~~"CHEHRE SE PARDA UTHAO ZARA"~~ by Shally.

by k.shael on May 05, 2009, 08:15:40 AM
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«Reply #30 on: May 07, 2009, 09:38:23 AM »
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hmm....very nice...bahut pyaari lines hai shally.... Applause aapki ye pyaar bhari peshkash mujhe bahut pasand aayi... Usual Smile

Shukriya fairy Dear,

Shally.
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«Reply #31 on: May 07, 2009, 09:39:21 AM »
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Nawab ji,

Kya baat hai ! Bahut khoob Applause

Khumar se bharpoor ghazal ! Winking

Lage raho ! Usual Smile

Shukriya Nawab Ji,

Aacha laga itne dino baad aapko apne thread me dekhakr,

Shally.
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«Reply #32 on: May 07, 2009, 09:39:48 AM »
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Bohat Khoob Shael Ji
Achhi Koshish Hai Aapki.


Shukriya Shihab Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #33 on: May 07, 2009, 09:40:36 AM »
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Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley bahot hi meethe ehsaason se likhti hain aap Shael ji..heart touching n awesome creation...waitng to see ur posts in other sections also.                                                                                                                  Ye jo aap kalam ki duaen sun lia karti hain,padhne valo ki nigaahon ko sukoon dia karti hain                                                                                                                                  kyun na likh den aap un qalaamon ko bhi   jinhen aap sochti to hain par likha nahi karti hain.

Shukriya Kaash Ji,

Jaroor ham aur bhi topics pe likhenge.

Shally.
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«Reply #34 on: May 07, 2009, 09:41:03 AM »
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Bahoot Khooob Shally ji
Very Nice
 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Pank Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #35 on: May 07, 2009, 09:41:59 AM »
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Waah Jitni Taareef Karoon Kam Hai Shally, Great Work,.
BohatDino BaadItni DamdaarIshq Waali Ghazal Pardhne Ko Mili,

Kisi Ki Nazar Na Lagaa,Yunhi Likhte Rehna,May Allah Bless You,.

Shukriya Azeem Ji,

Dua karne ke liye bhi shukriya.

Shally.
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«Reply #36 on: May 07, 2009, 09:43:49 AM »
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Bahut behatareen Ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Shally Ji Khumar-e-ishq me
 Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wonderful, Mind-blowing, Shally Ji

Aapki itni sunder peshkash per mujhe apni ghazal ke chand ashar yaad aa gaye

NAZAR JHUKI HAI MAGAR DIL ME BEKARARI HAI
HAYA KI AAD ME JAISE KOI SHIKARI HAI

HUM BHI KHAMOSHI KO SUN LENE KA FUN RAKHATE HAIN
ZINDAGI HUMNE BHI YUN HI NAHIN GUZARI HAI

BAND HOTON ME MUHABBAT KO CHHUPA LE LEKIN
SURKH CHEHARE SE ZIGAR KA BAYAN JAARI HAI

AANKH KE TEER SE ZAKHMI HUE ZIGAR KITANE
AISA LAGATA HAI KI AB TO HAMARI BAARI HAI

SARVESH RASTOGI


Shukriya Sarvesh Ji, Bahut Khoob Likha hai aapne bhi,
Agar kuch bana to jaroor reply karoongi...

Shally.
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«Reply #37 on: May 07, 2009, 09:44:51 AM »
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bahut khoob Shally
really nice post...
Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Diya Dear,

Shally.
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«Reply #38 on: May 07, 2009, 09:45:55 AM »
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Bahut Khoob Shally Ji
N Nice response Sarvesh Ji

Shukriya Rajesh Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #39 on: May 07, 2009, 09:46:48 AM »
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subhan allah shally ajj tumne dil jeet liya ..ye apki makkamil ghazal kahe sakte hain wah ji wah har ashar eak dusre ko dara raha hai kya rawani di hai janab ..subhan allah karoodo dad qubool kijiyega ...aaj apko pad kar khas taur per mujhe behad khushi howi ...allah tumhe khush rakhe !! ameen..

Qadeer

Shukriya Qadeer Ji, Aapne itna saraha hamare kaam ko,

Shally.
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«Reply #40 on: May 07, 2009, 09:49:28 AM »
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shally, main kya kahoon, alfaaz hee nahi hain yaar! ishq kee shiddat iss tarhaan se lafzon me utaarna, bahot kum logon se hota hai. tumne tho, Subhan-Allah waah!

sarvesh ji, equally same. kya kahe koi inn nazmon k agay?...


Hay, na ahaen bharo iss tarhaan se k meri jaan jaatee hai,
Parde se dahka rehne do ye husn tumhaara, k humaaree aankh ko bhi sharm aatee hai.

Chand par lehaf tehra nahi ka bhi, usski roshnee me sub jhalakta hai,
Na dehko unn teekhee nazron se, k dil aur bhi taez dhadrakta hai.

Tum tasweer ho chaman kee, ya hooron kee baadee kee mailka, muhje pata nahi.
Har koi hai fida tum par, main b aashique bana, iss me meri khata nahi...





Shukriya Anjaan Dear, Bahut Khoob Dear,

Shally.
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