~~"Hame To Apno Ne Loot Liya"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on September 21, 2009, 08:23:22 AM
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Kehte ho dokha mila tumhe gairo.n se,
Hamse pocho dard, hame to apno ne loot liya!!

Lete rahe jo ta-umar mujhse mohabbat,
Manga jo hamne kuch, gusse se mooh pher liya!!

Log jeete hai sirf khud ke liye aaj-kal,
Aur mein nadan, jab bhi jiya dusro ke liye jiya!!

Badnasibi meri ki koi bana nahi mera,
Khuda ne rishto ke naam pe u to bahut kuch diya!!

Jalta raha mein tamam umar gammo me,
Malal hai bahut, kabhi kisi ne mera khayal nahi kiya!!

Kehte ho dokha mila tumhe gairo.n se,
Hamse pooch dard Shally, hame to apno ne loot liya!!
 
Shally.
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #1 on: September 21, 2009, 08:41:38 AM »
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Wah Shally ji very beautiful  touching creation,bahut khoob,great work,keep it up dear. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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shayara
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«Reply #2 on: September 22, 2009, 04:59:30 PM »
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Bohot Khoob K.Shael
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Roja
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«Reply #3 on: September 22, 2009, 05:01:19 PM »
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Nice creation Shally dear
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dead heart
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«Reply #4 on: September 22, 2009, 06:00:35 PM »
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Wah Shally jee bahaut khoob...
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Pooja
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«Reply #5 on: September 22, 2009, 06:11:55 PM »
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bahoot khoob shally... apki lines per kar jo man maion aa rah ahai likhne ja rahi hu:

Najar ka phair hai jo kah diya lootne wale ko apna
Jo na ho saka kabhi poora, tha yah bas wo he sapna

Apne ka dikhawa tha, ajnabi tha wo ek saya tha
Lootne ki niyat se ayya tha, na tha kabhi wo apna

badnaseebi kaho ki kaho ab is khush kismati
chala gaya jo abhi se, warna zindagi bhar tha usne rulana

Najar ka phair hai jo kah diya lootne wale ko apna
Jo na ho saka kabhi poora, tha yah bas wo he sapna
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Talat
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«Reply #6 on: September 22, 2009, 06:50:47 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Shally and Pooja
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Pooja
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«Reply #7 on: September 22, 2009, 06:51:49 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Shally and Pooja

Thanks Celmira!!
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madhuwesh
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«Reply #8 on: September 22, 2009, 09:17:03 PM »
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Wah bahut khoob Pooja ji very touching lines,wonderful creation. icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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Anupama Sha'kya
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«Reply #9 on: September 29, 2009, 06:35:06 PM »
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bahut acha likha  Applause Applause Applause sad5
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #10 on: January 01, 2010, 03:36:43 AM »
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Kehte ho dokha mila tumhe gairo.n se,
Hamse pocho dard, hame to apno ne loot liya!!

Lete rahe jo ta-umar mujhse mohabbat,
Manga jo hamne kuch, gusse se mooh pher liya!!

Log jeete hai sirf khud ke liye aaj-kal,
Aur mein nadan, jab bhi jiya dusro ke liye jiya!!

Badnasibi meri ki koi bana nahi mera,
Khuda ne rishto ke naam pe u to bahut kuch diya!!

Jalta raha mein tamam umar gammo me,
Malal hai bahut, kabhi kisi ne mera khayal nahi kiya!!

Kehte ho dokha mila tumhe gairo.n se,
Hamse pooch dard Shally, hame to apno ne loot liya!!
 
Shally.

Bahut Khoob Shally Ji
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Rajesh Harish
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«Reply #11 on: January 01, 2010, 03:37:49 AM »
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bahoot khoob shally... apki lines per kar jo man maion aa rah ahai likhne ja rahi hu:

Najar ka phair hai jo kah diya lootne wale ko apna
Jo na ho saka kabhi poora, tha yah bas wo he sapna

Apne ka dikhawa tha, ajnabi tha wo ek saya tha
Lootne ki niyat se ayya tha, na tha kabhi wo apna

badnaseebi kaho ki kaho ab is khush kismati
chala gaya jo abhi se, warna zindagi bhar tha usne rulana

Najar ka phair hai jo kah diya lootne wale ko apna
Jo na ho saka kabhi poora, tha yah bas wo he sapna


Good response Pooja Ji
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