~~"CHEHRE SE PARDA UTHAO ZARA"~~ by Shally.

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«Reply #15 on: May 05, 2009, 01:36:41 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wah shally beautifull creation by you g88 lines
bohat khoob...
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Hum karenge wafa tumse har ghadi
Shikaayat ka mauka na denge tumhe kabhi

Haste haste guzaarenge ye zindagi ka har lamha
Kabhi roothne ka mauka na denge tumhe kabhi

Aankhon mein kajal banke sajna hai humen
Tumare dil mein dhadkan banke dhadkenge har ghadi

 
 
 

very very nice yaar
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«Reply #16 on: May 05, 2009, 02:41:24 PM »
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Khoye ho apni hi duniya me kabhi hamse nazar milao zara,
Tum bhi ho chand bhi hai wajood kiska hai asal batlao zara,

Kaatilana andaaj rakhti hai nazre tumhari khuda ki kasam,
Ho na jaaye diwana har koi, Inhe rehna salike se sikhao zara,

Reshmi badan pe makhmal ki kurti reham karo aashiqo par,
Aur kuch nahi to iss pyari moorat pe kajal ka tika lagao zara,

Kya zarurat mehfil me chiraagoo.n ki ae hasee.n jaan-e-mann,
Mehfil tumhari hai,ham tumhare hai chehre se parda uthao zara,

Wah Wah keh uthenge log iss mehfil ke teri har adaa ko dekhkar,
Dil hi dil me gungunate ho jise, uss tarane ko aaj labo pe lao zara,


Hichkichahat na u rakho kisi baat ki mehfil-e-yaar  me Shally,
Dil-phaink majnu nahi Aashiq hai tumhare duniya ko batlao zara.

Shally.

Waah Shally! Aap ki shayari dinodin jawaan hotee jaa rahee hai! Dil-o-dimaag khoob ooncheen-ooncheen parwaazoun ki taraf mukhaatib ho rahey hain! Tasawwur haseen khayaalaatoun mein gotey lagaaney lagaa hai! Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #17 on: May 05, 2009, 03:00:56 PM »
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Shael, itna sundar likhne lagi ho kya baat hai...
 Bahut barhiya bahut aala ghazal hai...
Wah...
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«Reply #18 on: May 05, 2009, 05:21:12 PM »
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Bahut behatareen Ghazal pesh ki hai aapne Shally Ji Khumar-e-ishq me
 Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wonderful, Mind-blowing, Shally Ji

Aapki itni sunder peshkash per mujhe apni ghazal ke chand ashar yaad aa gaye

NAZAR JHUKI HAI MAGAR DIL ME BEKARARI HAI
HAYA KI AAD ME JAISE KOI SHIKARI HAI

HUM BHI KHAMOSHI KO SUN LENE KA FUN RAKHATE HAIN
ZINDAGI HUMNE BHI YUN HI NAHIN GUZARI HAI

BAND HOTON ME MUHABBAT KO CHHUPA LE LEKIN
SURKH CHEHARE SE ZIGAR KA BAYAN JAARI HAI

AANKH KE TEER SE ZAKHMI HUE ZIGAR KITANE
AISA LAGATA HAI KI AB TO HAMARI BAARI HAI

SARVESH RASTOGI

Bohat Achche Sarvesh Bhaiy
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«Reply #19 on: May 05, 2009, 05:23:49 PM »
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shally, main kya kahoon, alfaaz hee nahi hain yaar! ishq kee shiddat iss tarhaan se lafzon me utaarna, bahot kum logon se hota hai. tumne tho, Subhan-Allah waah!

sarvesh ji, equally same. kya kahe koi inn nazmon k agay?...


Hay, na ahaen bharo iss tarhaan se k meri jaan jaatee hai,
Parde se dahka rehne do ye husn tumhaara, k humaaree aankh ko bhi sharm aatee hai.

Chand par lehaf tehra nahi ka bhi, usski roshnee me sub jhalakta hai,
Na dehko unn teekhee nazron se, k dil aur bhi taez dhadrakta hai.

Tum tasweer ho chaman kee, ya hooron kee baadee kee mailka, muhje pata nahi.
Har koi hai fida tum par, main b aashique bana, iss me meri khata nahi...





Mashallah Kya KHoob Likha Hai Sidraah Ji,.
Bohat Achche,.
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«Reply #20 on: May 05, 2009, 05:24:44 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Wah shally beautifull creation by you g88 lines
bohat khoob...
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Hum karenge wafa tumse har ghadi
Shikaayat ka mauka na denge tumhe kabhi

Haste haste guzaarenge ye zindagi ka har lamha
Kabhi roothne ka mauka na denge tumhe kabhi

Aankhon mein kajal banke sajna hai humen
Tumare dil mein dhadkan banke dhadkenge har ghadi

 
 
 

Nice Line Jaya Sis,.
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«Reply #21 on: May 05, 2009, 05:26:46 PM »
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Shukriya Shally Ji,
Shukriya Diya Ji, Anjan Dharkan Ji and Azeem Ji
Shally Ji ki Ghazal hi itni sunder hai, maine to bas sur me sur milaya hai.
Thanks to all
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #22 on: May 06, 2009, 04:39:22 AM »
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Ye Meri pehli ghazal hai khumar-e-ishq me, umeed karti hoon aap sab pasandh karenge,


Khoye ho apni hi duniya me kabhi hamse nazar milao zara,
Tum bhi ho chand bhi hai wajood kiska hai asal batlao zara,

Kaatilana andaaj rakhti hai nazre tumhari khuda ki kasam,
Ho na jaaye diwana har koi, Inhe rehna salike se sikhao zara,

Reshmi badan pe makhmal ki kurti reham karo aashiqo par,
Aur kuch nahi to iss pyari moorat pe kajal ka tika lagao zara,

Kya zarurat mehfil me chiraagoo.n ki ae hasee.n jaan-e-mann,
Mehfil tumhari hai,ham tumhare hai chehre se parda uthao zara,

Wah Wah keh uthenge log iss mehfil ke teri har adaa ko dekhkar,
Dil hi dil me gungunate ho jise, uss tarane ko aaj labo pe lao zara,

Hichkichahat na u rakho kisi baat ki mehfil-e-yaar  me Shally,
Dil-phaink majnu nahi Aashiq hai tumhare duniya ko batlao zara.

Shally.


Itna Achha Bhi Na Likha Hai Shally K Taarif Ki Jaaye.......Na ! re ! Itne Achhe Ash'aar Hai hi Nahi To Comment kya di Jaaye
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«Reply #23 on: May 06, 2009, 06:11:21 AM »
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Amazing Ghazal....!!
Asusual tumhari har ghazal achi hi hoti hain but yeh khumare ishq mera fav hai to yeh aur ziada awesome hai keep writing Winking
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«Reply #24 on: May 06, 2009, 08:10:57 AM »
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Ye Meri pehli ghazal hai khumar-e-ishq me, umeed karti hoon aap sab pasandh karenge,


Khoye ho apni hi duniya me kabhi hamse nazar milao zara,
Tum bhi ho chand bhi hai wajood kiska hai asal batlao zara,

Kaatilana andaaj rakhti hai nazre tumhari khuda ki kasam,
Ho na jaaye diwana har koi, Inhe rehna salike se sikhao zara,

Reshmi badan pe makhmal ki kurti reham karo aashiqo par,
Aur kuch nahi to iss pyari moorat pe kajal ka tika lagao zara,

Kya zarurat mehfil me chiraagoo.n ki ae hasee.n jaan-e-mann,
Mehfil tumhari hai,ham tumhare hai chehre se parda uthao zara,

Wah Wah keh uthenge log iss mehfil ke teri har adaa ko dekhkar,
Dil hi dil me gungunate ho jise, uss tarane ko aaj labo pe lao zara,

Hichkichahat na u rakho kisi baat ki mehfil-e-yaar  me Shally,
Dil-phaink majnu nahi Aashiq hai tumhare duniya ko batlao zara.

Shally.

bahaut khoob Shally jee... Applause
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«Reply #25 on: May 06, 2009, 11:27:13 AM »
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Wow Kya Baat Hai Shally.. Aisa Laga Nahi Ki Yeh Tumhari Pahali Gazal Hai Khumar-e-Ishq Me..!! Har Lafz Mohabbat se Bhara Hai..!!

Ek Aahiq Ki Nazar se Likha Yeh Qalaam Waqai Bahut Khubsoorat aur Pyaar Bhara Hai..!! Really Beautiful Words.. Bahut Bahut Khoooob.. Applause Applause Applause Applause


**~** Mann **~**

Shukriya Mann Ji, Aab aapke iss comment ka ham kya reply de ? samajh nahi aa raha...tahe dil se shukriya ata karti hoo.n aapka,

Shally.
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«Reply #26 on: May 06, 2009, 11:51:27 AM »
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Mashallah Kya KHoob Likha Hai Sidraah Ji,.
Bohat Achche,.

thank you azeem ji
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«Reply #27 on: May 06, 2009, 11:56:05 AM »
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Ye Meri pehli ghazal hai khumar-e-ishq me, umeed karti hoon aap sab pasandh karenge,


Khoye ho apni hi duniya me kabhi hamse nazar milao zara,
Tum bhi ho chand bhi hai wajood kiska hai asal batlao zara,

Kaatilana andaaj rakhti hai nazre tumhari khuda ki kasam,
Ho na jaaye diwana har koi, Inhe rehna salike se sikhao zara,

Reshmi badan pe makhmal ki kurti reham karo aashiqo par,
Aur kuch nahi to iss pyari moorat pe kajal ka tika lagao zara,

Kya zarurat mehfil me chiraagoo.n ki ae hasee.n jaan-e-mann,
Mehfil tumhari hai,ham tumhare hai chehre se parda uthao zara,

Wah Wah keh uthenge log iss mehfil ke teri har adaa ko dekhkar,
Dil hi dil me gungunate ho jise, uss tarane ko aaj labo pe lao zara,

Hichkichahat na u rakho kisi baat ki mehfil-e-yaar  me Shally,
Dil-phaink majnu nahi Aashiq hai tumhare duniya ko batlao zara.

Shally.


bahut hi ache shally ji..her ek lafz her ek line bahut hi badhya andaaz me likhi gayi hai..is gazal ki tareef me sirf ek sher kahna chahta hu

her ek lafz her ek sher me jaadu sa bhara hai
na ruko ab, is trah kuch bhi gazle sunao zara
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aapki gazal ko thora aur aage badhaate hue.. utna acha to nahi lekin thori koshish ker raha hu


paas hai itne ki hawao ko jagah nahi milti
dil chahta hai aur bhi paas aa jao zara

mile the kabhi aise, ki jannat zameen per hui thi
wo jannat ka nazara aaj phir se dohrao zara

muskurahat per teri, chaand sitaaare waaru
na rok ise, isi trah muskurao zara
  

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«Reply #28 on: May 07, 2009, 09:30:51 AM »
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bahut hi ache shally ji..her ek lafz her ek line bahut hi badhya andaaz me likhi gayi hai..is gazal ki tareef me sirf ek sher kahna chahta hu

her ek lafz her ek sher me jaadu sa bhara hai
na ruko ab, is trah kuch bhi gazle sunao zara
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aapki gazal ko thora aur aage badhaate hue.. utna acha to nahi lekin thori koshish ker raha hu


paas hai itne ki hawao ko jagah nahi milti
dil chahta hai aur bhi paas aa jao zara

mile the kabhi aise, ki jannat zameen per hui thi
wo jannat ka nazara aaj phir se dohrao zara

muskurahat per teri, chaand sitaaare waaru
na rok ise, isi trah muskurao zara
  



Nice One Samnoj Bhai,.
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«Reply #29 on: May 07, 2009, 09:37:57 AM »
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Waah bahoot bahoot khoob Shally sis....aap to maahir hai khumar-e-ishq me love4
Applause Applause Applause

Shukriya Salma Dear,

Shally.
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