Ajeeb daastaan hai Yeh.....Koyal :Shayri for Dard -e- Judai

KOYAL46

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Ajeeb daastaan hai Yeh

Raaste juda-juda ho gaye they hammare
Par aaj ek moud pe mulaakaat ho gayee
Puchha unhone kya haal hain tumhaare
Sakhee Aankhein n jhuki par juba b na khuli

Naino se naino ki huyee baat kuchh lambi
Daastane dard deedon mein dee dikhayee
Aankhein hamaari aasooyon se bhar aayee
Baarish ki bundo sang bahe,ashru diye na dikhayi

Jaane kya humne kahi jaane kya ussne kahi
Nahi jaanti wo kitni samjhe mere dil ki baat
Main jo samjhi sunnati hu tujhe meri sakhee
Ban gayee hai jo eetihaas aaj battati hu tujhe

"Majburiyon ki mazdhaar me machal rahi hai jindagi
Uljhano mein uulajh kar uoob gayee hai yeh jindagi
Tum-bin soona-soona hai yeh sunder sansaar sajnee
Tum se juda ho key jee nahi raha hu mein ye zindagi..."

Eysee kahaani hai yeh kahaan shuru kahaan khatam
Ajeeb daastaan hai Yeh, Na wo samajh sake na hum…..


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Re: Ajeeb daastaan hai Yeh.....Koyal

«Reply #1 on: July 17, 2010, 06:29:37 AM »

me hulchal macha gai koyal tumhari ye post.... Clapping Smiley


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Re: Ajeeb daastaan hai Yeh.....Koyal

«Reply #2 on: July 17, 2010, 07:32:37 AM »

Quote from: KOYAL46 on July 17, 2010, 06:24:11 AM

Aapki Nazm ke ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye...Koyal Ji...dil se daad !


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Re: Ajeeb daastaan hai Yeh.....Koyal

«Reply #3 on: July 17, 2010, 12:45:22 PM »

Wah Koyal ji waah... bahut hi khoobsurat kavita likhi hai aapne.. bahut hi sunadar... aapki ye peshkash kuch alag si hai aur bahut pyaari hai... bahut achcha likh rahe hain aap.. yunhi likhte rahiye... bahut bahut khoob...!!!


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Re: Ajeeb daastaan hai Yeh.....Koyal

«Reply #4 on: July 17, 2010, 08:58:08 PM »

Wah bahut khoob Koyal sis.heart touching creation.excellent icon_thumleft


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Re: Ajeeb daastaan hai Yeh.....Koyal

«Reply #5 on: July 18, 2010, 05:03:41 AM »

Tamaaro khubaj aabhaar Annamika-di.....tamne gamyu atle maaru lakhaan safal thai gayu..... icon_flower

Tame pan khoobaj saras lakho chho...!!!!

Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on July 17, 2010, 06:29:37 AM

me hulchal macha gai koyal tumhari ye post.... Clapping Smiley


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Re: Ajeeb daastaan hai Yeh.....Koyal

«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2010, 12:32:29 PM »

Aapka bhi bahut shukriya Naresh-ji.......prasansa k do shabd achhe lagte hain..... icon_flower

Quote from: Anshumali on July 17, 2010, 07:32:37 AM

Aapki Nazm ke ehsaas dil ko chhu gaye...Koyal Ji...dil se daad !


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Re: Ajeeb daastaan hai Yeh.....Koyal

«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2010, 12:47:18 PM »

Bahut Bahut Khoob Koyalji..


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