SNEH K RISHTE.....................KOYAL

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Sneh K Rishte

Maine Sneh kay beej boye
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha
Kuchh rishte ankurit huye
Apnepan ki urmi me panpe

Bade jatan se pyar ka pani
Ullaas kee urmee paa key
Romaance ki hawa me wo
Paudhe Lahraaye Lalhaye

Par jab samay ki aandhi chali
Ek-ek kar kay beekherne lage
Chaha tha pyar ka wat vriksh
Mile kuchh sookhe Danthall

Neeyatee kee iss vidha ko
Kaun kab samajh saka hai
Boya huaa sab kuchh tou
Kabhee nahi phal saka hai

Maine Sneh kay beej boye they
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha bhi thaa
Kuchh rishte ankurit bhee huye
Apnepan ki urmi pa kuchh panpe bhi
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2010, 08:58:13 PM »
Sneh K Rishte

Maine Sneh kay beej boye
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha
Kuchh rishte ankurit huye
Apnepan ki urmi me panpe

Bade jatan se pyar ka pani
Ullaas kee urmee paa key
Romaance ki hawa me wo
Paudhe Lahraaye Lalhaye

Par jab samay ki aandhi chali
Ek-ek kar kay beekherne lage
Chaha tha pyar ka wat vriksh
Mile kuchh sookhe Danthall

Neeyatee kee iss vidha ko
Kaun kab samajh saka hai
Boya huaa sab kuchh tou
Kabhee nahi phal saka hai

Maine Sneh kay beej boye they
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha bhi thaa
Kuchh rishte ankurit bhee huye
Apnepan ki urmi pa kuchh panpe bhi


Aapki kavita ke ehsaas dil ko chhoo gaye....Koyal Ji ! Bahut Khoob....kya baat hai ... ! dil se daad hazir hai...khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2010, 11:23:01 PM »
Wah wah wah Koyalji bahut shandaar kavita hai aapki...... Thumbs UP
BADE SARAL SHABDO MAI aapne jeevan ka sampurn darshan saakaar kar diya hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause

Yu niraash na hoiye
Mausam badlega
pyaar ka wat vriksh
bhee hoga kabhi aapka


Sneh K Rishte

Maine Sneh kay beej boye
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha
Kuchh rishte ankurit huye
Apnepan ki urmi me panpe

Bade jatan se pyar ka pani
Ullaas kee urmee paa key
Romaance ki hawa me wo
Paudhe Lahraaye Lalhaye

Par jab samay ki aandhi chali
Ek-ek kar kay beekherne lage
Chaha tha pyar ka wat vriksh
Mile kuchh sookhe Danthall

Neeyatee kee iss vidha ko
Kaun kab samajh saka hai
Boya huaa sab kuchh tou
Kabhee nahi phal saka hai

Maine Sneh kay beej boye they
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha bhi thaa
Kuchh rishte ankurit bhee huye
Apnepan ki urmi pa kuchh panpe bhi

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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2010, 11:32:49 PM »
Sneh K Rishte

Maine Sneh kay beej boye
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha
Kuchh rishte ankurit huye
Apnepan ki urmi me panpe

Bade jatan se pyar ka pani
Ullaas kee urmee paa key
Romaance ki hawa me wo
Paudhe Lahraaye Lalhaye

Par jab samay ki aandhi chali
Ek-ek kar kay beekherne lage
Chaha tha pyar ka wat vriksh
Mile kuchh sookhe Danthall

Neeyatee kee iss vidha ko
Kaun kab samajh saka hai
Boya huaa sab kuchh tou
Kabhee nahi phal saka hai

Maine Sneh kay beej boye they
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha bhi thaa
Kuchh rishte ankurit bhee huye
Apnepan ki urmi pa kuchh panpe bhi

Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoooooooooot hi sunder likha aapne badhai..koyal ji
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«Reply #4 on: July 11, 2010, 05:28:23 AM »
KOYAL BEHAD KHOOBSURAT OR SACHCHE JAZBAAT SE SANWARI HUI NAZM .........BANTE BIGADTE RISHTON KA DARD .....YA YOON
KAHEN JEEVAN KA SACH SAAMNE AA KHADA HUA HAI .......DHER
SARI BADHAI SWEEKAR KARO........

KHUSH RAHO...
KHUSHIYAN FAILAO.....


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«Reply #5 on: July 12, 2010, 12:38:21 AM »
Sneh K Rishte

Maine Sneh kay beej boye
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha
Kuchh rishte ankurit huye
Apnepan ki urmi me panpe

Bade jatan se pyar ka pani
Ullaas kee urmee paa key
Romaance ki hawa me wo
Paudhe Lahraaye Lalhaye

Par jab samay ki aandhi chali
Ek-ek kar kay beekherne lage
Chaha tha pyar ka wat vriksh
Mile kuchh sookhe Danthall

Neeyatee kee iss vidha ko
Kaun kab samajh saka hai
Boya huaa sab kuchh tou
Kabhee nahi phal saka hai

Maine Sneh kay beej boye they
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha bhi thaa
Kuchh rishte ankurit bhee huye
Apnepan ki urmi pa kuchh panpe bhi


Bahut khoob Koyal Ji
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2010, 12:05:57 PM »
Bahot hi achhi kavita likhi hai aapne Koyal-di. Gahre manobhavon ko sameti is rachna ke liye meri taraf badhaai sweekar karein.
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«Reply #7 on: July 12, 2010, 12:15:11 PM »
Wah Kya Baat Hai Koyal Sis.. Bhawaano Aur Dard Ko Lafzon Me Behad Sanjidgi Se utaara Hai aapne.. Aapki Yeh Rachna Mujhe Behad pasand aai.. Applause Applause

Daad Kuboooooooo Karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2010, 12:16:44 PM »
nice
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2010, 12:24:15 PM »
har rishta sach me itne pyaar se jiya jaye to kya baat ho
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«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2010, 12:58:02 PM »
Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Naresh-ji..... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower

Aapki kavita ke ehsaas dil ko chhoo gaye....Koyal Ji ! Bahut Khoob....kya baat hai ... ! dil se daad hazir hai...khush rahen....

apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2010, 01:17:38 PM »
Aapka tahe dil se aabhaar Smardia-ji.....
Aapse pratikriya prasansaa paa kavita safal ho jaati hai... icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
aAPKI LINES BHI SUNDER HAIN.... UMEED BANDHATI HAIN.... Applause Applause Applause
Wah wah wah Koyalji bahut shandaar kavita hai aapki...... Thumbs UP
BADE SARAL SHABDO MAI aapne jeevan ka sampurn darshan saakaar kar diya hai.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Applause

Yu niraash na hoiye
Mausam badlega
pyaar ka wat vriksh
bhee hoga kabhi aapka


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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2010, 01:20:48 PM »
Bahut Bahut Khoob Koyalji..

Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsaas!!!!

Dil Ko Chuti Hui...bahut Ache Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2010, 02:26:51 PM »
beautiful koyal. it was really gud. keep writing....
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2010, 05:52:50 PM »
aAPKA BAHUT-BAHUT DHANYAWAAD BEKARAR-JI.... icon_flower

Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahoooooooooot hi sunder likha aapne badhai..koyal ji

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