Ishq to ankhon se pilaya gaya he mujhe ~ Abhi

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Yunhi nahi behka behkaya gaya he mujhe,
Loot kar dil deewana banaya gaya he mujhe~


Sheeshe ki peeta to hosh hota 'Abhi',
Ishq to aankhon se pilaya gaya he mujhe~

Har taraf aati he mohabbat nazar yaaron,
Ye ek teer badi zor se chubhaya gaya he mujhe~


Hazaron the nakhre e naazneen tere paas,
Saadgi ki ada se magar mara gaya he mujhe~
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«Reply #1 on: November 21, 2011, 01:01:29 PM »
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wah wah--
behad khubsurat adayegi hai Khumaar ki--

hazaaroN daad kubul karen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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janaab kuch jada eaqt dia karen YO ko plzzzz

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«Reply #2 on: November 21, 2011, 01:56:49 PM »
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 Applause ApplauseWAH WAH WAH KYA BAAT HAI ,,,BAHUT HI KHUB AASAAR RAHE DAAD HAJIR HAI
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«Reply #3 on: November 21, 2011, 03:03:26 PM »
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Yunhi nahi behka behkaya gaya he mujhe,
Loot kar dil deewana banaya gaya he mujhe~


Sheeshe ki peeta to hosh hota 'Abhi',
Ishq to aankhon se pilaya gaya he mujhe~

Har taraf aati he mohabbat nazar yaaron,
Ye ek teer badi zor se chubhaya gaya he mujhe~


Hazaron the nakhre e naazneen tere paas,
Saadgi ki ada se magar mara gaya he mujhe~

bahut bahut khoob. maqte wala sher aakhir mein likhein
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«Reply #4 on: November 21, 2011, 04:32:24 PM »
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boht khoob abhi ji maza aa gaya parh kar
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«Reply #5 on: November 22, 2011, 01:25:16 AM »
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Aha..Behad meetha kalam hai Abhi bhai..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Yunhi likhte rahiye..
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Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #6 on: November 22, 2011, 02:48:24 PM »
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ohhhhhhhhhhh kya mast sher kahe hain Abhi....... maza aagaya sachhciiiiiiii superbbbbbb har ek sher me ek freshness hai.....
lovely one Is......
Hazaron the nakhre e naazneen tere paas,
Saadgi ki ada se magar mara gaya he mujhe~
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: November 22, 2011, 02:48:37 PM »
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wah wah--
behad khubsurat adayegi hai Khumaar ki--

hazaaroN daad kubul karen

khus rahen
muskurate rahen
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janaab kuch jada eaqt dia karen YO ko plzzzz

Usual Smile
tareef ka shukriya sahab... apka badappan he ye to...
sath rahiye yunhi...ram ji chahege to bilkul jyada se jyada waqt duga...

Applause ApplauseWAH WAH WAH KYA BAAT HAI ,,,BAHUT HI KHUB AASAAR RAHE DAAD HAJIR HAI
shukriya sunil jiii...sath rahiye yunhi..

bahut bahut khoob. maqte wala sher aakhir mein likhein
sheba ji namaskaar,
sarahne ka bahut bahut shukriya sath rahiye..

boht khoob abhi ji maza aa gaya parh kar
saahil ji apka bhi shukriya sath rahiye yunhi..

Aha..Behad meetha kalam hai Abhi bhai..
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Yunhi likhte rahiye..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Khush rahiye..!

rahim bhaiiiii...bade waqt bad mila apko .....bahut bahut shukriya....
yunhi sath rahiye...hamari koshishe jaari he... rahegiii..
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«Reply #8 on: November 22, 2011, 02:49:44 PM »
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ohhhhhhhhhhh kya mast sher kahe hain Abhi....... maza aagaya sachhciiiiiiii superbbbbbb har ek sher me ek freshness hai.....
lovely one Is......
Hazaron the nakhre e naazneen tere paas,
Saadgi ki ada se magar mara gaya he mujhe~
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Anaam ji reply copy paste mara aapne kahinse eisa laga mujhe hehehee..khair shukriya apkaaa...sath rahe
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«Reply #9 on: November 22, 2011, 03:10:20 PM »
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janaab--
hum to aapki chah pr yakeen krenge ki aap khud chahen jada waqt dene ka--

hum sarfira kahlaate hain coz hum sirf insaano ki chahaat pr etbaar krte hain--

tareef ka shukriya sahab... apka badappan he ye to...
sath rahiye yunhi...ram ji chahege to bilkul jyada se jyada waqt duga...
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«Reply #10 on: November 23, 2011, 12:25:55 PM »
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Bahut khoob abhi ji
bas likhte rahiye..
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«Reply #11 on: November 23, 2011, 01:39:44 PM »
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Bahut khoob abhi ji
bas likhte rahiye..
shukriya mkv ji...yunhi sath rahe..


janaab--
hum to aapki chah pr yakeen krenge ki aap khud chahen jada waqt dene ka--

hum sarfira kahlaate hain coz hum sirf insaano ki chahaat pr etbaar krte hain--

tareef ka shukriya sahab... apka badappan he ye to...
sath rahiye yunhi...ram ji chahege to bilkul jyada se jyada waqt duga...


sarfira ji .....ham bhi to nam se Abhi hain ....bat wahi kehte he jo wajib ho... sab ram ji pe chhod rakha hai...ham tochahkar bhi shayd na kar paye ..wo chahege to hokar rahega.....

jai jai...
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«Reply #12 on: November 27, 2011, 07:05:52 PM »
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Aaye Haaye.. Kya Baat hai Abhi Bhai.. Lafzon ka Yeh Khumaar Dil tak Chhoo gaya.. ek el Lafz Pyaar ke jazzbaaton me Behka nazar aaya.. Bahut Umda Peshkash hai.. Applause Applause

daad Kubool Karen......  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #13 on: December 14, 2011, 10:50:56 AM »
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shukriya Mann sahab ...bada achha laga ji aapne pasand kiya...or saraha...yunhi sath rahiye hamesha...
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