~~"KHUD KO RULAYA MAINE"~~ Shally.

by k.shael on April 11, 2009, 07:38:42 AM
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«Reply #30 on: April 14, 2009, 12:10:22 PM »
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Shally ji! Clapping Smiley

Bayaan dil key, bayaan hotey hain tah-e-dil sey;
Beyjubaan baat bhi aatee hai nikal kar dil sey!
Aisey jazbaat-ao-haalaat bayaan hon gar, to,
Saaf dikhtaa hai, ki, aaye hain nikal kar dil sey!!

                            - abd bundeli




Bohat Achche Abd Bhaiya,.
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«Reply #31 on: April 14, 2009, 01:41:16 PM »
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Bohat Achche Abd Bhaiya,.
Thanks Jaanasheen bhai!
        - abd bundeli
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«Reply #32 on: April 15, 2009, 08:59:30 AM »
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Shally ji! Clapping Smiley

Bayaan dil key, bayaan hotey hain tah-e-dil sey;
Beyzubaan baat bhi aatee hai nikal kar dil sey!
Aisey jazbaat-ao-haalaat bayaan hon gar, to,
Saaf dikhtaa hai, ki, aaye hain nikal kar dil sey!!

                            - abd bundeli




Shukriya Abd Ji,

Aa jaise shayar ka hamare thread pe aana bahut badi baat hai.
aur ek tarah se aapke comment se hame aashirwad mil gaya hai.

Shukriya ye aashirwaad mere aage bhadne ke liye bahut zarori tha.

Shally.
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«Reply #33 on: April 15, 2009, 09:04:15 AM »
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Shukriya Abd Ji,

Aa jaise shayar ka hamare thread pe aana bahut badi baat hai.
aur ek tarah se aapke comment se hame aashirwad mil gaya hai.

Shukriya ye aashirwaad mere aage bhadne ke liye bahut zarori tha.

Shally.

Shally! You're always welcome!
              - abd bundeli
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«Reply #34 on: April 16, 2009, 09:12:47 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob Shally dear
sach mein kamaal likha hai aapne

 Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #35 on: April 16, 2009, 09:18:37 AM »
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Abd Sahab Applause Applause
Sajid sahab Applause  Applause
Salil ji Applause Applause
Angel ji Applause Applause

aap sabhi ne khoob likha hai
really nice
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«Reply #36 on: April 16, 2009, 10:50:53 AM »
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Abd Sahab Applause Applause
Sajid sahab Applause  Applause
Salil ji Applause Applause
Angel ji Applause Applause

aap sabhi ne khoob likha hai
really nice


Thankls diya786 ji!
                - abd bundeli
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«Reply #37 on: April 16, 2009, 10:58:25 AM »
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thnks diya
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«Reply #38 on: April 16, 2009, 02:20:20 PM »
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Wah! Wah! bohat khoob, behtareen shael ji bohat achchha kaha hai apne.
bohat achchhe likha hai.

 Applause Applause Applause


bohat khoob likha hai sabne!
 Applause Applause Applause

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«Reply #39 on: April 21, 2009, 12:39:11 PM »
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Very good Shally.
Mere khayal se last sher main "majboor" hona chahiye. Dekh lijiye.
All the best.
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #40 on: April 28, 2009, 06:51:16 AM »
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Abd Sahab Applause Applause
Sajid sahab Applause  Applause
Salil ji Applause Applause
Angel ji Applause Applause

aap sabhi ne khoob likha hai
really nice


Shukriya Diya Dear,

Shally.
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«Reply #41 on: April 28, 2009, 07:06:07 AM »
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Mehfil-e-yaar me khud ko khoob bikwaya maine,
Kabhi hassa logo ki marzi se to kabhi yaar ki khatir khud
ko rulaya maine,

Ranjish-O-Gham hi hai aab pehchaan har rishte ki,
Har insaan ko khalwat-e-dil me hi jeeta paaya maine,

 Mooh ki baat har koi sune dil ki baat na jane koi,
Aawajo ke bazaar me khomoshi ko bikte paaya maine,

Gulo-sarav aache hai sabhi wale,
Na nikalta chaman me yaar sa koi paaya maine,

Gaye wo jamane jab melo me kaanch ki gudiya bikti thi,
Aab to sare-raah masoom betiyoon ko bikta paya maine,

Jiss baat ko kehne se mazoor hai tere lab Shally,   
Usi baat ko teri aankhon se chalkata paaya maine.

Shally.



Nice one Shally Ji
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«Reply #42 on: April 28, 2009, 07:07:44 AM »
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Wah! Wah! bohat khoob, behtareen shael ji bohat achchha kaha hai apne.
bohat achchhe likha hai.

 Applause Applause Applause


bohat khoob likha hai sabne!
 Applause Applause Applause



Shukriya Tanha Ji,

Shally.
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«Reply #43 on: April 28, 2009, 07:08:42 AM »
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Very good Shally.
Mere khayal se last sher main "majboor" hona chahiye. Dekh lijiye.
All the best.
SARVESH RASTOGI

Shukriya Sarvesh Ji

Shally.
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«Reply #44 on: April 28, 2009, 07:09:30 AM »
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Nice one Shally Ji

Shukriya Rajesh Ji,

Shally.
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