Jab dil mil jata hai....

by punam on July 07, 2009, 08:18:22 AM
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«Reply #15 on: July 08, 2009, 11:37:39 AM »
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baut bahut khubsurat punam ji......bahut dilkash hai har alfaaj
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«Reply #16 on: July 08, 2009, 02:34:14 PM »
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Quite a nice work Ms. Punam, bravo!
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«Reply #17 on: July 08, 2009, 02:36:53 PM »
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kisi ajnabi se jab dil mil jata hai
pal me sab kuch badal jata hai...

har ghadi bas nazron ko sirf
unke aane ka intezaar satata hai...

har lamha uski sangat ki rahe aas
yehi Khwaab dil ko bechain kar jata hai...

pareshan dil ko qarar nahi mil pata
jab tak deedar unka nahi ho jata hai...

manzil bhale dushwar ho ya sahil
Jism bekhudi me unki or chala jata hai..

humsafar wohi maangu sada ke liye
jab uthati hu hath dua me wohi ata hai...


Wow Punnu..... bahut accha likha hai tumne....  Applause Applause
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«Reply #18 on: July 08, 2009, 03:06:28 PM »
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Bas Sochte-Sochte Tujhe, Likh Raha Hoon Kuch Naam Tere,
Kuch Lafz Aur Kuch Alfaazon Ko, Kar Raha Hoon Inaam Tere.....

Har Ghadi Tujhe Sochta hoon, Har Pal Tujhe Chaahta Hoon,
Bhej Raha Hoon Ehasaason Ke Sath, Yeh Pyar Bhara Paigaam Tere..!!



**~** Mann **~**
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«Reply #19 on: July 08, 2009, 04:44:20 PM »
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bahut pyaar se bhare ehsaason ko kalambadh kiya hain punam ji
keep writing
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«Reply #20 on: July 09, 2009, 05:22:19 AM »
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Behad hi acha likha hai aapne Punam ji,
bahot hi achi rachna,very nice poem

hosla afzai ka bohat bohat shukriya...@kaash ji...
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punam
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«Reply #21 on: July 09, 2009, 05:26:21 AM »
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Bahut achha likha hai, Poonam Ji! Bahut khoob! Applause

bahut bahut shukriya Deepati ji...
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«Reply #22 on: July 09, 2009, 06:02:08 AM »
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bahoot khoob Punam and Mann ji
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