuch achche hain
ab to khud se chid aati hai
aisi bhi kya main hun buri si
tum sa achcha rootha mujhse
tumne kabhi ye ham se kaha tha
main tumko achchi lagti hun
aaj main tum se khud  kahti hun
main bilkul bhi achchi nahi hun.................


Kya baat hai...Wah Tabassum ji

Yoon tera khud ko Gunhegaar kehna mujhe bhi satata hai.....
Aise na kaha karo khud ke baare me harr Lafz mujhe tadpata hai.....!!!!!!!!
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #31 on: July 06, 2006, 04:58:51 PM »
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shukriya  bs
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #32 on: July 06, 2006, 07:32:41 PM »
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cool going!!!
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ranjana
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«Reply #33 on: July 07, 2006, 02:42:45 AM »
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bahut khub Tabassum ......... Usual Smile
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #34 on: July 07, 2006, 05:46:56 PM »
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cool going!!!

sd ji aap ka honsala likhva deta hai reaaly thanx :lol:
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #35 on: July 07, 2006, 05:48:05 PM »
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thanx ranju dear
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #36 on: July 08, 2006, 01:00:23 PM »
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ek aur raat jo mujhko mili hai teri jaagi aankho ki
ye meri jageer bani hai tujhko main ab kaise kahun
soch ke ab main heraan hun aisa bhi kya hota hai
jab mujhko koi dard hua to tu vahan na sota hai
pahli baar tujhe dekha hai khwab nahi vo haqeeqat thi
sirhane par tu baitha tha chonk ke main uth bathi thi
tera sweater  mujhe chua tha rang hara sa tha uska
main to sach me dar si gai thi par tu dekhke hansta tha
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shayar_dildaar
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«Reply #37 on: July 08, 2006, 02:56:26 PM »
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Nice as usual...
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purani_jeans_aur_guitar
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«Reply #38 on: July 08, 2006, 04:35:52 PM »
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very gud tabssum ji ...& sd ji nice support............

 tum kaho na kaho, per sun chuka hoon mai
 teri dil ki aahat ko ,tere labo ki chahat ko.......
 
us aag ko mehssos kiya hai maine
 jisme jal rahi hai,hum dono ki ruhe ek saath
bina kisi chingari ke ,naa hi hai dhua koi
phir bhi bhadak raha hai yeh shola
dono ke tan mai,is pagal man mai.........

ek tuk ghur rahe hai  mujhe tere nain
 aur unme uthte anginat sawal
 meri aankhon se jawab paa rahe hai
mil rahe ho jaise sadiyo baad hum
kuch yu ye pal tarsa rahe hai.......

phir tu hi bata kis tarah
tujhse door rahu main
chaha hai tujhe jaan se bhi jyada
kaise tujhse kahu main
per ye chahat ki ghadiya sab raaj khol rahi hai
kyunki ankhein bol rahi hai ....haan ankhein bol rahi hai .

....................@fahi@.......................
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«Reply #39 on: July 09, 2006, 02:14:25 AM »
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Tabassumjii likhiye aap..Faahi bhi acha likhta hain...
Aap dono ek saath likhiye...Main issliye support karta hu becoz when I had started writing very few used to support me..I feel k kuch support mein likhenge toh writer ko acha lagta hain...Josh banaye rehta hain!!! :D  :D
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very gud tabssum ji ...& sd ji nice support............

 tum kaho na kaho, per sun chuka hoon mai
 teri dil ki aahat ko ,tere labo ki chahat ko.......
 
us aag ko mehssos kiya hai maine
 jisme jal rahi hai,hum dono ki ruhe ek saath
bina kisi chingari ke ,naa hi hai dhua koi
phir bhi bhadak raha hai yeh shola
dono ke tan mai,is pagal man mai.........

ek tuk ghur rahe hai  mujhe tere nain
 aur unme uthte anginat sawal
 meri aankhon se jawab paa rahe hai
mil rahe ho jaise sadiyo baad hum
kuch yu ye pal tarsa rahe hai.......

phir tu hi bata kis tarah
tujhse door rahu main
chaha hai tujhe jaan se bhi jyada
kaise tujhse kahu main
per ye chahat ki ghadiya sab raaj khol rahi hai
kyunki ankhein bol rahi hai ....haan ankhein bol rahi hai .

....................@fahi@.......................
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #40 on: July 09, 2006, 04:22:51 AM »
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thanx sd ji aapke support ke liye main samjhati hun aapki baat aur sahi bhi hai aapke honsale ki vajah se hi likha jaata hai its very diffcult to write with out support thanx........ Usual Smile
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«Reply #41 on: July 09, 2006, 04:35:10 AM »
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very gud tabssum ji ...& sd ji nice support............

 tum kaho na kaho, per sun chuka hoon mai
 teri dil ki aahat ko ,tere labo ki chahat ko.......
 
us aag ko mehssos kiya hai maine
 jisme jal rahi hai,hum dono ki ruhe ek saath
bina kisi chingari ke ,naa hi hai dhua koi
phir bhi bhadak raha hai yeh shola
dono ke tan mai,is pagal man mai.........

ek tuk ghur rahe hai  mujhe tere nain
 aur unme uthte anginat sawal
 meri aankhon se jawab paa rahe hai
mil rahe ho jaise sadiyo baad hum
kuch yu ye pal tarsa rahe hai.......

phir tu hi bata kis tarah
tujhse door rahu main
chaha hai tujhe jaan se bhi jyada
kaise tujhse kahu main
per ye chahat ki ghadiya sab raaj khol rahi hai
kyunki ankhein bol rahi hai ....haan ankhein bol rahi hai .

....................@fahi@.......................


thanx faahi aur aap to achcha hi likhten hain hamesha

meri qismat me hain raaten jaagi hui aur roi hui
tumko kya batlaun meri qismat hai bas soi hui
doori ka na mujhe gila tha door tha kab tu dil me tha
saare gile tujhko hi hue hain kahta nahi hai tu mujhse
mera to bas ik sachcha dil rog bana hai aaj mera
tu na mane to na mane maine tujhko dekha tha
door hi jaana tha gar mujhse ek bahana kyun dhoondha
teri raza me meri raza hai ye to tujhko pata hi tha
teri ik sachchai thi jo hame saath le aai thi
aaj teri ik zid ki khatir door hui hun main tujhse
jaanta hai tu mujhko nahi par apne dil se poochh zara
vo hi kahega sari haqeeqat mujhko ab na beech me la
ik usane  tujhe kaha tha main tujhko achchi lagti hun...............................
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tabassum shakeel
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«Reply #42 on: July 11, 2006, 01:37:42 PM »
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meri saari baaten jhooti
tera har  ek jhooth bhi sach hai
apni apni sochen hain ye
kisko kitna kispe bharosa
ham ne dil ko tere jaana
tujhko kbhi dekha hi kab hai
ab jo dekha tujhko us din
tu na mane tera bharosa
apna to bas ek ye dil hai
sachcha sa jo raha akela
isko samjhe koi nahi hai
ham ko kisi se gila nahi hai
ham is sab ke aadi hi hain
baat nai koi hui nahi hai
par bhi ham ko hai kahna
tum mujhko achche lagte ho
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Aryaan
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«Reply #43 on: July 11, 2006, 06:31:34 PM »
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Bohat khoob Tabassum & Fahi....
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Aryaan
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«Reply #44 on: July 11, 2006, 06:41:19 PM »
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Door tujh se main agar ho jaaun
Jaal duniya ka hai rangeen-o-haseen
Uss ke rangon mein agar kho jaaun
Teri masoom si unn baaton ko
Shokh-o-saada si teri yaadon ko
bhool jaaun bhi tau yeh yaad rahe
Aaj tujh se mera yeh vaada hai
Jab bhi barsaat tere aangan mein
pyaar se aan ke dastak de gi
Main usi roz chala aaun ga..

Aaj main soch raha hoon kab se
Kya huwi baat keh tu aaya nahi
Jab ke barsaat tau kal se mere
Kachey aangan mein
Baras rahi hai Shab bhar...
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