Meri Fitrat Thi......Rishi

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Unse Mohabbat Ki Mujhe Aadat Thi...
Unki Wafayen Meri Ibadat Thi...

Milna Hokar Bhi Na Mile Hum Kabhi...
Jane Kaisi Ye Meri Kismat Thi....

Lekar Gamon Ki Ratein Tanha Rha Mein Akela...
Socha Yahi To Hun Mein Yahi Meri Fitrat Thi....
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«Reply #1 on: January 23, 2010, 01:01:00 PM »
Nice One Bro  Applause Applause Applause
Keep Writing  icon_thumleft

Ye mai tha ya meri fitrat thi...
Dur hokar bhi kyun unki jarurat thi...

Na de saka koi javab mai khud ko kabhi...
Zinda rahkar bhi maut mili, aaisi apni kismat thi...
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«Reply #2 on: January 23, 2010, 01:11:56 PM »
Bahut Sundar Likha Hai Pank Bro  Applause Applause Applause
And Shukriya Zara Nawaji Ka
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Wo Waqt Darmiyan Hi Mera Kuch Aisa Tha
Kismat Ki Lakeere Zanjiro Mein Zakadi Thi

Aaj Usne Apne Dard Bhi Alag Kar Liye Mujhse
Mein Rona Chahta Tha Magar Aasuao Ki Bhi Mujhse Bagawat Thi
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«Reply #3 on: January 23, 2010, 04:58:08 PM »
Nice Effort Rishi Bhai
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Waqt bhi sath na tha kabhi...
Hantho ki lakeere bhi parayi thin...

Uske dard bhi na ho sake mere...
Mere ashkon ne bhi usse wafa nibhayi thi...
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«Reply #4 on: January 23, 2010, 05:07:56 PM »
Bahut Khub Pank Bro Padhkar Dil Garden Garden Ho Gya
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Tumhen Apna Dil Diya Ye Mere Pyar Ki Had Thi
Tumhen Apni Jaan Di  Ye Mere Aitbar Ki Had Thi
Mar Gaye Hum Aur Khuli Rahi Aankhein
Ye Huamri  Intzar Ki Had Thi
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«Reply #5 on: January 23, 2010, 05:18:45 PM »
GOOD ONE "RISHI" JI OR "PANK" JI BAHUT KHOOB LIKHA AAP DONO....

Har insan ki apni fitrat hoti hai
chahe woh kahe ya na kahein fitrat uski zahir hoti hai
jo wafa karein woh duniya se na dare
jo daga karein uski fitrat hi pata chalti hai

zindagi ke log kai tukde kar dete hai
ek wafa dusri bewafa
wafa apnati hai bewafa chodti hai
yahi do kisse duniya main mashoor
kya kare ye aap sabki hai apni fitrat ka dastoor........

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«Reply #6 on: January 23, 2010, 05:48:19 PM »
JI HA BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA "RISHI" JI NE........

Har koi apni fitrat chupata nahi
or jo batata woh samjhta nahi
jane kitni fitrat jankar logo ne kuch socha nahi
pata nahi log apni fitrat kyu batate hai jab koi janna chahta nahi.....

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«Reply #7 on: January 23, 2010, 05:58:56 PM »
Thanks Rishi Bhai
Bahoot Khoob Likha Aapne Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Thanks Muskanji Aapne bhi bahoot Khoob Likha Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
Fitrat ki baat pe hi reply kar raha hun

Meri fitrat meri pehchan thi...
Uski muhabbat mera imaan thi...

Maan liya jise muhabbat me apni duniya maine...
Jante na the meri duniya hi mujhse anjaan thi...
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«Reply #8 on: January 23, 2010, 06:05:33 PM »
Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut acha likha hai aapne Rishi dear

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Zara Nawaji Ka Muskaan JI, Kaash Ji And Pank Bro
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«Reply #9 on: January 23, 2010, 06:06:30 PM »
GOOD REPLY "PANK" JI  Applause

GAR AAP KI FITRAT KI AAPKI PAHECHAN THI
TOH KYU NA SAMAJH SAKI AAPKI WAFA KO
TOH KYU NA AAPKI IMAAN JO HAI AAPKI
TOH KYU KADR KAR SAKI WOH AAPKI IMAAN KI......."PANK" JI........ Is it SO!

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«Reply #10 on: January 23, 2010, 06:20:58 PM »
JI HA BAHUT HI ACHA LIKHA "RISHI" JI NE........

Har koi apni fitrat chupata nahi
or jo batata woh samjhta nahi
jane kitni fitrat jankar logo ne kuch socha nahi
pata nahi log apni fitrat kyu batate hai jab koi janna chahta nahi.....

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Nice One Muskan ji ApplauseApplauseApplauseApplause

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«Reply #11 on: January 23, 2010, 06:24:01 PM »
Nice Lines Rishi Ji,Pank Ji & Muskaan Ji

Me Bhi Kuch Likh raha Hun Ummed Hai Aapko Pasand Aayega

Tujhe Dedu Zamane Ki Khushiya Yeh Meri Hasrat Thi
Mil Gaya Tera Pyar Mujhe Yeh Khuda Ki Mujpe Barkat Thi
Gir Bhi Jaata Qatra Aansu Aankhon Se Tu Me Bhi Roh Utna
Yeh Mera Pyaar Tha Aur Usse Laga Bin Baat Rona Meri Fitrat Thi
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«Reply #12 on: January 23, 2010, 06:24:13 PM »
Bewafa Thi Wo Aur Bewafa Ki Aadat Bhi Bahut Thi
Majbur The Hum Aur Us Zalim Se Mohbbat Bhi Bahut Thi

Waqif Na The Ramz-e-Mohbbat Se Wo Warna
Dil Ke Liye Thori C Enaayat Bhi Bahut Thi

Wo Meri Mohbbat Ko Hi Jhooth Tahra Diya Unhone
Hum Puchte Hai Us Jalim Se Kya Yahi Humari Fitrat Thi
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«Reply #13 on: January 23, 2010, 06:25:09 PM »
GOOD REPLY "PANK" JI  Applause

GAR AAP KI FITRAT KI AAPKI PAHECHAN THI
TOH KYU NA SAMAJH SAKI AAPKI WAFA KO
TOH KYU NA AAPKI IMAAN JO HAI AAPKI
TOH KYU KADR KAR SAKI WOH AAPKI IMAAN KI......."PANK" JI........ Is it SO!

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Bahut Khub Muskaan Ji Bahut Sundar Likha Hai Aapne ApplauseApplauseApplause
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«Reply #14 on: January 23, 2010, 06:26:46 PM »
Nice Lines Rishi Ji,Pank Ji & Muskaan Ji

Me Bhi Kuch Likh raha Hun Ummed Hai Aapko Pasand Aayega

Tujhe Dedu Zamane Ki Khushiya Yeh Meri Hasrat Thi
Mil Gaya Tera Pyar Mujhe Yeh Khuda Ki Mujpe Barkat Thi
Gir Bhi Jaata Qatra Aansu Aankhon Se Tu Me Bhi Roh Utna
Yeh Mera Pyaar Tha Aur Usse Laga Bin Baat Rona Meri Fitrat Thi


Bahut Bahut Shukriya Zara Nawaji Ka SK Bro
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And Aate Hi Kya Khub Umda Likha Hai ApplauseApplauseApplause
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