Jab dil mil jata hai....

by punam on July 07, 2009, 01:48:22 PM
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kisi ajnabi se jab dil mil jata hai
pal me sab kuch badal jata hai...

har ghadi bas nazron ko sirf
unke aane ka intezaar satata hai...

har lamha uski sangat ki rahe aas
yehi Khwaab dil ko bechain kar jata hai...

pareshan dil ko qarar nahi mil pata
jab tak deedar unka nahi ho jata hai...

manzil bhale dushwar ho ya sahil
Jism bekhudi me unki or chala jata hai..

humsafar wohi maangu sada ke liye
jab uthati hu hath dua me wohi ata hai...
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«Reply #1 on: July 07, 2009, 01:49:39 PM »
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Bahut khoob Punam Ji
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«Reply #2 on: July 07, 2009, 01:51:51 PM »
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shukriya Rajesh ji....
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«Reply #3 on: July 07, 2009, 01:57:30 PM »
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Punam Dear.. Kafi Intzaar ke baad aapki Taraf se Kuch Padhne ko Mila.. Bahut Hi Pyaare alfaaz Pesh kiye Hain aapne.. !!

Waqai aisa hi hota hai Jab Dil Mil jate hain..!! Un Lamhon Ko Lafzon ki zubaan de kar Behad Khubsoorati se pesh kiya hai aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


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«Reply #4 on: July 07, 2009, 02:01:51 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Poonam Didi,  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley Bahut dino baad aapko phir se padna hamare liye sukhad ehsas hai..

Shally.
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«Reply #5 on: July 07, 2009, 03:19:50 PM »
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Punam Dear.. Kafi Intzaar ke baad aapki Taraf se Kuch Padhne ko Mila.. Bahut Hi Pyaare alfaaz Pesh kiye Hain aapne.. !!

Waqai aisa hi hota hai Jab Dil Mil jate hain..!! Un Lamhon Ko Lafzon ki zubaan de kar Behad Khubsoorati se pesh kiya hai aapne.. Bahut Bahut Khooooooob.. Applause Applause


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Itne khoobsurat andaz main itni pyari tareef ka hosla afzai ka bohat bohat shukriya Mann ji ...
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«Reply #6 on: July 07, 2009, 03:24:15 PM »
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Wow Punam ji,kitna gaheraayi hai aap ke kavita mein.excellent.
 :icon_thumleft:very beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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Bahut khoob likha hai aapne Poonam Didi,  Clapping Smiley  Clapping Smiley Bahut dino baad aapko phir se padna hamare liye sukhad ehsas hai..

Shally.

bohat bohat shukriya is hausla afzai ka shally Usual Smile .... bohat shukriya pasand karne ka.. love4
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«Reply #8 on: July 08, 2009, 07:39:23 AM »
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Bahut achha likha hai, Poonam Ji! Bahut khoob! Applause
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«Reply #9 on: July 08, 2009, 02:59:06 PM »
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kisi ajnabi se jab dil mil jata hai
pal me sab kuch badal jata hai...

har ghadi bas nazron ko sirf
unke aane ka intezaar satata hai...

har lamha uski sangat ki rahe aas
yehi Khwaab dil ko bechain kar jata hai...

pareshan dil ko qarar nahi mil pata
jab tak deedar unka nahi ho jata hai...

manzil bhale dushwar ho ya sahil
Jism bekhudi me unki or chala jata hai..

humsafar wohi maangu sada ke liye
jab uthati hu hath dua me wohi ata hai...

bahut dino baad aapko padhnaa ahcaa lagaa punam ji..

dil me basa kar jise muskarate rahe
wahee hame n jane kyoo ajnabee samjthe rahee.

unhone thukraadee thee mohobbat hamaaree
ham n jane kitne janmo se unhe pyaar karte rahe..


netra...
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«Reply #10 on: July 08, 2009, 03:09:00 PM »
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Bohot Khoob Punam
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«Reply #11 on: July 08, 2009, 03:10:46 PM »
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bahut dino baad aapko padhnaa ahcaa lagaa punam ji..

dil me basa kar jise muskarate rahe
wahee hame n jane kyoo ajnabee samjthe rahee.

unhone thukraadee thee mohobbat hamaaree
ham n jane kitne janmo se unhe pyaar karte rahe..


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Bohot Khoob Netra Ji

Pehli baar aapko is section main dekha hai !
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«Reply #12 on: July 08, 2009, 04:00:49 PM »
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very nice punam ji
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«Reply #13 on: July 08, 2009, 04:43:00 PM »
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Behad khubsurat dear
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«Reply #14 on: July 08, 2009, 05:05:34 PM »
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Wow Punam ji,kitna gaheraayi hai aap ke kavita mein.excellent.
 :icon_thumleft:very beautiful creation. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji ....
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