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KOYAL46
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Sneh K Rishte
Maine Sneh kay beej boye
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha
Kuchh rishte ankurit huye
Apnepan ki urmi me panpe
Bade jatan se pyar ka pani
Ullaas kee urmee paa key
Romaance ki hawa me wo
Paudhe Lahraaye Lalhaye
Par jab samay ki aandhi chali
Ek-ek kar kay beekherne lage
Chaha tha pyar ka wat vriksh
Mile kuchh sookhe Danthall
Neeyatee kee iss vidha ko
Kaun kab samajh saka hai
Boya huaa sab kuchh tou
Kabhee nahi phal saka hai
Maine Sneh kay beej boye they
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha bhi thaa
Kuchh rishte ankurit bhee huye
Apnepan ki urmi pa kuchh panpe bhi
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«Reply #1 on: July 10, 2010, 03:28:13 PM » |
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Sneh K Rishte
Maine Sneh kay beej boye
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha
Kuchh rishte ankurit huye
Apnepan ki urmi me panpe
Bade jatan se pyar ka pani
Ullaas kee urmee paa key
Romaance ki hawa me wo
Paudhe Lahraaye Lalhaye
Par jab samay ki aandhi chali
Ek-ek kar kay beekherne lage
Chaha tha pyar ka wat vriksh
Mile kuchh sookhe Danthall
Neeyatee kee iss vidha ko
Kaun kab samajh saka hai
Boya huaa sab kuchh tou
Kabhee nahi phal saka hai
Maine Sneh kay beej boye they
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha bhi thaa
Kuchh rishte ankurit bhee huye
Apnepan ki urmi pa kuchh panpe bhi
Aapki kavita ke ehsaas dil ko chhoo gaye....Koyal Ji ! Bahut Khoob....kya baat hai ... ! dil se daad hazir hai...khush rahen.... apna khayal rakhen... duaaon ke saath.... |
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«Reply #2 on: July 10, 2010, 05:53:01 PM » |
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«Reply #3 on: July 10, 2010, 06:02:49 PM » |
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«Reply #4 on: July 10, 2010, 11:58:23 PM » |
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KOYAL BEHAD KHOOBSURAT OR SACHCHE JAZBAAT SE SANWARI HUI NAZM .........BANTE BIGADTE RISHTON KA DARD .....YA YOON
KAHEN JEEVAN KA SACH SAAMNE AA KHADA HUA HAI .......DHER
SARI BADHAI SWEEKAR KARO........
KHUSH RAHO...
KHUSHIYAN FAILAO.....
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«Reply #5 on: July 11, 2010, 07:08:21 PM » |
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Sneh K Rishte
Maine Sneh kay beej boye
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha
Kuchh rishte ankurit huye
Apnepan ki urmi me panpe
Bade jatan se pyar ka pani
Ullaas kee urmee paa key
Romaance ki hawa me wo
Paudhe Lahraaye Lalhaye
Par jab samay ki aandhi chali
Ek-ek kar kay beekherne lage
Chaha tha pyar ka wat vriksh
Mile kuchh sookhe Danthall
Neeyatee kee iss vidha ko
Kaun kab samajh saka hai
Boya huaa sab kuchh tou
Kabhee nahi phal saka hai
Maine Sneh kay beej boye they
Bade pyaar se unhe sincha bhi thaa
Kuchh rishte ankurit bhee huye
Apnepan ki urmi pa kuchh panpe bhi
Bahut khoob Koyal Ji |
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«Reply #6 on: July 12, 2010, 06:35:57 AM » |
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Bahot hi achhi kavita likhi hai aapne Koyal-di. Gahre manobhavon ko sameti is rachna ke liye meri taraf badhaai sweekar karein.
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«Reply #8 on: July 12, 2010, 06:46:44 AM » |
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nice
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«Reply #9 on: July 12, 2010, 06:54:15 AM » |
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har rishta sach me itne pyaar se jiya jaye to kya baat ho
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #10 on: July 12, 2010, 07:28:02 AM » |
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Aapka bahut bahut shukriya Naresh-ji.....  Aapki kavita ke ehsaas dil ko chhoo gaye....Koyal Ji ! Bahut Khoob....kya baat hai ... ! dil se daad hazir hai...khush rahen....
apna khayal rakhen...
duaaon ke saath....
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«Reply #11 on: July 12, 2010, 07:47:38 AM » |
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«Reply #12 on: July 12, 2010, 07:50:48 AM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Koyalji..
Bahut Hi Khoobsurat Ehsaas!!!!
Dil Ko Chuti Hui...bahut Ache 
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«Reply #13 on: July 12, 2010, 08:56:51 AM » |
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beautiful koyal. it was really gud. keep writing....
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KOYAL46
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2010, 12:22:50 PM » |
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on eTI community..
