~~"KHUD KO RULAYA MAINE"~~ Shally.

by k.shael on April 11, 2009, 01:08:42 PM
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Mehfil-e-yaar me khud ko khoob bikwaya maine,
Kabhi hassa logo ki marzi se to kabhi yaar ki khatir khud
ko rulaya maine,

Ranjish-O-Gham hi hai aab pehchaan har rishte ki,
Har insaan ko khalwat-e-dil me hi jeeta paaya maine,

 Mooh ki baat har koi sune dil ki baat na jane koi,
Aawajo ke bazaar me khomoshi ko bikte paaya maine,

Gulo-sarav aache hai sabhi wale,
Na nikalta chaman me yaar sa koi paaya maine,

Gaye wo jamane jab melo me kaanch ki gudiya bikti thi,
Aab to sare-raah masoom betiyoon ko bikta paya maine,

Jiss baat ko kehne se mazoor hai tere lab Shally,   
Usi baat ko teri aankhon se chalkata paaya maine.

Shally.

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«Reply #1 on: April 11, 2009, 01:12:47 PM »
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Bohat bohat khoob Shally pehle sher me yu lagta hain tumne meri hi zindagi bayaan kardi....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tujhse bichad kar jaana, bas itna samajh na aaya

Tujhe khoker kya khoya aur kya paya maine....

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«Reply #2 on: April 11, 2009, 01:13:07 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Shally..!! Yaar Wapai Behad Gaharaai Liye hue Hai aapka Yeh Qalaam..!! Aur Lafzon ka Chunaaw Bhi Kabil-e-Tareef Hai.. Great Work..!! Applause Applause


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«Reply #3 on: April 11, 2009, 02:04:20 PM »
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Mehfil-e-yaar me khud ko khoob bikwaya maine,
Kabhi hassa logo ki marzi se to kabhi yaar ki khatir khud
ko rulaya maine,

Ranjish-O-Gham hi hai aab pehchaan har rishte ki,
Har insaan ko khalwat-e-dil me hi jeeta paaya maine,

 Mooh ki baat har koi sune dil ki baat na jane koi,
Aawajo ke bazaar me khomoshi ko bikte paaya maine,

Gulo-sarav aache hai sabhi wale,
Na nikalta chaman me yaar sa koi paaya maine,

Gaye wo jamane jab melo me kaanch ki gudiya bikti thi,
Aab to sare-raah masoom betiyoon ko bikta paya maine,

Jiss baat ko kehne se mazoor hai tere lab Shally,   
Usi baat ko teri aankhon se chalkata paaya maine.

Shally.


bahut achche shally ..............ek ar behtareen ghazal aapki kalam se nikli hai jisne kuch sochne ko majboor kara haqeeqat ka is khoobsurati se bayaan ,,, qasam se dil ko chhu gayi

baharon k mausam main koi bechne aaya hai patjhad ko
sambhal kar khareedna kaanton se bhara na ho daaman uska
jo de paon toh chand baharein de dena usko
do chaar phoolon se ho mahek jaayega daaman uska
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«Reply #4 on: April 11, 2009, 02:35:37 PM »
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Too good shally...
bahut hi achha likha hia aapne,
ye lines sahi mein dilko chhu gayi...


Gaye wo jamane jab melo me kaanch ki gudiya bikti thi,
Aab to sare-raah masoom betiyoon ko bikta paya maine,




Ek Koshish...


Kisiki mazloomi pe kamzarfon ko haste paaya maine,
sahe jisne saare gam uspe hi ilzaam latate hue paaya maine,

tu dekha andekha chahe kar de zamane ki behayai ko,
har ek shay mein kisiko matlab nikalte hue paaya maine...
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«Reply #5 on: April 11, 2009, 06:22:19 PM »
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Too Gud Shally.. Dard ko gazal k roop mea bakoobi bayan kiya na hai tumne. keep writing....
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«Reply #6 on: April 11, 2009, 08:12:42 PM »
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Mehfil-e-yaar me khud ko khoob bikwaya maine,
Kabhi hassa logo ki marzi se to kabhi yaar ki khatir khud
ko rulaya maine,

Ranjish-O-Gham hi hai aab pehchaan har rishte ki,
Har insaan ko khalwat-e-dil me hi jeeta paaya maine,

 Mooh ki baat har koi sune dil ki baat na jane koi,
Aawajo ke bazaar me khomoshi ko bikte paaya maine,

Gulo-sarav aache hai sabhi wale,
Na nikalta chaman me yaar sa koi paaya maine,

Gaye wo jamane jab melo me kaanch ki gudiya bikti thi,
Aab to sare-raah masoom betiyoon ko bikta paya maine,

Jiss baat ko kehne se mazoor hai tere lab Shally,   
Usi baat ko teri aankhon se chalkata paaya maine.

Shally.



Wonderful Shally dear  Applause Applause Applause
Last four lines bahut accha likha hai. Superb  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #7 on: April 11, 2009, 08:22:26 PM »
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Mehfil-e-yaar me khud ko khoob bikwaya maine,
Kabhi hassa logo ki marzi se to kabhi yaar ki khatir khud
ko rulaya maine,

Ranjish-O-Gham hi hai aab pehchaan har rishte ki,
Har insaan ko khalwat-e-dil me hi jeeta paaya maine,

 Mooh ki baat har koi sune dil ki baat na jane koi,
Aawajo ke bazaar me khomoshi ko bikte paaya maine,

Gulo-sarav aache hai sabhi wale,
Na nikalta chaman me yaar sa koi paaya maine,

Gaye wo jamane jab melo me kaanch ki gudiya bikti thi,
Aab to sare-raah masoom betiyoon ko bikta paya maine,

Jiss baat ko kehne se mazoor hai tere lab Shally,   
Usi baat ko teri aankhon se chalkata paaya maine.

Shally.



waah shael jee waah...
impressive..
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«Reply #8 on: April 12, 2009, 01:33:04 AM »
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Mehfil-e-yaar me khud ko khoob bikwaya maine,
Kabhi hassa logo ki marzi se to kabhi yaar ki khatir khud
ko rulaya maine,

Ranjish-O-Gham hi hai aab pehchaan har rishte ki,
Har insaan ko khalwat-e-dil me hi jeeta paaya maine,

 Mooh ki baat har koi sune dil ki baat na jane koi,
Aawajo ke bazaar me khomoshi ko bikte paaya maine,

Gulo-sarav aache hai sabhi wale,
Na nikalta chaman me yaar sa koi paaya maine,

Gaye wo jamane jab melo me kaanch ki gudiya bikti thi,
Aab to sare-raah masoom betiyoon ko bikta paya maine,

Jiss baat ko kehne se mazoor hai tere lab Shally,   
Usi baat ko teri aankhon se chalkata paaya maine.

Shally.



Bahut bahut Khoob Shally!! aapki Kalam Din Bhar Din ,Aur gehri Hoti Jaa Rahi Hai...Dard aur jazbaaton se bhari ghazal likhi hai aapne..bahut khooob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause

Bahut Bahut Khoob Angel!!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #9 on: April 13, 2009, 07:29:53 PM »
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Mehfil-e-yaar me khud ko khoob bikwaya maine,
Kabhi hassa logo ki marzi se to kabhi yaar ki khatir khud
ko rulaya maine,

Ranjish-O-Gham hi hai aab pehchaan har rishte ki,
Har insaan ko khalwat-e-dil me hi jeeta paaya maine,

 Mooh ki baat har koi sune dil ki baat na jane koi,
Aawajo ke bazaar me khomoshi ko bikte paaya maine,

Gulo-sarav aache hai sabhi wale,
Na nikalta chaman me yaar sa koi paaya maine,

Gaye wo jamane jab melo me kaanch ki gudiya bikti thi,
Aab to sare-raah masoom betiyoon ko bikta paya maine,

Jiss baat ko kehne se mazoor hai tere lab Shally,   
Usi baat ko teri aankhon se chalkata paaya maine.

Shally.



Bahoot khoob shally sis Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


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«Reply #10 on: April 13, 2009, 07:34:39 PM »
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Salil or Huzena sis bahoot acha Thumbs UP
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«Reply #11 on: April 14, 2009, 09:37:06 AM »
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K.shael ji..Khubj saras majani Kavita Lakhi chhe Tame..mane Shabdo nathi malta ki aapni Prashansha kevi rite karun..Bahuj saras..Tamari Urdu Pan Ghani saari chhe..bas Tame Lakhta raho ne sada maate a aa dil ni dua chhe..Farithi Bahuj Sundar..Waah !!
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«Reply #12 on: April 14, 2009, 12:22:41 PM »
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bohat bohat khub tumhari sari ghazal or poetries heart touching hoti hai and sab ki tarah yeh bhi best thi wonderfull Winking
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«Reply #13 on: April 14, 2009, 12:28:19 PM »
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Bohat bohat khoob Shally pehle sher me yu lagta hain tumne meri hi zindagi bayaan kardi....... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Tujhse bichad kar jaana, bas itna samajh na aaya

Tujhe khoker kya khoya aur kya paya maine....

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Shukriya Sajid Ji,

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«Reply #14 on: April 14, 2009, 12:29:11 PM »
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Wah Kya Baat hai Shally..!! Yaar Wapai Behad Gaharaai Liye hue Hai aapka Yeh Qalaam..!! Aur Lafzon ka Chunaaw Bhi Kabil-e-Tareef Hai.. Great Work..!! Applause Applause


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Shukriya Mann ji ki aapne apna keemti waqt diya aur meri ghazal ko saraha...

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