Kitna Sharaarti Wo Aashiq Deewana Tha.....KOYAL

by KOYAL46 on September 08, 2010, 01:00:34 PM
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Kitna Sharaarti Wo Aashiq Deewana Tha.....


Mere hushn ka wo EK deewaana tha
Mujhe chhedna ussko bahut bhata tha
 
Wo Kagaz pe Meri tasveer banaata  tha
Naak tedhi-Aankh bhengee banata tha
 
Kitna sharaarti wo aashiq deewana tha
Mein thee shamaa uski wo parwanaa tha

Mere he khayaalon me wo kho jaataa tha
Jidhar ho meri nigaah usska aanajaana tha

O'sakhee kitna anokha mera deewaana tha
Meri aankhein he usska maieykhaanaa tha

Haan aysa ajeebo-gareeb wo deewaanaa tha
Mera deedaar he sakhee usska khazaanaa tha


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«Reply #1 on: September 08, 2010, 01:07:11 PM »
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aahaaaaaaaa.......

bht pyara tera aashiq deewana tha
jiske dil me tujhe bas jana tha

bht hi pyari kavita gudiya.....bht hi swtttt...
kisiki yaad dila di teri poem ne... love4 love4 love4
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«Reply #2 on: September 08, 2010, 01:35:35 PM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       KOYAL JI......

KITNA SHARAARTI WO AASHIQ DEEWANA THA

USKA ROJ KA RUTHNA THA
MERA ROJ KA MANANA THA

USKA MUJHKO ROJ KA INTEZAAR KARANA THA
PUCHHNE PAR ROJ KA ACHHA BAHANA BANANA THA

HARDAM USKA MOOD MASTI ME RAHENE KA THA
APNI MEETI MEETI BATON SE MUJHKO LUBANA THA

USKA SAATH HONE SE MUJHE KISI KA FIKAR NAHI KARNA THA
MERE LIYE HI USKA JEENA THA MERE HI LIYE USKA MARNA THA

KITNA SHARAARTI WO AASHIQ DEEWANA THA...................




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«Reply #3 on: September 08, 2010, 03:19:44 PM »
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Thanks a lot Anu-di.....  icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

ab ye khatta kaise ho gayee mujhse......kiski yaad dilaa di....... Winking Winking Winking
Mann mai aanand ki lehar daudi ....... Usual Smile love4 love4 love4
ya.......... crybaby2 tearyeyed tearyeyed

Bataana jaroor meri pyari-di......
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«Reply #4 on: September 08, 2010, 07:00:32 PM »
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bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne Koyal.. bahut bahut khoob... yunhi likhte rahiye...!!!

 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #5 on: September 08, 2010, 07:41:55 PM »
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koyal Jee Aadaab!

Aapki nayi kook dekhi humne soche ke chaliye kuch daad dete chaleN......

Aapke khayaal achche hai.... Daad

Hum kuch changing kiye hai dekh lijiye.... Waise humne aapke kisi khayaal ya shabd ko eidt naih kiya hai...

Bus lines niche uper kii hai..
Hope you Don't mind....... Usual Smile           



Kitna Sharaarti Wo Aashiq Deewana Tha.....


Mere hushn ka wo EK deewaana tha
Woh kagaaz pe meri tasver banaata tha

Mujhe chhedna ussko bahut bhata tha
Naak tedhi-Aankh bhengee banata tha
 
Kitna sharaarti wo aashiq dewaana tha
Mein thee shamaa uski wo parwanaa tha

Mere he khayaalon me wo kho jaataa tha
Jidhar ho meri nigaah usska aanajaana tha

O'sakhee kitna meri ankho ka deewaana tha
Meri aankhein he usska maieykhaanaa tha

Haan aysa ajeebo-gareeb wo deewaanaa tha
Mera deedaar he sakhee usska khazaanaa tha



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«Reply #6 on: September 08, 2010, 08:48:32 PM »
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Koyal si teri Boli .... Ku Ku Ku kU ...

Utni hi methi teri poem ... Oh ho oh Ho ...

Koyal nyc thoughts ...... kon si purani baton ko yaad kar rehi ho aur karva bi rehi ho yaar

VAise ek baat bata ........ DEEWANA THA .... ka kya matlab HAI ... kyon nhi ..... tll me ... icon_scratch... ab bi hona chiye kyon ?
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«Reply #7 on: September 09, 2010, 05:12:29 PM »
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oye hoye.........kya baat hai koyal......haaye deewani...ye toh btao tum kis deewaane ki deewani ho...... Winking Winking....ab neel ki baat ka jwaab toh tmhe dena hi hoga koyal.....deewana tha kyu likha........diwana hai bolo.......aur neel se pucho ki kin baaton ki yaad aa gayi neel ko ye kavita padhkar.... Grin
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«Reply #8 on: September 10, 2010, 02:32:19 AM »
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Aree nikhaar yaar samza karo jaan ...... Koyal ki baat ho rehi yaha to ussi se poochte hai na ............ muze kahan beech main le aaye .......

Koyal bolo ji ....v r vaiting !!!!   
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«Reply #9 on: September 12, 2010, 01:13:32 AM »
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very nice.......................


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«Reply #10 on: November 27, 2010, 09:04:27 AM »
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Thanks a lot Cara ji aapne samay diya aur sunder lines likhi....mast hai ji......
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       KOYAL JI......

KITNA SHARAARTI WO AASHIQ DEEWANA THA

USKA ROJ KA RUTHNA THA
MERA ROJ KA MANANA THA

USKA MUJHKO ROJ KA INTEZAAR KARANA THA
PUCHHNE PAR ROJ KA ACHHA BAHANA BANANA THA

HARDAM USKA MOOD MASTI ME RAHENE KA THA
APNI MEETI MEETI BATON SE MUJHKO LUBANA THA

USKA SAATH HONE SE MUJHE KISI KA FIKAR NAHI KARNA THA
MERE LIYE HI USKA JEENA THA MERE HI LIYE USKA MARNA THA

KITNA SHARAARTI WO AASHIQ DEEWANA THA...................





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