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JHOOT KEHDU YEH MERI FITRAT ME NAHI SHAMIL
PAR TUJE BEVAFA BHI KEHNA ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
AISA NAHI KE TUJSE HASEE DUNIYA ME NAHI KOI
PAR EK TERE SIWA KOI SANAM ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
HAR SHEHAR HUMNE DEKHA KAIEE GALIYO KI KHAK CHANI
DAR-E-JANA KE SIWA KOI DAR ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
MERE DUSHMANO NE BAKSHI IZZAT MUJE YEH KEHKAR
GHAYEL BURA YAKINAN SHAYER BURA YEH KEHNA ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
-SAJID GHAYEL-
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«Reply #1 on: August 07, 2008, 07:46:50 AM » |
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bohut khoob saajid ji
JHOOT KEHDU YEH MERI FITRAT ME NAHI SHAMIL
PAR TUJE BEVAFA BHI KEHNA ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
ye 2 lines hamei behad pasand aayi
keep writing ............
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«Reply #2 on: August 07, 2008, 07:53:04 AM » |
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BAHUT KHOOB SAJID SAHAB
SABHI LINES ACCHI HAIN...
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bekarar
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«Reply #3 on: August 07, 2008, 07:56:24 AM » |
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sajid ji, choti par ek kasi hui behtreen peshkash... dad kubul karen 
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«Reply #4 on: August 07, 2008, 10:48:40 AM » |
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Bahut Acha Likha Hai Sajid Ji Aapne.
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«Reply #5 on: August 07, 2008, 10:52:09 AM » |
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JHOOT KEHDU YEH MERI FITRAT ME NAHI SHAMIL
PAR TUJE BEVAFA BHI KEHNA ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
AISA NAHI KE TUJSE HASEE DUNIYA ME NAHI KOI
PAR EK TERE SIWA KOI SANAM ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
HAR SHEHAR HUMNE DEKHA KAIEE GALIYO KI KHAK CHANI
DAR-E-JANA KE SIWA KOI DAR ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
MERE DUSHMANO NE BAKSHI IZZAT MUJE YEH KEHKAR
GHAYEL BURA YAKINAN SHAYER BURA YEH KEHNA ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
-SAJID GHAYEL-
Waah... Waah...  Ishq bhi aur dard bhi... bahut umda peshkash Sajid ji..  |
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sajid_ghayel
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«Reply #7 on: September 29, 2008, 04:01:00 AM » |
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bohat bohat shukriya dosto
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2008, 02:42:12 PM » |
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JHOOT KEHDU YEH MERI FITRAT ME NAHI SHAMIL
PAR TUJE BEVAFA BHI KEHNA ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
AISA NAHI KE TUJSE HASEE DUNIYA ME NAHI KOI
PAR EK TERE SIWA KOI SANAM ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
HAR SHEHAR HUMNE DEKHA KAIEE GALIYO KI KHAK CHANI
DAR-E-JANA KE SIWA KOI DAR ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
MERE DUSHMANO NE BAKSHI IZZAT MUJE YEH KEHKAR
GHAYEL BURA YAKINAN SHAYER BURA YEH KEHNA ACHCHA NAHI LAGTA
-SAJID GHAYEL-
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2009, 07:17:46 AM » |
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thanks Roja
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«Reply #10 on: January 13, 2009, 07:38:43 AM » |
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Sajid Bahut Achhe.... yeh Gazal hamari nighon se chupi kaseey rhi.....shayad bahut pehle post ki hogi.. khair... bahut accha likha hai .. khaskar ke 2nd sher.... teh dil se daad kabool kijiye.
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«Reply #11 on: January 13, 2009, 08:35:45 AM » |
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Bohat bohat shukriyaan Humtum actually main khud kitni hi poetry miss kar chuka hu. Iska sabse bada aur easy solution yeh hain ke har poet ki separate only original work available ho so u can keep a track or else.....it quite difficult to read everything
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«Reply #12 on: January 13, 2009, 12:14:07 PM » |
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Bahoot Khoob.. Jhoot Kehdu Yeh Meri Fitrat may Nahe Shamil..
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«Reply #13 on: January 13, 2009, 12:58:05 PM » |
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Bohat shukriyaa Qutubuddin
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«Reply #14 on: January 13, 2009, 04:32:07 PM » |
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wah kaya baat hai... bahoot khoob SG ji!!
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on eTI community..
