~~"KISI KE JAANE SE"~~by Shally.

by k.shael on June 01, 2009, 08:58:29 AM
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Ek pal na gawaya kabhi khushi pane me,
Tamam-umar gujar di, jisne gammo ko sajane me,

Mehfile lut.ti hazaar dekhi hongi dosto,
Dil-e-karar, aata hai khud hi ke lutt jaane me,

Wo insaan hi kya jo rakhe na jajbaat seene me,
Khel kar dekho, maza bahut hai roothne manane me,

Iss kadar koi kaise shatir ho sakta hai, hairat hai,
Waada khilafi, aur phir maahir hai bahana banane me,

Mein jaamzar ,nacheez aashik hoon unka aur,
Aitbaar hai unhe, ham kabil hai chand tare tod lane me,

Iss kadar na kar khud se bewafayi  Shally,
Jaan le zindagi tamam nahi ho jaati kisi ke jaane se.

Shally.
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«Reply #1 on: June 01, 2009, 09:01:05 AM »
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Nawab ji,

Wah ! wah ! wah !

Kya ghazal likhi hai Applause Applause Applause

Yoon he likhti raho Thumbs UP
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«Reply #2 on: June 01, 2009, 09:06:46 AM »
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Wow Shally... Jazzbaaton Ko Beahad Khubsoorati se Lafzon Ki Zubaan di Hai Dear..!! Aisa Laga Padh Kar, Jaise Dil Me Dabi Kisi Succhaai Khud se Ru-b-Ru Karwaane Ke Liye Aapne Yeh Gazal Likhi Hai..!! Shayad Koi Such Hi likha Hai Aapne apni Zindgi se juda.. Hai Na..?

Really a Beautiful Creation.. Bahut Khoooooooob.. Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #3 on: June 01, 2009, 09:21:43 AM »
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Waah...Bohot achcha likha hai Shally...Bohot Khoob !!
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«Reply #4 on: June 01, 2009, 11:13:41 AM »
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Ek pal na gawaya kabhi khushi pane me,
Tamam-umar gujar di, jisne gammo ko sajane me,

Mehfile lut.ti hazaar dekhi hongi dosto,
Dil-e-karar, aata hai khud hi ke lutt jaane me,

Wo insaan hi kya jo rakhe na jajbaat seene me,
Khel kar dekho, maza bahut hai roothne manane me,

Iss kadar koi kaise shatir ho sakta hai, hairat hai,
Waada khilafi, aur phir maahir hai bahana banane me,

Mein jaamzar ,nacheez aashik hoon unka aur,
Aitbaar hai unhe, ham kabil hai chand tare tod lane me,

Iss kadar na kar khud se bewafayi  Shally,
Jaan le zindagi tamam nahi ho jaati kisi ke jaane se.

Shally.


Mashallah
kamaal likha hai Shally dear Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
ek koshish meri bhi


Ho gayi zindagi gulzaar kisi ke aane se
Ab waqt guzarta hai in lamhon ko sambhalne mein

Ae hamsafar mere kuch to jawaab do mujhe
Kahin kho na jaaon main tumhe paane mein




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«Reply #5 on: June 01, 2009, 11:27:26 AM »
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bahut hi badhya likha hai
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«Reply #6 on: June 01, 2009, 12:10:48 PM »
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Subhan Allah Bohat Achcha Likha Hai Aapne, Shaly Yunhi LIkhte Rahiye,.
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«Reply #7 on: June 01, 2009, 12:23:45 PM »
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Wah wah Shally ji bahut khoob,excellent. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #8 on: June 01, 2009, 12:28:13 PM »
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bahut achche shally dear

ummra na gujargi tej kissii ke gujar jaane se
kii iski raftaar par bandish nahin lagti
jo beet gaya oose bhula de gujra hua kal samajh kar
yeh zindgi hai isko sawarne mein der nahin lagti
khushiyaan nahin milti yoon ghamon ko bech kar
kii apne gham de kar kissii ko, dua nahin milti
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«Reply #9 on: June 01, 2009, 12:41:43 PM »
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Karar aata hai khud ke lut jane me
Kya kamaal likhti hain aap Shally Ji
Bahut bahut khoob
SARVESH RASTOGI
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«Reply #10 on: June 01, 2009, 07:11:14 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Shallly!!!

Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab Hai.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #11 on: June 02, 2009, 08:55:15 AM »
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bhut hi khoobsurat likha hai aapne shally ji daad hazir hai qubool karain
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«Reply #12 on: June 02, 2009, 09:04:12 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bohat khoob shally princess beautifull lines... Thumbs UP
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«Reply #13 on: June 02, 2009, 06:25:39 PM »
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Wow Bahut Khoob Shally Ji.
Yoon Hi Likhte Rahiye.
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«Reply #14 on: June 03, 2009, 07:23:13 AM »
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Shael Sahiba...

Kis qadar ehsaas men doobi hui,
Kis tarah hijr men tarapti hui,
Nikhri hai ghamon ko seh kar,
Phir bhi hai umeed se lipti hui...


Main ne aap ki ghazal ko apne ashaar men bayan kiya... Samjhiye khud...

Shukriya...
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