~~"Hame Bhi Jaam Pilaya Gaya"~~By Shally.

by k.shael on July 29, 2009, 09:50:42 AM
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Mehfil saji to hamko bhi bulaya gaya,
Saath sabke hame bhi jaam pilaya gaya,

Kaise na rooth.te ham apne yaroon se,
Jab le-le ke naam unka hame jalaya gaya,

Ishq ke afsane iss kadar sunaye sabne ki,
Saath dil ke hame bhi khoob rulaya gaya,

Kuch baatein jo nikli beete jamane ki,
Saath Nazro.n ke mehboob dikhaya gaya,

Laakh sawal jab khade kar diye hampe Shally,
To hamse bhi na Judayi ka raj chipaya gaya..

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: July 29, 2009, 10:09:45 AM »
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Wah wah Shally ji,very nice and wonderful creation,beautiful gazal, icon_thumleft Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: July 29, 2009, 10:17:19 AM »
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Bahut khoob shally... Applause
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cara
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«Reply #3 on: July 29, 2009, 12:34:50 PM »
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kya baat hai   shally ji.......

AAJ MEHFIL MAIN JAAN BHUJ KAR MERA MAJAAK UDAIYA GAYA,
KI AAJ MUJHKO ZABARDASTI JAAM PE JAAM PILAYA GAYA.
EK-EK YAARON NE JAAN BHUJ KAR APNE KAMYAB ISHQ KA FASANA SUNAATE RAHE,
AUR MUJHE MERE NAKAMYAB ISHQ KA EASAAS DILATE RAHE.
JAAM PE JAAM PILAATE RAHE,
KHUD HASTE RAHE AUR MUJHKO RULAATE RAHE.

MERI DARD BARI DASTAAN SUNKAR,WOH BAHUT KHUSH HOTE RAHE,
BIN YAAR KA SAAYA,JAL BIN MACHALLI,AADHI-ADURI, BECHARI, KAHE KAR MERA MAJAAK UDATE RAHE.
JAAM PE JAAM PILAATE RAHE,
KHUD HASTE RAHE AUR MUJHE RULAATE RAHE.
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«Reply #4 on: July 29, 2009, 12:42:49 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Kaash ji and Cara ji,beautiful lines. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Thumbs UP
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«Reply #5 on: July 29, 2009, 05:44:13 PM »
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bahut behatrin alfaaz shally ji.......bahut khub
 Applause Applause ApplauseApplause Applause

kaash ji & cara ji aapne bhi bahut achha likha
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«Reply #6 on: July 29, 2009, 05:49:21 PM »
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Wah Wah Wah... Shalyyyyyyy Dear.. Bahut Hi Khubsoorat aur Lajawab Gazal pesh Ki Hai aapne.. Ek ek Lafz Mohabbat aur Dard Bayan Kar raha Hai..!!

Har ek Jumla Behtreen likha Hai.. Aur Kya Kahun is Gazal Ki Taareef Me.. Bas Itna hi aur Kahunga Ki "Great Work"..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Daad Kubool karen...  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #7 on: July 29, 2009, 05:50:35 PM »
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Yash Bhai & Cara ji.. aapne Bhi Lajawab Likha Hai.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob Doston.. Applause


**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #8 on: July 30, 2009, 10:52:14 AM »
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Mehfil saji to hamko bhi bulaya gaya,
Saath sabke hame bhi jaam pilaya gaya,

Kaise na rooth.te ham apne yaroon se,
Jab le-le ke naam unka hame jalaya gaya,

Ishq ke afsane iss kadar sunaye sabne ki,
Saath dil ke hame bhi khoob rulaya gaya,

Kuch baatein jo nikli beete jamane ki,
Saath Nazro.n ke mehboob dikhaya gaya,

Laakh sawal jab khade kar diye hampe Shally,
To hamse bhi na Judayi ka raj chipaya gaya..

Shally.


Waah...Bohot Khoob Shally...very nice indeed...
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«Reply #9 on: July 30, 2009, 10:52:40 AM »
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Nice addition Kaash Ji & Cara
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«Reply #10 on: July 30, 2009, 10:59:49 AM »
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bahut bahut achche shally, cara and kaash

shally yaar sach main kaafi kucch seekh gaye ho hum sabki sangat main
 NaNaNa NaNaNa
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«Reply #11 on: August 05, 2009, 11:51:04 AM »
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Badi joordaar rachana....mubarak ho Shallyji.. Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Ye kaisi mehfil mai mujh ko bulaya gaya
Hathon mai thama jaam ilzaam lagaya gaya
Mey ka pyala le-le un ka naam pilaya gaya
Jo bhulna tha mujhe use yaad dilaya gaya
Rula rula ke aasuyon ka jaam pilaya gaya


Mehfil saji to hamko bhi bulaya gaya,
Saath sabke hame bhi jaam pilaya gaya,

Kaise na rooth.te ham apne yaroon se,
Jab le-le ke naam unka hame jalaya gaya,

Ishq ke afsane iss kadar sunaye sabne ki,
Saath dil ke hame bhi khoob rulaya gaya,

Kuch baatein jo nikli beete jamane ki,
Saath Nazro.n ke mehboob dikhaya gaya,

Laakh sawal jab khade kar diye hampe Shally,
To hamse bhi na Judayi ka raj chipaya gaya..

Shally.

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«Reply #12 on: August 14, 2009, 05:36:22 AM »
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Mehfil saji to hamko bhi bulaya gaya,
Saath sabke hame bhi jaam pilaya gaya,

Kaise na rooth.te ham apne yaroon se,
Jab le-le ke naam unka hame jalaya gaya,

Ishq ke afsane iss kadar sunaye sabne ki,
Saath dil ke hame bhi khoob rulaya gaya,

Kuch baatein jo nikli beete jamane ki,
Saath Nazro.n ke mehboob dikhaya gaya,

Laakh sawal jab khade kar diye hampe Shally,
To hamse bhi na Judayi ka raj chipaya gaya..

Shally.


Bahut Bahut Khoob Shally!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Sach mein Har Ashaar Lajawaab!! Bahut Ache. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: August 14, 2009, 01:17:44 PM »
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Mehfil saji to hamko bhi bulaya gaya
saath sabke hamen bhi jaam pilaya gaya

kaise na rooth.te ham apne yaaron se
jab le-le ke naam unka hamen jalaya gaya


              waqaee bahut hi behtreen ghazal hai. Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: August 14, 2009, 01:40:47 PM »
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very cute gazal...
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