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i think u like it ?............ :D
Main Wohi Hoon Jise Tum Piyar Kiya Kerte The
Din Mein So Baar Mera Naam Liya Kerte The
Kiya Baat Hai Kiyoon Mujh Se Khaffa Bethe Ho
Kiya Kissi Aur Ko Dil Apna Dein Bethe Hoo
Faasale To Pehle Na Hua Kerte The AnMoL
Main Woh Hoon Jispe Tum Aetbaar Kiya Kerte the
Mujh ko Maaloom Hai Gum Hay Koi Sogaat Nahein
Tum Mujhe Apna Kahoo Aise Bhi Haalaat Nahein
Aur Ager Bhool Gaye Ho To Koi Baat Nahein
Zakham To Pehle Bhi Is Dil Pe Lagga Kerte The
Main Wohi Hoon Jise Tum Pyarrr Kiya Karte The
Din Mein So Baar Mera Naam Liya Kerte The
Dil Mein Aata Hai Tumhein Tadpa Doon
Dard Jo Tumne Diya Hai Wo Tumhein lauta Doon
Aur Ager Jurm Na Samnjho To Ye Dohra Doon
Tum Mujhe Hasil-E- Armaan Kaha Kerte The
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«Reply #1 on: May 23, 2005, 10:11:37 AM » |
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very very nice nice_off_me.
zindagi ne toda hai dil ko iss kadar ke sochte hain hum
kyun tumhe jaane bina he hum tum per aitbar kiya karte the.
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«Reply #2 on: May 23, 2005, 10:39:51 AM » |
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thank you very much tanha dil ji can i know ur name mein apka naam nahi janti.........
kuch lamho ke sath hai sirf
naa karna takraar ki baatein
tum bas yu hi ruth humse
hum chede purane lamho ki baatein.........
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«Reply #3 on: May 23, 2005, 10:46:11 AM » |
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again very well!!!!!!!!!!
I am Chintan.
kuch lamho mein he tanha
zindagi gujar nahi jati
jo takraar na hoti tumse to
nazdeek mere tum kaise aati?
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«Reply #4 on: May 23, 2005, 11:04:17 AM » |
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Very nice both of you nice_off_me and tanha dil tanha safar..
Great and good.. Liya Kerte Thee...
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«Reply #5 on: May 23, 2005, 11:25:03 AM » |
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pleasure qutub ji...................................
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«Reply #6 on: May 23, 2005, 11:54:03 AM » |
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very nice
Tum Bin
Tum bin zindagi Aisi hai jaise
Shaakh ko Darakht se Lehron ko Samandar se
Dharkan ko Dil se Ansoo-on ko Ankhon se
Sitaron ko Asmaan se Hansi ko Labon se Judaa kardiya ho!
Woh Mera Kia Lagta Hai???
Dil chahta hai ke us se shikway shikayat karoon Lekin !
sochti hoon ke woh mera kia lagta hai?
Dil chahta hai ke us se toot kar pyar karoon Lekin !
sochti hoon ke woh mera kia lagta hai?
Dil chahta hai ke us ke seenay se lag kar so jaoon Lekin !
sochti hoon ke woh mera kia lagta hai?
Dil chahta hai us se laroon aur phir manaoon Lekin !
sochti hoon ke woh mera kia lagta hai?
Dil chahta hai ke us ko aaj bata he doon Ke
... woh he mera sub kuch lagta hai !!
Kyoun???
Bhula chuki thee mein ussay
Phir woh meri duniya mein aaya kyoun?
Joo sapnay rooth gaye thay mujh say
Unn sapnon ko in ankhon mein jagaya kyoun?
Mita chuki thee woh hansi apnay honton say
Najaanay uss nay phir hansaya kyoun?
Mera dil jo dharakna bhool chuka tha
Iss pagal dil ko dharkaya kyoun?"
Woh Kaun Tha???
Woh jo bhi tha Meri pehchan tha
Meri jo shairi thee Woh uska unwan tha
Log kuch bhi kahain lekin!
Woh to meri jaan tha
Chaha tha usko toot kar
Magar woh iss say anjan tha
Bhool jaaoon kaisay ussko
Dil mera nahi hai maanta!"
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«Reply #7 on: May 23, 2005, 12:01:18 PM » |
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very well.
karta hoon kyun uska intzaar main hamesha
aakir woh ajnabi mera kya lagta hai
iss janam mein to koi rishta nahi lekin
pichhle janam ka woh meet ho sakta hai
bhool chuka hoon jis humdum ko main
mere hoton ka woh sangeet ho sakta hai.
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«Reply #8 on: May 23, 2005, 03:24:52 PM » |
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i think you like it ?............ :D
Main Wohi Hoon Jise Tum Piyar Kiya Kerte The
Din Mein So Baar Mera Naam Liya Kerte The
Kiya Baat Hai Kiyoon Mujh Se Khaffa Bethe Ho
Kiya Kissi Aur Ko Dil Apna Dein Bethe Hoo
Faasale To Pehle Na Hua Kerte The AnMoL
Main Woh Hoon Jispe Tum Aetbaar Kiya Kerte the
Mujh ko Maaloom Hai Gum Hay Koi Sogaat Nahein
Tum Mujhe Apna Kahoo Aise Bhi Haalaat Nahein
Aur Ager Bhool Gaye Ho To Koi Baat Nahein
Zakham To Pehle Bhi Is Dil Pe Lagga Kerte The
Main Wohi Hoon Jise Tum Pyarrr Kiya Karte The
Din Mein So Baar Mera Naam Liya Kerte The
Dil Mein Aata Hai Tumhein Tadpa Doon
Dard Jo Tumne Diya Hai Wo Tumhein lauta Doon
Aur Ager Jurm Na Samnjho To Ye Dohra Doon
Tum Mujhe Hasil-E- Armaan Kaha Kerte The kya baat hai simran..... veryyy niceee... keep going dear |
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«Reply #9 on: May 23, 2005, 03:35:38 PM » |
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i think you like it ?............ :D
Main Wohi Hoon Jise Tum Piyar Kiya Kerte The
Din Mein So Baar Mera Naam Liya Kerte The
Kiya Baat Hai Kiyoon Mujh Se Khaffa Bethe Ho
Kiya Kissi Aur Ko Dil Apna Dein Bethe Hoo
Faasale To Pehle Na Hua Kerte The AnMoL
Main Woh Hoon Jispe Tum Aetbaar Kiya Kerte the
Mujh ko Maaloom Hai Gum Hay Koi Sogaat Nahein
Tum Mujhe Apna Kahoo Aise Bhi Haalaat Nahein
Aur Ager Bhool Gaye Ho To Koi Baat Nahein
Zakham To Pehle Bhi Is Dil Pe Lagga Kerte The
Main Wohi Hoon Jise Tum Pyarrr Kiya Karte The
Din Mein So Baar Mera Naam Liya Kerte The
Dil Mein Aata Hai Tumhein Tadpa Doon
Dard Jo Tumne Diya Hai Wo Tumhein lauta Doon
Aur Ager Jurm Na Samnjho To Ye Dohra Doon
Tum Mujhe Hasil-E- Armaan Kaha Kerte The beautiful simran!!!!!!! of course baki logo ne bhi acha likha hi!!! :D |
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«Reply #10 on: May 23, 2005, 09:39:53 PM » |
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Lakeron ki zuban to mai samajhta nahi,
Par itna to hai merey dil ko yakeen.
Ki koi ek lakeer to hai uskey naam ki,
Jisey laker-e-bewafaie ne kata hai Kaahein.
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«Reply #11 on: May 24, 2005, 04:41:38 PM » |
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thank you qutub ji,ishq mohabbat ji,meena sis,pallavi and fakhar thank you very much..................
SAANSO MEIN BHI SHAMIL HU,
LAHU MEIN BHI RAVA HU,
MAGAR MERE HAATHON KI
LAKEERO MEIN KAHA HU................
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«Reply #12 on: May 24, 2005, 05:23:43 PM » |
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i think you like it ?............ :D
Main Wohi Hoon Jise Tum Piyar Kiya Kerte The
Din Mein So Baar Mera Naam Liya Kerte The
Kiya Baat Hai Kiyoon Mujh Se Khaffa Bethe Ho
Kiya Kissi Aur Ko Dil Apna Dein Bethe Hoo
Faasale To Pehle Na Hua Kerte The AnMoL
Main Woh Hoon Jispe Tum Aetbaar Kiya Kerte the
Mujh ko Maaloom Hai Gum Hay Koi Sogaat Nahein
Tum Mujhe Apna Kahoo Aise Bhi Haalaat Nahein
Aur Ager Bhool Gaye Ho To Koi Baat Nahein
Zakham To Pehle Bhi Is Dil Pe Lagga Kerte The
Main Wohi Hoon Jise Tum Pyarrr Kiya Karte The
Din Mein So Baar Mera Naam Liya Kerte The
Dil Mein Aata Hai Tumhein Tadpa Doon
Dard Jo Tumne Diya Hai Wo Tumhein lauta Doon
Aur Ager Jurm Na Samnjho To Ye Dohra Doon
Tum Mujhe Hasil-E- Armaan Kaha Kerte The bohat khoob simran sis  nice tanha,ishq and all. |
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«Reply #13 on: May 24, 2005, 09:13:14 PM » |
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Thanx simran ji..........................
aap ney bhi theek hi likha hai......................
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«Reply #14 on: May 25, 2005, 10:19:55 AM » |
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bahoot khoob nice_off_me..
Well said.. MAGAR MERE HAATHON KI
LAKEERO MEIN KAHA HU. ..
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