Koyi aisaa bhi hotaa hai, bhulaayaa hee naheen jaataa!

by abdbundeli on January 11, 2011, 12:53:40 PM
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Hamain lagtaa hai har lamhey, musallat wo rahey aataa!
Usey kahnaa hai jo, kahiye, ajab hotaa hai wah naataa!
Musalsal koshisheyn kar deykhiye har din bhulaaney kee;
Koyi aisaa bhi hotaa hai, bhulaayaa hee naheen jaataa!!

-abd bundeli
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«Reply #1 on: January 11, 2011, 05:12:54 PM »
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kya baat kya baat Bundeli sahab kya baat.
superb.
aapki rachnao ka mai deewaana hu kuki aap kam lafzon me bahut kuch kah jaate hain.
lajwaab peshkash.
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«Reply #2 on: January 11, 2011, 05:25:22 PM »
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sahi kaha abd ji aapne....laakh koshishon k bawjud nahin bhulaya jata......
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«Reply #3 on: January 12, 2011, 04:30:11 AM »
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khub likha hai..abdji

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«Reply #4 on: January 12, 2011, 11:27:39 AM »
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kya baat kya baat Bundeli sahab kya baat.
superb.
aapki rachnao ka mai deewaana hu kuki aap kam lafzon me bahut kuch kah jaate hain.
lajwaab peshkash.
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muddaten beet gai use bhulane ki kosis me
      har baar woh yaadon me aakar woh chidha jaata hai
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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'killbill' ji!

    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #5 on: January 12, 2011, 11:29:21 AM »
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sahi kaha abd ji aapne....laakh koshishon k bawjud nahin bhulaya jata......


Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'KasaK' ji!

    - abd bundeli
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«Reply #6 on: January 12, 2011, 11:30:29 AM »
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khub likha hai..abdji

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Bahut-bahut shukriyah, 'manjum' ji!

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«Reply #7 on: January 13, 2011, 10:00:07 AM »
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Bahut Khub Sir
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«Reply #8 on: January 13, 2011, 11:37:35 AM »
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Kya Baat Hai...
Bahut Khub Abd Babu...

Khush Rahiye...

~Shihab~


Shukriyah Shihab ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #9 on: January 13, 2011, 11:41:39 AM »
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Bahut Khub Sir

Shukriyah Rishi ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #10 on: January 17, 2011, 06:55:16 AM »
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ABD Ji aapka Har Sher Qaatilaana Hota Hai.. Ehasaason Ko Lafzon me Pirona koi aapse seekhe.. bahut Bahut khoooooooob.. Applause Applause



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«Reply #11 on: January 17, 2011, 09:44:15 AM »
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ABD Ji aapka Har Sher Qaatilaana Hota Hai.. Ehasaason Ko Lafzon me Pirona koi aapse seekhe.. bahut Bahut khoooooooob.. Applause Applause

**~** Mann **~**

Shukriyah 'Mann' ji! Bahut-bahut shukriyah!

                 - abd bundeli
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«Reply #12 on: January 17, 2011, 03:22:50 PM »
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Hamain lagtaa hai har lamhey, musallat wo rahey aataa!
Usey kahnaa hai jo, kahiye, ajab hotaa hai wah naataa!
Musalsal koshisheyn kar deykhiye har din bhulaaney kee;
Koyi aisaa bhi hotaa hai, bhulaayaa hee naheen jaataa!!

-abd bundeli


Haan Koyi aisa bi hota jisse bhulaya nahi jaata...!!  Usual Smile Accha likha hai aapne uncle ji.....
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«Reply #13 on: January 17, 2011, 03:54:40 PM »
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Haan Koyi aisa bi hota jisse bhulaya nahi jaata...!!  Usual Smile Accha likha hai aapne uncle ji.....
Thanks 'malli'! LOTS OF THANKS!

A poem written by me quite long ago is sparkling back into my mind: here is one of its stanzas:

I’m forlorn, thirsty from ages!
I have been cheated, by gauges!
Let me, enjoy my freedom now:
In perfect calm; free from rages!

   Let’s live our life, as we want to:
   In bright sunlight, or evening dim!
      Fill me:
         From bottom, to my brim!


                - abd bundeli / G.R.Prakash

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