~~"JEHAR PILAATI HAI ZINDAGI"~~Shally.

by k.shael on April 27, 2009, 06:01:30 AM
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Iss zindagi ne bahut gamm diye hai, unhi me se kuch ko bayaa.n kar rahi hoo.n
aur mere ek dost SANJU ne request bhi ki thi ki mein use zindagi pe kuch likh ke dikhao so aap sab ke nazar kar rahi hoo.n apni iss zindagi ki ghazal ko,umeed karti hoo.n aap sab pasand karnege...



Zindagi ki doy.d se kahiin bhali hai mout ki aakhiri ghadi,
Jala kar apne takkabur me har roz tadpati hai ye zindagi…

Kam-sukhan hoon iss liye kuch keh nahi paata kisi se bhi,
Dil ko hai pata ki har lamhe pe jehar pilaati hai ye zindagi…

Marasam aise hai ki jinhe nibhana mere bass me nahi lekin,
Phir bhi inn ke aage mujhe khoob nachwati hai ye zindagi…

Dosti, Pyaar, Mohabbat sab hai bikte iss matlabi duniyaa me,
Na chah kar bhi mujhe inn rasmo se baandhti hai ye zindagi…

Sar-ba-girebaan rehna aadat si ho gayi hai aab iss nacheez ki,
Kyunki roti ki jagah kayi baar gaaliyaa dilwati hai ye zindagi…

Hass to leta hoon mehfil-e-jaam me yaroo.n ke saath Shally,
Kambhakht tanhayi me bahut, bahut rulaati hai ye zindagi…

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2009, 06:58:52 AM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai SHALLY.. Bahut Khooooob Likha Hai..!!
Zindgi Ke Dard Ko Lafzon me Dhaal kar Behad Khubsoorati se Pesh Kiya hai aapne..!! Bahut Khooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #2 on: April 27, 2009, 08:44:39 AM »
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Bohat Achche Shally, Achchi Ghazal Pesh Ki Hai,.
Yunhi LIkhte Rehna,.
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«Reply #3 on: April 27, 2009, 09:10:08 AM »
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nice one..shally ......but its reflectin some man's thought.if u r playing a part of man inthis ghazal then i  advice not to use ur name shally..as it again gives it a feminine nature....sorry if u feel bad for the advice
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«Reply #4 on: April 27, 2009, 09:11:57 AM »
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nice one..shally ......but its reflectin some man's thought.if u r playing a part of man inthis ghazal then i  advice not to use ur name shally..as it again gives it a feminine nature....sorry if u feel bad for the advice

Shukriya Pasandh kiya aur advise di,

aapki advise pe jaror gour karongi, aur bura manne jaisi koi baat nahi kahi aapne.

Shally.
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«Reply #5 on: April 27, 2009, 05:49:42 PM »
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wow good one shally... nice creation!!
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2009, 12:06:50 PM »
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wah wah Shally Ji bahut khoob.
Zindagi ke bare me kya khoob likha hai, very good.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2009, 12:53:20 PM »
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Waah! bahot bahot khoob ji! so beautifully expressed.

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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2009, 05:52:54 PM »
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 Applause

Nice lines shally
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2009, 08:15:04 AM »
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bahut khoob shally... Clapping Smiley very well expressed dear...keep writing... Usual Smile
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«Reply #10 on: April 30, 2009, 04:37:04 AM »
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Zindagi ki doy.d se kahiin bhali hai mout ki aakhiri ghadi,
Jala kar apne takkabur me har roz tadpati hai ye zindagi…

Kam-sukhan hoon iss liye kuch keh nahi paata kisi se bhi,
Dil ko hai pata ki har lamhe pe jehar pilaati hai ye zindagi…

Marasam aise hai ki jinhe nibhana mere bass me nahi lekin,
Phir bhi inn ke aage mujhe khoob nachwati hai ye zindagi…


Dosti, Pyaar, Mohabbat sab hai bikte iss matlabi duniyaa me,
Na chah kar bhi mujhe inn rasmo se baandhti hai ye zindagi…

Sar-ba-girebaan rehna aadat si ho gayi hai aab iss nacheez ki,
Kyunki roti ki jagah kayi baar gaaliyaa dilwati hai ye zindagi…

Hass to leta hoon mehfil-e-jaam me yaroo.n ke saath Shally,
Kambhakht tanhayi me bahut, bahut rulaati hai ye zindagi…


Shally.

Shally ji!
Tasawwur kaa umdah isteymaal huaa hai! Par, Shally ji, bahaadur zindagee sey toubaa naheen kartey, wah jo bhi hai, US ki niyaabat hai! We all are HIS representatives! Yeh US ki amaanat hai, usey pyaar-o-dulaar deejiyegaa to sukoon mileygaa! Meyree do English ki kitaaboun kaa naam hai: 'WORSHIP LIFE' & 'LET US LIVE'! Dono ko eik saath padhhney par bantaa hai: WORSHIP LIFE and LET US LIVE!
Jahaan tak 'shayari' ki baat hai, aap ney khaasaa achchhaa likhaa hai!
           
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2009, 09:07:23 AM »
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wah wah shally bahoth umda likha bade hi urdudan ban gaye ho app janab kya baath kam-sukhan wah wah waise apke andaze bayan se to nahi lagta ke app kam-sukhan ho qair mujhe bahoth pasand aa-e- apki ye ghazal ..dil se daad qubool karen allah khush rakhe apko !!

Qadeer
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«Reply #12 on: May 01, 2009, 09:56:04 AM »
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Very Nice Shally ji

Ek choti si koshish kar raha hun

Dard-e-jahar pilati hai zindagi...
Ruthati hai kabhi aur khud hi man jati hai zindagi...
De sako sath toh sath deti hai...
Aur kabhi kabhi toh khud hi sabkuch nibhati hai zindagi...
Kabhi zikre judayi pe, aur  maut ki aahat me kabhi,
Roti hai kabhi aur kabhi muskurati hai zindagi....
~Pank~
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«Reply #13 on: May 04, 2009, 11:33:40 AM »
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bahut accha likha hai Shally dear
very nice...
Applause Applause

equally nice reply Pank ji Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: July 07, 2009, 06:14:31 PM »
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nice work shally and pank
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